WAVES OF EMOTION

Walking on a deserted beach

   they come over me

   an instant reminder of the freedom I feel today.

Looking to the horizon

   the future seems infinite

   the fading sunset empowers my spirit

   knowing that tomorrow will come again.

A serene feeling

   a sense of peacefulness

   knowing each new day brings new happiness.

The mysterious future

   unknown to all

   a liberation from the expected

   allows me to wonder and wonder.

Revitalizing my soul

   the evening breeze

   captivating all my dreams at once

   I discover myself.

Waves of emotion

   promise new life

   again . . . seducing me one more time.

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SummerSurf 5 years ago

Love your work. I love the beach and can look at the sea for hours thinking.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

SummerSurf, I very much appreciate your heartfelt comment. Thank YOU!


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crystolite 5 years ago from Houston TX

This work is great and very emotional. Keep up the good work.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Thank you for your thoughtful comments crystolite!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Lovely work, passionate and free.

Simply emotional writing, thus the title.

Loved it :]


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Ben, Thank you again and again. I appreciate your heart-felt comments.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

I love your heartfelt passion and the wonderful way in which you have organised your poem. Beautiful picture too.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Thank you acaetnna for your wonderful comments.


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Loveslove 5 years ago from England

very emotional...lovely poem


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Thank you so much LL ~ I appreciate your comments!


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

Very nice poem, Sharyn. My first visit and I must say I like your writing very much. I'll follow you for sure.

Thanks for sharing such beautiful thoughts...


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hello bbnix,

So glad you stopped by and liked my work. Thank you for your wonderful comments. I look forward to reading your work as well.

Sharyn


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epigramman 5 years ago

... your poetic waves of emotion are really beautiful and profound ..... well, just like you!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Oh Epi, thank you for your kind words! You are so sweet!


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g82hug 5 years ago from San Pedro, CA

You write beautifully!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Aw g82hug, thank you so much! Have a beautiful day!

Sharyn


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Dear Sharon,

This was published as I was just joining HubPages... so glad I found it now.

Hope-filled, renewal, ebb and flow... just my random thoughts that come to mind as I read this, making me think that things slowly, ever so slowly come full circle as they are meant to... this is simply beautiful.

I may need to see what else you have in your archives, mar!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hi Maria,

Surprise! I have no problem with you digging in to the archives any time :) Thank you for your sweet comments. Let me know what else you find, lol. Have a great evening!

Sharyn


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

This is a beautiful poem. Glad I stumbled upon it today.


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christianajohan 4 years ago

I like the part when you say the mysterious future.

Our future will be a mysterious fate. I agree with you.

Very nice hub. Voted up and thank you.


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

This is just beautiful. You are a great poet.


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RealHousewife 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Oh this is beautiful! Great job Sharyn:))


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Happyboomernurse 4 years ago from South Carolina

Beautiful, inspirational poem that I found today because of Tammy's comment.

I love the ebb and flow of the words you chose which resonated so well with the ebb and flow of the ocean.

Voted up across the board except for funny.


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

nice use of imagery... loved the poem!!


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Sharyn's Slant 4 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Susan ~ christianajohan ~ Tammy ~ Kelly ~ Gail ~ Rahul

Thank you all so much for stopping by to read and comment. I am really happy that you enjoyed this, especially since it is different from my typical rhyming poetry. I appreciate your feedback and compliments.

Sharyn


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Rolly A Chabot 4 years ago from Alberta Canada

Hi Sharyn... love the passion in your words... so very well put together... you have a gift... Keep writing please.

Hugs from Canada


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

Beautiful compositions.


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Sharyn's Slant 4 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hi Rolly & Vinaya ~ I very much appreciate you both stopping by and leaving complimentary comments. Thank you!

Sharyn

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