Veil of Illusion




Beyond the fringes of perception

Way before the echoes of time

Resides a door to eternity

That all who seek shall find

There, the darkness and light

with minds and souls do blend

The veil of illusion is lifted

No longer ones powerful friend

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pennyofheaven 6 years ago from New Zealand Author

I am glad you liked it Mark! Thanks for dropping by!


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pennyofheaven 6 years ago from New Zealand Author

Thank you Violetsun, Castle, Erin, Nayothora, Marina, and Suburban Poet. You are all too kind. It is very humbling to have such positive reviews from more skilled writers than myself. I am forever thankful!


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The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

This is deep... the veil of perception... the doors of consciousness...we are more brainwashed than we realize. I find myself constantly finding today's truths to be yesterday's lies. It didn't take many lines for you to reveal that you are knocking on the door of eternity and if you continue to knock it will open and you will find that your powerful friend in fact was your enemy...

Yes to up

Yes to awesome

Yes to you

You have attracted the thinkers Penny... the one's who wish to learn...


Marina Lester 6 years ago

Some beautiful lines here pennyofheaven, thank you for the read. With the blending of hearts and minds, we grow, so we must keep sharing! thank you!


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Nayothara 6 years ago

Sweet poem, with strong words, and the size of it is what I love the most, strong and can easily store in mind, also the beauty is the BEST! Awesome!


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Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland

Beautiful thoughts and your expression is delightful. I always enjoy your hubs! Namaste' dear Pennyof heaven!


scriber1 6 years ago

Indeed, self-witness is the beginning of understanding -- today, and throughout eternity.


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Castlepaloma 6 years ago from Saskatchewan, Canada

Good for you, many fans I see.

You flow like a light butterfly


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VioletSun 6 years ago from Oregon/ Name: Marie

Very nice poem! I liked these lines:

"Beyond the fringes of perception

Way before the echoes of time

Resides a door to eternity

That all who seek shall find"


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pennyofheaven 6 years ago from New Zealand Author

Thank you I am indeed enjoying the experience. Glad you enjoyed the poem!


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Petra Vlah 6 years ago from Los Angeles

Great poem; I especially like the idea of "the darkness and light of minds and soul do blend and the veil of illusion is lifted". Welcome to HP and enjoy the experience

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