Unwinding As The Day Ends

A Good Tired

Calm and relaxed almost still

Except for my hands that type away

My mind is at rest

What is it to see but not be seen ?

To hear but not be heard ?

The will of one person that is so different than that of another

Inspired by art or a wimsical note

My thoughts travel the speed of light

Other people not interested in anything of the sort

They go on their merry way to find what pleases them the most

It is not to understand the nature at hand ?

To only realize we are different birds that fly

We relate in many ways and survive in the wild

Neither friend or foe

Just one of many that pass by each day

Oh to bring in the charm of harmony

So that we may for once sing the same tune

Wondering as it may be

Neither time nor place is right

So we both fly away

My hope is to meet another day

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WD Curry 111 4 years ago from Space Coast

I loved this, but I am an incurable romantic. I think I have been winding down too early lately. I needed to slow those thoughts down.


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Princess Prisca 4 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

DREAM ON,

Nice work! I like it. (I too step to the beat of a very different drummer...)

I have the same hope, to meet another day. I want to add; and have plenty to say about why we should stay.

Blessings!

Ciao...Princess Prisca


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mljdgulley354 4 years ago

Beautiful poem with so much truth. My hope to meet another day is powerful message. Have a Happy and Joyous Easter.


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

and maybe on the day you meet again, there will be harmony and you will meld together as one thought. nice hub!


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Princess Prisca 4 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

DREAM ON,

I just love it!!! Nice Work!!!

You are a wonderfully talented writer, I always enjoy my visits to your hub space.

On the last line, I have an addition, only if you don't mind?

So we both fly away

My hope is to meet another day

Next time, we can make plans to stay.

(Don't get me wrong, I am not by any means trying to rewrite your already 'great poem' ~ I just want them to fly away together!)

Blessings!

Ciao...Princess Prisca


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Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

I can see the wheels of your mind turning here. What a lovely line this is:

"o that we may for once sing the same tune. . . "

It's a dream of life - to sing the same lyrics to the same tune with another human.


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poeticColor22 4 years ago from The Coast

I just got on to read some of my old poems since i haven't been on in quite a while and i saw this lovely tidbit and felt i must give it a read before i signed off. The title intrigued me :} . Lovely little bit nestled in leaves of truth. Beautiful as always.

-your fellow emotion enthusiast poeticColor22 :}


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Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

I can see the wheels of your mind turning here. What a lovely line this is:

"o that we may for once sing the same tune. . . "

It's a dream of life - to sing the same lyrics to the same tune with another human.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

WD Curry 111 A nice way to find peace with ourselves.Princess Prisca I love being a free spirit.I also love your ending too.Now I read this poem with both endings thanks to you.mljdgulley 354 I love leaving my heart open for others to see inside.I hope to bring out more goodness and lots of pride.I hope your Easter is extra special so it may stand out from years to come as a memorable one.Princess Prisca I always love a good ending.You make me want to pass that on to the world that we can all be happy with each other.Nellieanna I wonder if it is the constant changing of tunes that keep life interesting and fresh.poeticColor22 So nice to see you and what a great surprise.I hope you smile more than ever.Nellieanna I never had so many comments to appreciate and enjoy.You have all made my Easter grand where I feel like the Easter bunny left friendship and fun in a special Easter speckled hub.May you all enjoy a happy and safe Easter.


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

Beautiful, really beautiful. It made me think of my 82 yr old sister in law, when asked ´how are you?´

She always replies. ´Everyday above ground is a good day, thank you´.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick She is so right.I always listen to my elders.Sometimes it just takes years to sink into my head.That is why they repeat it over and over again.I thought they forgot what they said.It was me who didn't remember until now.How lucky we are to share our love with everyone.You would make any sister proud.I never had a sister and you would keep everyone guessing and laughing.I guess that is what sisters are for.To adore.Enjoy another wonderful day.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

love the soothing effect this poem brings...and this will be my poem of the day as i will bid the day adieu...good night...


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

raciniwa I love when you read a poem and you laugh and smile.You can relate to something someone else has done and you can picture yourself doing the same thing.The writer leaves knowing they have touched someone with an experience that moved them.The reader leaves with a wonderful feeling they are not alone in the world and can share the strangest of experiences with the world.Both leave happy.Thanx and adieu to you too.


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Sweet Chococarrie 4 years ago from My Heart To Yours

I like most this line ''We relate in many ways and survive in the wild'' just so true and no wonder you did had a good tired, thanks for the beautiful sharing.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Sweet Chococarrie We can learn so much from each other but more often than not we fight and find ways to disagree.Thanx for your wonderful comment.


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Sweet Chococarrie 4 years ago from My Heart To Yours

Welcome and many thanks for the feedback of my reply i always enjoy reading both your hubs and your comment, Thank You Very Much.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Sweet Chococarrie I don't think people(myself included) spend enough time thanking all the people who change our lives for the better.We are to busy trying to fight the wrongs in life so that we may feel like we have accomplished something great.When all along if we forget the bad and reenforce the good we would be so much better off.A hard lesson to learn but years later I think I get it.It is never to late to try to do the right thing and spend time with all the people who really do matter.With great appreciation and Thank You's that never have to stop.May your night only begin to feel wonderful like it should.


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Sweet Chococarrie 4 years ago from My Heart To Yours

Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback, i do agree that nothings' too late for doing the right thing for the many wonderful people who did help us around to thank and appreciate, it matters a lot, i'm happy for that idea, i wish you more good lucks. Best Regards.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Sweet chococarrie What beauty I see in the world.Then to pass that beauty on to another.As we both share the wonderful world our hearts are one and life comes together.Peace finds its way and life is changed for the better for one more day.Thanx for all your fun and reflection.

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