Valentine's Day Poem Written In Haiku Style

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Two hearts intertwined

Celebrating Valentine’s

Embracing each other

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Romantic evening

Passionate cupidity

Surreal lovemaking

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Always yours my love

Every day with you special

All moments treasured

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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Poogranma, Thanks, glad you liked it.


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Poohgranma 4 years ago from On the edge

Just perfection!


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

rebecca, Once you get the hang of it I'm sure you will be as addicted to haiku as I am.


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rebeccamealey 4 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

You have a real knack with Haiku! I am still trying!


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Martie, Ah yes a cabin and a fire what a wonderful thought. So glad you liked the haiku.


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

Beautiful. "Surreal lovemaking" brought to my mind a cabin with a cozy fire in the hearth and, and, and....

I better start looking for a Valentine... :)


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Vincent, Thank you so much again :)


Vincent Moore 5 years ago

I will just have to repeat myself and give you and extra comment from Vincent:-) Simply beautiful, full of heart and kisses, well done Susan, you hit my heart with this one.


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

missolive, Thank you. Glad you liked it.


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missolive 5 years ago from Texas

Beautiful and warm. I loved it! I'm a hopeless romantic!

Thank you for sharing!


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

A.A. Thank you so glad you liked it.

Senoritaa, Yes everyday can be Valentine's Day.

Frank, Thanks.

raciniwa, Thank you.

MM, Ruby, Lady E, and Brenda, Thank you all so much.


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A.A. Zavala 5 years ago from Texas

Short but sweet. Loved it!


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Senoritaa 5 years ago

Very sweet collection. I believe each day can be valentine's day when love is true and deep. A Haiku like this doesn't need to wait for Feb 14 to make an impact.


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Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

just sweet :)


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

you've said it all in just short words...more than words could ever say...magnificent...


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

So romantic - beautiful haiku poem and voted up!


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful Susan...Loved it..


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Lady_E 5 years ago from London, UK

Beautiful. I enjoyed it.


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

Your poem makes me wish I had a husband. sigh


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Thank you everyone. Sorry for not replying to each one of you, but I am a little pressed for time today. Want to let you know how much I do appreciate all the wonderful comments.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Beauitufl Haiku,thanks for sharing and here's to many more.

Take care and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

ChaplinSpeaks, and Audrey Thank you both.


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Deborah Brooks 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Bravo susan...just lovely and beautiful...I voted up and beautiful...debbie


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mythicalstorm273 5 years ago

Very pretty. As I read you brought a smile to my face as I thought about my life and the experiences I have had. I do not celebrate V-day, but for my boyfriend and me we take random days out of the year to show our love. The picture you painted shows a perfect love almost surreal, but yet it is something I have experienced with him. Just a wonderful love that brings about a quiet joy in your life together. Very nicely done. You are a brilliant poet!


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tillsontitan 5 years ago from New York

What a show of love. Each one more moving than the last.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A beautiful intimate picture you have painted Susan.

Thinking well ahead. Lol. But love is all year round aye.... :-)


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Loved every word, beautifully composed Susan, Bravo you have my heart:-)


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AudreyHowitt 5 years ago from California

Beautifully done Susan!


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ChaplinSpeaks 5 years ago from Charleston, South Carolina

Sounds like a true love story! Love it.


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada Author

Cardisa and Flora, Thank you both.


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FloraBreenRobison 5 years ago

Gorgeous, Susan.


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

So beautiful and gently flowing. There is a calmness about it as I picture two people in love.

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