Upon My Timeline

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If I could go back upon my timeline

And have a chat with me

I'd start near the beginning

when I was barely three


Love sweet girl is needed most

For the ones who soon will fail you

Give it quick thats the trick

And let forgiveness follow


And when your head is swimming

A game of hormones winning

Remember there will be many

Don't pin your life on any


Please know young lady

You've been told a very vicious lie

There is no soul mate, nor forever

Better to delight in each and every


I fear you've not been listening love

So I'll say it once again

All love is good you must not judge it

Fall in as often as you can


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Lynetta Baker 5 years ago

Your poem was very truthful and honest.I thoroughly enjoyed it.Lynetta Baker


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thank you Lynetta. I endeavor to be.


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flying_fish 5 years ago from GTA

How beautifully succinct - I loved it.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thank you flying fish :)


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

How very sad and reflective or reflective abd sad, but also very touching.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Sad huh? Wasn't trying to be.


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Love without regret takes bravery and a little bit of Stockholm syndrome,lol.;)


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

That is apt MA, as we are held captive in love. Aren't we?


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

Maybe I'm too bloody senitive.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Awww TL, you can be sad for me, as I generally don't let myself. At least not over "old" stuff.


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alekhouse 5 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

Wow...what a thing to instill in your daughter.


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Tony DeLorger 5 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

We are our 'old stuff', here and as we are because of it. I always enjoy your catharsis, expressed beautifully as always. Tony


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Yes Alekhouse I can do that at least, since I don't know how to travel back in time. At nine, she is already wiser than I.

I just meant I don't let myself get sad over old lessons, just the recent ones. Thank you Tony; my keyboard is my cure.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Lovely! This is a sweet, soft side of you that is equally wonderful as your seductive side.

I really liked this, mucho! up/awesome/beautiful

all that good stuff


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks Ben :) I thought about posting it under my other account but it might have hurt somebody's feelings.


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saimpeter 5 years ago from London

Hay spectacular poem i enjoyed a lot thanks for sharing such nice stuff


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Wise words for your inner child, but I wonder what her reaction would be? Might make a nice companion piece to this one; the three year olds reply.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thank you Saim, I'm glad you liked it.

I'm not very good at writing poetry on demand Doug. Usually what I write is already there waiting to be put down. Maybe if I'm feeling childish I could pull it off. Thanks for coming by for a read.


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

I hear ya, I'm the same way. Doing requests is for lounge singers. Just thought I'd throw it out there. Always entertaining to stop in.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I actually wish I could do that. I try for birthdays and such but its like pulling out my own teeth. :P


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What Is Q 5 years ago from Tennessee

Lovely piece, Randy. And that's great advice to go back through time to give yourself. I have no idea what I'd say to a 3 year-old version of me. He'd probably have a few suggestions for me, though. I was smarter at that age.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Funny WIQ and true. I aspire to be more like my children all the time. They are so resilient and quick to forgive.


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago

Randy, most entertaining read, here...and true. You have surely sparked some thoughts about what I would say to the three year old me...If I could have listened at that age, I think I would have had a very different life! Thanks!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

All our life lessons would be so much easier to forged if the older us were just there to lead the younger us. Sigh... Thanks for coming by for a read tnderhrt.


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Huntter Karu 5 years ago

Just beautiful! Thank you Randy :)


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks for reading HK.


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attemptedhumour 5 years ago from Australia

Illuminating a murky past, with a bright realistic future, is a message worth heeding.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Yes even if just to say, "chin up, there is a happy ending." Thanks attemptedhumour.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

A great poem and thanks for sharing.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks Eiddwen, I'm glad you liked it.


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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

The hope you muster in this brings about a desire to instill this very sentiment into my own lil girls. I fear time travel will long in the coming and I won't have the benefit of it.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Perhaps if we teach our lessons to our offspring they won't have to learn the same ones. Ahhhh, progress.


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Enigmatic Me 5 years ago from East Coast Canada

Well we hope...then we have to come up with stuff on the fly when they encounter things we never did....which will be pretty much everything cause I have never lived as a woman... whatchya gonna do?

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