She swims into the night .............Verse

Go willingly my love
step gingerly into the sea and shiver
arms over bare breast's
such an elusive dream
I will stand alone and secretly watch
as you tilt your beauty back and smile
naked to the waist
your thighs as naked as the darkness itself
you stand knee deep in distrust
waist deep in solitude
thigh deep in doubt
and dive in
And you never return as you never came
to me to begin with



Dedicated to all women .

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whonunuwho 17 months ago from United States

Poignant and soulful my friend. Nice work, whonu.


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ahorseback 17 months ago Author

Thank you my friend !


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Ericdierker 17 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Took too many times to read this as my mind kept fluttering back to exceedingly joy filled moments of my time here on earth. Oh what beauty has been bestowed on us in women and nature. And your poetry brings it all together in lovely design.


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Nellieanna 17 months ago from TEXAS

Lovely. Just lovely.


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ahorseback 17 months ago Author

Eric , Yes , That's just what I' was thinking as I wrote .


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ahorseback 17 months ago Author

Thank you kind lady ! ......:-]


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always exploring 17 months ago from Southern Illinois

beautiful and vividly expressed....


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ahorseback 17 months ago Author

Hi Ruby , I appreciate that !


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BlossomSB 17 months ago from Victoria, Australia

Evocative and lovely.


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ahorseback 17 months ago Author

Blossom , Thank you kind lady !.........:-]


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CrisSp 16 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

Another soulful hub straight from the heart of a soulful writer. What women (and men) will not love such poignant creation!

Love from the sky to you Ed. ~


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ahorseback 16 months ago Author

Thank you Chris , I recently commented on those awesome writings of yours , you are so kind !......Muuuahhh !

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