Vampire - Blood Slave Part Two

The Old Slave Crone's Tale

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A ringing hum echoes pain

with each beat of my heart.

I feel the hurt.

My brain won’t start.

The fog within is so dense.

Nothing makes sense.

~

I wonder where I am.

What happened?

Only one eye opens

while the other screams in protest

as I try to open it, doing my best.

Failing.

~

An oppressive heat sucks the air from me.

I can’t breath and can barley see.

Everything is out of focus,

only shadows and smudges of darkness.

~

I feel a wetness wipe the mass of torment

that is half of my face.

I jerk back feeling my brain slosh within.

~

Darkness threatens to take me anew.

~

“There, there girl, be still.”

“You know he could kill.”

“You will soon wish he had

if you don’t go totally mad.”

~

I try to say “who are you?”

Only muffled whimpers come through.

~

“Do not try to speak.”

“You are still too weak.”

“You must be a very stupid child

to get the master good and riled.”

~

“He will finish turning you tonight,

so you better act right.”

“It will be bad enough

without him trying to be rough.”

~

“But then you have no idea what’s happening do you?"

“It was the same when it was I whom he went through.”

“So long ago now it seems

a lost life that was but a dream.”

“The life that was once mine.”

~

“I was just an ordinary village girl

some two hundred years ago.”

“I tried to resist just as you.”

“Got about the same results too.”

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“So listen up stupid girl.”

“Don’t fight what you can’t stop."

“If there is any hope left in your heart,

kill it now for it will only tear you apart."

~

“I know.”

“Let it go.”

“I held to hope

like a rope.”

~

“I escaped once.”

~

“He killed my mother,

my brothers,

my entire village.”

~

“All laid to waste,

all due to my selfish haste.”

~

I feel the hot stinging tears

fall upon me as her voice cracks.

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“He tore my father into upon the racks

and pissed on his fresh corpse from the chimney stack.”

~

“Don’t think he won’t do the same to you.”

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A blast of icy cold hits me as I hear the door open…

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To be Continued…

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Vix

a.k.a.

Rhonda Enrayne

  

 

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Comments 12 comments

inkwell780 6 years ago

Muse! Your writing never fails to bring a smile to my face! When I am down and I see you have a new hub my heart lightens and I devour every nuance you inflect. Your lines are unique, your style strong and adherent to a strict ingenuity. Why do you write so beautifully? Sigh... Sincerely Matthew, aka Little inky!!! =:)


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Inky - Thank you yet again for your kind words.


MrDSpade2 6 years ago

Well written, as the suspense keeps me wanting more, waiting for the continuation...


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

MrDSpade2 - Thanks :)... I can not be sure when the next installment will come as I don't know what will happen yet... next. Sadly, just when it was getting on a roll, sleep claimed me.


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bluejay900 6 years ago

That was really great! I love your detail, and the village's girl's story made me want to cry!


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Bluejay900 ~ Thanks for your sweet words. Yes, her story is sad. I wonder how she will react to events considering it.


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prey 6 years ago from places you should hope we never meet

Girl, great job indeed! Keep em coming!

Off to share this piece with many and vote up

then I must hunt, tis that time of day!


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Prey ~ I do thank you for visiting and for your kind words as I know how busy you are and what time it is... I too am about to fly off to find my nightly portion. I wish you happy hunting. I must add I recently visited your hub entitled "I Flaunt My Fangs Only to Feast" and it took my breath away.


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Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

Hi, each bit is a story on it's own, I love your poetry, I wish I could write a story but in poem form, nice one, cheers nell


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Hi Nell, thanks for dropping in. You are so sweet. Your kind words always bring a smile to my face. Thanks! :)


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Nat Amaral 5 years ago from BC Canada

Excellent, excellent work! A most enjoyable pience.


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Nat ~ Thank you for your most kind comment.

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