WARNING (limerick)

My son better go back beware

So many-a man was lost there

Such songs would be sung

And bells would be rung

For victims of young lady’s stare


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Run away as fast as possible. :) Thanks for my evening laugh.


lovedoctor926 3 years ago

Lol @ Billy. funny body language.


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Errr - advice not taken - bells will be rung and songs will be sung - it's all in the game...


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epigramman 3 years ago

How true how true Sir Martin - and you're still the funniest man at the Hub (and also the most romantic) .... just got up for a pee, now back to bed , you were my poetic lullaby - Colin send warm wishes with his felines of fur at lake erie time 4:01am ontario canada


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Great funny one.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

You have a good sense of humor.I am sure you are fun to be with and fun to be around here.Thanks for this beautiful WARNING lol ..Women stare can kill and enliven!I voted up.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Beware the eyes of the Gorgon!


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Consider him warned!


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

That is for sure.....how wily we can be....

Sending you blessings and Angels this morning, Martin. Have a lovely week. :) ps


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

I think it is way too late

Her stare has sealed his fate.


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Awesome, thanks for this fun read !


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

He looks pretty ill at ease, I dare say.


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Tonipet 3 years ago from The City of Generals

Haha, I never tried doing that... I can't help giggle. Thank you, Martin. You give us a relaxing break every time - laughter! Blessings always:=)-Tonette


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Too late, i think he's caught......Funny....


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Ruchira 3 years ago from United States

Haha...that stare is vicious!!


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

I'm afraid that young man does not stand a chance!!


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AliciaC 3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

This is a great warning, Martin!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

It's those looks that get them every time.


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midget38 3 years ago from Singapore

Nah...women aren't that dangerous (at least, not all of them)! Funny as usual, Mhatter!


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picklesandrufus 3 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

So true. Perfect photo!


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

Lol...sooo true! Killer eyes!


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Born2care2001 3 years ago from Asheville NC

It amazes me how we men get paralyzed by that stare, isn't it? The worst part about it is you don't know you've been stung until it's too late. Poor guy! Great diddy Mhatter99!


dreamseeker2 3 years ago

Cute! Voted it up, of course! : )


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Packed with niceties of life.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

A look can tall you everything you need to know.


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

Ah--the pain after the look! Loved this!


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Sunshine625 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

The look...the leer...the stare. Watch out! :)

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