Vanilla Drops - a Bubbly Poem by Fehl Dungo

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She pours on the Radox

As the water shower drops

I’m her soap and bubbles

Bathing her curves and muffs..


She turns to me gently

And we float chest to chest

In the splash of water

My fingers pump in zest


I drown her in my lips

My kisses, her bubblebath

She roars in my ear

When I push my knee above


She ravish me insanely

“L” howls all over my veins

I’m sipping mocha latte

She’s nibbling crème brulee


Her lips below are soft

But we’re rocking wild and hard

My valley swirls her current

She hums honey like a god


She inhales me when I moan

I sing her music until dawn

Souls entwine together now

My lips have brushed my vow


Vanilla drops soak our skin

Between our legs lava ooze

She tells me how she loves me

This girl, she means my world



© by Fehl Dungo

Dedicated to Miss Mocha Latte



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I wrote this for my darling Cathy who loves Radox so much. She has been in my mind a lot lately and I've been thinking about our bubbly dreams together on the beach, on the pool, on the tub. Not a lot of water huh? :)

Vanilla Drops is deeper than what it rhymes here. My poems has many flavors lately. Now why is that...

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Angelme566 4 years ago

Oh my ..Blaise..Blaise..You moved a reader..you expressed things so boldly yet so beautiful ! Love and passion so intense in here...so hot , so driven ..wooooo..

you're such an effective writer..all lines dilates a constricted veins.. Voted up , awesome !


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

There ought to be a "sensual" button on your Hubs so we could all click it twice! Such sexy poetry!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Angel! How are you my friend? I hope they won't take away the pic or moderate this one lol Thanks for being the first here and your words make me so happy. From a fantastic poet yourself, I thank you so much for the great comments.

All lines dilate constricted veins? Wow! Your words are always intense and nice for cardio :) Thanks! xo


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi xstatic. haha does double clicking in rating counts?


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Wow! Can you do that? I just did. Now for my cold shower...


lilmama4273 4 years ago

a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. So much sexuality. It was great


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Your poem got me so wrapped up in the passion and bubbles and all that I even could smell vanilla in the air.


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secondimage 4 years ago from From a place lost in time and space

wow, how erotic! great poetry my friend, keep up the good work! up and awesom :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

What an erotic, passionate, steaming hot poem... wow! A double click on a 'sensual' button from me. NO. make it triple (eventually I'll get stuck to it clicking non-stop like crazy LOL)!


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

It's deeeep and has been expressed in such a way, you feel yourself involved there, that's the real beauty of a writer, kudos


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Erotica beautifully written! Vanilla drops, Hummmm........Awesome.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Oh OMG! I was with you in your shower. Whew, now I need a cold shower.

Ahh feeling cooler now. Voted up awesome and beautiful.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh wow, this is even better than the one you emailed me, Fehl. I love the picture in this... LOL. This is so sensual and romantic. Your words burst like soap bubbles on the skin of my imagination and seep inside... you are beautiful. I melt now...

I am in heaven reading this... thank you baby. I want to hug you so much right now. I love you Fehl. I'm your Miss Mocha Latte. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Xtatic thanks for the rates. lol

Hi lilmama! I’m so happy you enjoyed this. Have a sweet day. Thank you.

Hello Gypsy Rose. Thank you. I’m glad this brought you vanilla in the air..hehe You are awesome!

Hi Secondimage. I just read your poetry. You write so well yourself. Thank you.

Hello Max! hehehe as if there was sensual button lol but thank you. I’m always happy when you visit and read. I hope this has passed the moderation thing. lol

Hi Girishpuri. Kudos to your sweet poetry too. Cheers!

Hi Ruby. You are awesome my friend. Thank you so much.

OMG Writer20 can’t get enough of your Chocolate Delight poem. Hehe You’re awesome!

Hi baby! Oh wow, I know. :) This one has a picture. I’m glad you love the photo too. Took me ages to find that hehe. Reminds me of one photo where the strings were untied (smiles at you teasingly) :p

*hugs you so much now* I love you, too my Miss Mocha Latte. :) You are the vanilla in my cream. :)


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Cheeky Girl 4 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Holy triple mother of everything! This is hotter than sweet hot chilli sauce! Maybe even hotter! LOL!

I'll never think of Radox Bubble bath the same way again! Fehl, you just blew my freaking mind! LOL!

Ay caramba! You write like a driver exceeding the speed limit! I love it!

I just had a Question moderated for being too er - "conversational"!

The question was - "How old would you be if you didn't know how old you were?" Yeah, I am still smiling!

You made my day! Now time for that shower!... :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow I missed your holy-triples honey lol Even hotter than Tabasco? LOL

I’m addicted to her Radox..and to her. Why is that? (tease)

Oh gaadd you asked that? Seriously? Reminds me of one of my favorite philosophical and Theological questions… “Why is there SOMETHING instead of NOTHING?” LOL

Enjoy your shower. Don’t use too much Radox.. It’s late and you’re awake.


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Beautiful image - "She inhales me when I moan, I sing her music until dawn..."

Voted up and passionate :)


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

Oh blaise...... How wonderful. Every word is poetry.

´´This girl, she means my world....´´

Fabulous.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Martie! She is the most beautiful music for me.. :) I'm happy you loved this and liking it on Facebook too. God bless..

Hello my dear Dim! Poetry is so engaged to me lol You are fabulous!


KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

What a great sensual poem this is, paints a lovely picture indeed..so well described and captured.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you Katrine :)


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Awful Poet 4 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

I am beyond speechless`.


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

O dear, you evoke my senses.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

This one should be definitely going into poetry book collection number 2. Fehl, your poetry is so beautiful. Bold and sensual. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks Awful and Vinaya :)

Hi babe! My poetry book number 2 will be so much special.. :) You are so beautiful. xoxoxo Mwaaaaaaaaaaah!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Give me a moment, just need to catching my breath.

Wow!! Beautiful, sensual and so well done.


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STEVEW13 4 years ago from Norwich, England

This is an amazing poem, very sensual and thought provoking, definitely voted up :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Tobusiness! Breathe, take your time hehe Thanks for liking this.

Hello Steve! I'm happy you liked it and thanks for voting up


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michememe 4 years ago

This is too sexy! I loved it. Beautiful is an understatement.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

It is for someone so special to me..She is so sexy beautiful. :)

Thanks for the great words Mich!


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Freya Cesare 4 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Now, I am afraid to comment. Bold and sensual. Actually, really dangerous for me. Hahaha.

Vote up!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

LOL don't be afraid to comment Freya :) Dangerous? How? hehehe

Thank you for the nice words.


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Blaise ..you haven't written anything new..am waiting for that ! Regards :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Angel! Is Angel your real name? It suits you. Oh wow you're waiting for a new hub..Thank you! My next are halfly done. In the mean time, I' would just read yours and the others here :) Thank you for being a real fan. You got me too.

TC


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

Wow. Awesome words. Perfectly described passion. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Happy you liked it Carol :) Thank you.


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QudsiaP1 4 years ago

*stands up and applauds.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

wow thank you QudsiaP1 :)


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Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore

Super Sensual just like the pretty woman who wrote this:)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

hehe oh wow, do I look so sensual lol Thank you Cracknutcase! YOu are cracking amazing!


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lionel1 4 years ago

Wow, what a way to start "She pours on the Radox" I love it.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Radox is so special between me and the person I wrote this for... :) Thank you, Lionel. Man, you're great!


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Radox baby...... the Radox returns ... and more beautiful than ever... :)

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :)


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

hehehe Can you pass it on to me please so I can rub some on my favorite Chummy and Nippy :)

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! You are beautiful. XOXOXOXOXO


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Nippy and Chummy popping by to wave at you... hehehe :P

Off for my bubble bath.... This poetry sparkles as only you can make it, Fehl, my honeybunny. :)

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ^_^


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blaise25 2 years ago from close to you... Author

Holy boobsy I almost spilled my Milo here. hehehe I love it when you pass by like that and tease me with surprise :)

I'm really thinking Nippy and Chummy popping by and waving now LOL

MWaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

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