Waiting A Wonder (poem)

Waiting waiting

For one more wonder

Waiting waiting

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One more dream afloat

One more golden sunset

One more smile of hope

Waiting waiting

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Winter is approaching

The flocks are fling south

But there is a new one guiding the way

A face unfamiliar

As I just sit

Waiting waiting

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There must be a reason

The leaves which shared my kisses

Blossomed in imagination

Flavors of colors

Dying at my feet

Waiting waiting

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For what

What do they see

What do they know

Those dreams in the sky

Those pearls on the floor

One more trance

One more vision

One more it must be true

Waiting waiting

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Until the moment

Our propose is clear

I will be here

Waiting waiting

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janshares 3 years ago from Washington, DC

The longing in waiting is felt in this piece. Thank you for sharing such beauty. Peace to you.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Waiting A Wonder beautifully presented with a lovely photo, and the wait leads to anxiousness


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Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

This sounds so heartfelt. The emotion was so clear. Beautiful and awesome. My favourite work of yours.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

It is 2:00 AM. I am hoping and waiting for sleep. LOL

Beautiful word and music bring your poem to life.

Amazing unity!

DJ.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

I hear the Fall season in your words, Martin. Beautiful piece.


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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

What a beautiful poem. I like this!


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CraftytotheCore 3 years ago

Beautiful! Once again you've captured so much thought in a lovely poem.


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tillsontitan 3 years ago from New York

The approach of wonder is so evident. Will our purpose ever be clear? this is so beautiful Martin!

Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

As much as we would all like to think we are in control, there are times when all we can do is prepare and then wait. You captured it perfectly here, Martin.


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rebeccamealey 3 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

This is a beautifully written expression of hope and looking for what is coming our next. Voted awesome!


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LadyFiddler 3 years ago from Somewhere in the West

nice hub mhatter99


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Mh, such a lovely, hopeful piece here. And you are right about that waiting ... it is tough at times, but worth it!

Up and more and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Amazing and touching.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Lovely sentiments. Enjoyed.


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annart 3 years ago from SW England

Sometimes it's good to wait, to see what happens; when we're waiting, we observe more and appreciate more. Hopefully the waiting is worth it and we find the next of life's experiences and events enveloping us and making our lives all the richer. Lovely poem. Ann


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

As we all wait, there is something in the works just for us...

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