Upheavel

Losing on self control
vanity tears a hole
hollow as my soul
eroding faith,
drowned by disbelief
indwelling demons
blessed by this curse

surrounded by sorrow
joy lies deeply burrowed
repressed emotions
toward an untrue devotion
asphyxiated dreams tangled in a silent scream
a paradigm of insanity
devoid of mental acuity
lost in a vast oblivion
shrouded by death and fear

no colours
its as if i am blind
immune to happiness
the emptiness inside is killing me
like a fading light in the dark
Ignite the spark
rid me of this despair
deliver me from this sinful weight of mine..

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misslee 5 years ago from Beverly Hills, CA

Your work completely captivates me, I hope you keep writing :)


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sofs 5 years ago

Wow! this is deep, heavy and emotionally loaded poem. Written with understanding and knowledge of the struggles of the mind.It just needs faith in yourself to come out of this deep despair and emptiness. Best wishes!


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h.a.chauhdary 5 years ago from Australia Author

@mislee: thank you so much.

@sofs: yup, it came out of the deep, demented caverns of my brain. lol.


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

this is as sofs said deep and heavy with emotion a wonderful poem that captured my mind immediately


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La Papillon 5 years ago from Melbourne, Australia

Your poems are beautifully fluent ;)

I look forward to reading more of your future work.

Cheers, Louise :)

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