Vacation Blues... A NiaG Poem

Sun in my face

Don’t wanna leave this place

That erases the life I’m used to

Sand ‘tween my toes

Nobody knows

The escape I’d like to do

The beach calls my name

It’s driving me insane

Asking me to stay permanently

If only I can stay

For more than a week and a day

The blues and stress I carry will flee

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CloudExplorer 5 years ago from New York City

I like this poem,its short sweet and leaves me with an air of wanting to return to a vacation spot myself. I know its about leaving one but I always craze the moment of return. Dreading the departure day is something I try not to think about while I'm on vacation, because I try not to get to attached. Nice! Voted up.

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NiaG 5 years ago from Louisville, KY Author

Wow! Thanks CloudExplorer. I appreciate the info and advice. Do you mean just placing more pictures throughout?

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