Venom Fist

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Coldness of the Heart

Venom Fist

(Inspired by the movie “True Legend”)

If looks could kill

I would be in a standstill

Your stare gives a chill

Coldness nobody could fill


Your heart grows cold

Of sorrows untold

As betrayal and hatred unfold

Day by day you grow bold


You want to unleash the fist of fury

The enemies along the way

You want to extinguish, to bury

Heart go chilly everyday


No one can satiate

The lust for vengeance you felt

Emboldened by the stings

And the venomous flings


Oh, warrior of noble throb

When will you succumb?

To the cry of banishment

Who only wishes appeasement,


Until everything is lost

Of the bloodlust you boost

Until everything is obliterated

Until all the anger has subsided


Only then will you end

Everybody will then bend

And no one will tend

When the heart needs to mend


And later you’ll have known

What you’ve sown

So shall you reap

The desolation that you keep


Everything will be lost

What remains is the ghost

Of the haunted past

And forever it will last…

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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI

Awesome and interesting. You have some unique writings. Each one I enjoy.


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

Cresentmoon...i'm glad that you like it...thank you for dropping by...


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aware 5 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

liking what your writing.

ray


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

oh, thanks ray for dropping by...it's how i felt about the antagonist of the movie i watched...


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

interesting. Voted up!


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

oh, thank you Pdx for the vote of confidence...


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CloudExplorer 5 years ago from New York City

Nice, I like the combative consciousness these poetic words express, your definitely headed towards success with good poems such a s this one on hub. I love the ending video to cool stuff!

Oh and I watch fighting moving a great deal including the True legend, I'm sure you have seen IP Man, that was another great fighting movie. Thanks for sharing voted up.


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thank you for the wonderful comment...yeah, i love action movies especially martial arts...yes, i write anything that inspires me especially this one...a realization that a person if stripped of everything there would be nothing left but vengeance and hatred...


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Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

I have never seen this movie.. however, I do not need to in order to understand this. Great story telling, I really got to know the main character. Makes me want to check out the movie now! Great job!


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu Author

thanks...actually i was touched by the villain of the movie who was stripped of everything and was full of hatred...

thank you for dropping by...

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