Vast Horizon (poem)

I wandered vast horizons

Of things that just might be

Urged on by the voices

Who fed the spirit of me

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Marvels were excited

Which soon became common place

Unwritten rules were challenged

Which few have dared to trace

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The sunrise of their purpose

Would find my shadow there

Feelings they would vote on

Where paths which I prepare

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And on and on I wandered

Lead by footsteps of some past

My own imagination

Toying with our memory

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Was this could this be the verge

Others lost had once searched for

Confused and bewildered as I

Seeding others’ destiny

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Then I turned around alone

Crying to faithful echoes

Of faces with reasons

Who could no longer follow

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Rage rage rage took my vision

As the specter of clouds

Masked the path to the unknown

And the safety of the route back

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Then from the vast horizon

Of things that just might be

Urged on by a blessed voice

Who fed the spirit of me

Comments 16 comments

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Oh, WOW!!! Awesome, Mh! I am blown away here.

And to top off your superb poem, you placed that powerful video . . . yes, indeed, there is power in His name : ) to break those chains.

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless you. In His Love Always , Faith Reaper


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

great poetry Mhatter.. i got to give you your props .. you write excellent poetry from my view.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Awesome thoughts here and you do it so well


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

This is so deep and powerful, beautifully done! Beautiful!


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W1totalk 3 years ago

Strong poem. Strengthening. Thank you.


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rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

Wow.........this is an amazing piece of work! Thank you for sharing. (Voted Up) -Rose


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Wow totally awesome......Bravo !


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

You show your mastery in this piece Martin. Wonderful work my friend. Voting up and sharing.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

This poem is especially poignant and the video is beautiful and powerful as the song relates....Wonderful..


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jabelufiroz 3 years ago from India

Great poetry MHATTER99.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Loved this. Super video.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

That was great poetry!


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

VERY well done. Things like this can make one think about deja vu.


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teaches12345 3 years ago

Thank you for this inspirational article. Love the video! Our paths often seem unclear, listening to the true voice leads us to the right place.


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Indian Chef 3 years ago from New Delhi India

Very well written poem


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shanmarie 8 months ago from Texas

I think that this might be my favorite one of yours. Although I admit I do enjoy the chuckles your limericks bring.

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