WHAT I WANT FROM YOU

I want to roam my eyes over you

Viewing every beautiful aspect of your being

. . . to touch you

Sway against your body like a willow in the wind

I want to feel your naked limbs

Communicating

. . . to hold you so close

We don't know where my body ends and yours begins

I want to stare into your revealing eyes

And discover everything there is to know about you

. . . to feel your heart beat in rhythm with my own

Sending messages through every vein

I want idle moments with you

When we feel like we're the only two people on earth

. . . to see your smile, your happiness

As our lips meet again

I want to explore our passion

As if nothing else really matters

. . . to experience the full measure of my femininity

Bursting from my seams

I want to be captivated

In our private cocoon of mindless desire

Together, and without a doubt

I want to know

That never has anything else ever felt so right . . .


This is Sharyn's Slant

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Huntter Karu 5 years ago

Just beautiful Sharyn's Slant! Thanks for sharing :)


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Thank you so much Huntter ~ have a great day!


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Stan Fletcher 5 years ago from Nashville, TN

Steamy!!!!!!!


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ImChemist 5 years ago

What you want from me !


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mslizzee 5 years ago from Buncombe County, NC

Wow, it's sensual but sensitive. Very nice.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hey Stan ~ your "steamy" comment was flagged as spam. Ha

Thanks for stopping by!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Dear ImChemist ~ pretty sure I already asked for too much :) Thanks for reading . . .


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

mslizzee ~ I always appreciate your feedback. Thank you so much!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Hmmm, wish we could get what we want.

Sometimes we do I suppose

this was really good, and leaves me ONCE AGAIN reminiscing.

:]


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Cool Benny! Love to get you thinking :)


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

;]

i like being called benny

makes me feel loved

b-b-benny n the jets


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

b-b-b-b-benny, i thought the same thing

but i didn't know how old you were and if you ever heard the song? for all i know, you could be 56 years old and posted a pic from your teenage years :) ha

i, on the other hand, know the song well . . .

you are loved benny!


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

im 23 :]


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

me too :]


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

oh wow, that's odd

ha

if you have FB, my links on my profile


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

oh benny, benny, benny

X2 hun, X2

so sorry i fib'd

thought you'd catch it:)

i do have FB but is there an age limit to be your fan?


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

no? lol


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

glad u r laughing :)


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Feel free to add me, no age limitations. promise :]


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Chatkath 5 years ago from California

Very nice Sharyn, Nice change, things have been so tense lately, time to relax and enjoy a bit!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hi CK,

Thanks for your comments. Yes, this was a change :)

I was thinking about you because of the new hub I posted after this one. You'll see what I mean. Have a great day!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

This is very seducing and provocative! Very tantalizing wow!! GReat write

smiles :)

bella


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Another side of me :)

Thank you Bella for your wonderful comment!!!!!!


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

I'm in!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Oh Micky, what can I say. Thanks for reading :)


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Loveslove 5 years ago from England

WOW !! very steamy enjoyed very much...voted up !!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

LL,

Thanks for the UP! Yes, my "steamy" side comes out every once in a while:)


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izettl 5 years ago from The Great Northwest

sultry, sexy, and great!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Thank you SO much izettl ~ your comments are very much appreciated!


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Wow absolutely beautiful!!!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Thank you so much for the WOW Susan ~ I so appreciate your stopping by and commenting!


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epigramman 5 years ago

...well I want you to know that I never want you to stop this (your writing) under any circumstances (whatsover) and I want to know if I can take up permanent resisdence here - and forever be 'caressed' by the loving thought of your poetic mastery of words!!!!


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Epi Epi,

You absolutely can have what you WANT!!! You are so sweet ~ thank you for such thoughtful comments. You are the best!

Sharyn


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DTroth 5 years ago from My Little Hole In The Wall, HubPages, USA

Truly beautiful. It makes my heart ache.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hello DTroth ~ nice to meet you. Thanks for the great comments. I hope your heart "ache's" in a good way!

Sharyn


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DTroth 5 years ago from My Little Hole In The Wall, HubPages, USA

Thanks Sharyn (:


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

A beautiful poem and thank you so much for sharing and

I now look forward to reading more of your work.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Thank you so much Eiddwen for your comments and following. Very much appreciated. Have a wonderful day!

Sharyn


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epigramman 5 years ago

..this is the kind of hall of fame/world class writing which gets the epi-man all hot and bothered - and inspires his writing - so here I am once again - re-visiting a true classic in every sense of the carnal word - so what is it for me - a jump into my lake of Erie or a cold cold shower - lol lol 2:02 am lake erie time


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Hey Epi,

Glad you stopped by. If it was me, I'd jump in the lake cuz it's a little warmer than a "cold" shower . . . Not so shocking. Do you live in Ohio? Near? I hope you ended up having a restful sleep. Take care,

Sharyn


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epigramman 4 years ago

.....okay Sharon you know where to find me - I'm just across from you on the lake - get in your Miama Vice speedboat before the waters freeze over - and I will be waiting for you on the other side ....... lake erie time ontario canada 9:48am posting this beautiful declaration to my Facebook page with a direct link back here .....to your heart.


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Ardie 4 years ago from Neverland

And thanks to wonderful Epi I found this poem that was otherwise buried from my prying eyes. Sharyn, I had no idea you could write like this :) so steamy, sensual and loving at the same time.


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epigramman 4 years ago

Ardie!!!! Here she comes now in her boat - I can see Sharon coming ashore ................... ooh la la !!!!!


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

Wow.. now that is a poem! Very erotic and sensual! Bravo!


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VeronicaFarkas 4 years ago from Ohio, USA

Wow. This IS another side of you!

I enjoyed this one.

"...our private cocoon of mindless desire." Beautiful!

You're very creative & expressive. Loved the poem!


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sholland10 4 years ago from Southwest Missouri

Sharyn, this is beautiful! I think you and Epi might have a date. Oh, wouldn't it be beautiful if you met in the middle of the LAKE. Epi, you have to go half way... What a romantic date that would be. Maybe a little cold this time of year, but if you read this poem, I am sure it would heat up.

Voted and SHARED!


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homesteadbound 4 years ago from Texas

I absolutely loved this poem. The whole time I read this, thoughts of just me and my husband floated lusciously through my head.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

So very very beautiful Sharyn ; a true gem and I have to award you my 'up up and away.'

Take care and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh wow, this is so beautiful and full of emotion. You are a really great writer. This is romantic yet playful and sensual at the same time. I loved this hub. :)


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pedrn44 4 years ago from New Berlin Wisconsin

provocative, so very sensual and romantic. I truly appreciate your writing.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Beautifully done!


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

Wow SS I'm impressed!:)


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Sharyn's Slant 4 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Epi ~ you sure know how to make me feel good. I'm sorry I do not have a speed boat. Heck, I don't even have a car right now :( Some day! Thank you my friend for your comments and share.

Ardie ~ aw, I'm glad you found it. Thank you for your comments.

Tammy ~ so you liked this? :) Thanks for your great feedback!

Veronica ~ Ha, I warned it was "another side" of me. Thanks for your comments.

Susan ~ Love your comments, thank you so much!

Cindy ~ What a great comment - have fun with your husband, wink wink ;)

Eddy ~ great to see you. Thanks for your "up up and away" - very much appreciated.

Cathy ~ YOU are an extremely wonderful sensuous poetry writer so your comments are very special to me. Thank you!

pedrn~ so glad to see you again :) Thank you for your feedback. It gives me great confidence.

Audrey ~ thank you for stopping by to read and comment.

SS ~ WOW, I am glad that you are impressed. ha, you don't impress easily, do you? Thanks my friend!

THANK YOU EVERYONE! ALL YOUR SPECIAL FEEDBACK MAKES ME THINK I SHOULD DO ANOTHER PIECE LIKE THIS . . .


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homesteadbound 4 years ago from Texas

Hello, Sharyn! I featured this poem in my latest hub luv hub! Great poem!


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Sharyn's Slant 4 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA Author

Aw Cindy ~ thank you so much. I am honored. I will check it out soon. Thank you, thank you!!!

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