Walk with you

 

Walk with you


I love you because…….

because…….

you

fill my heart.

The waves on the sea,

the kites in the air

remind me of you.

I feel sun on my skin,

I think,

soon,

we will walk

arm in arm,

the same sun will warm us.


There won't be time enough,

in a lifetime

to speak what is in our hearts.


My wish,

to walk with you,

and be by your side

for ever.

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whiteorchids 6 years ago from Tropical Paradise

Beautiful! I am speechless!


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

Thank you very much.


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James A Watkins 6 years ago from Chicago

What a lovely poem! Thank you very much for sharing this treasure with us. I couldn't have enjoyed it more.


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

Thank you very much for your comments. I am happy that you like it.


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Ghost Whisper 77 6 years ago from The U.S. Government protects Nazi War Criminals

I stopped by to read your works and I am happy that I did--you have taken me to Pakistan and allowed me the prophetic words of things 'ordained' ...and now I am here to see lovely poetry...you are loving someone very much? Just beautiful!


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

Thank you. You are right.


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DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

Wonderful piece of work! It reminds me of how beautiful it is to love and be loved. Thanks for sharing! =)


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

Thank you again for reading my hubs.


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

This is excellent - keep it up...


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

I am glad you liked my poem. Thank you.


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Sage Williams 6 years ago

An awesome poem, loved it very much.

Sage


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

Thank you for reading it.


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tonymac04 6 years ago from South Africa

I really enjoyed this lovely little poem - few words but with depths of meaning that are quite amazing. Thanks for sharing this gem.

Love and peace

Tony


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

Thanks for sharing your very kind comments on my poem.


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BJBenson 6 years ago from USA

I REALLY LIKED YOUR WORDS.


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

Thank you very much.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Just incredible! Just very, very incredible!


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

Yes. I only seem to be able to write poetry when the right mood is there. I have not got many poems. They come from feelings and seem to come out of the air.

Thank you for reading.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

You should do more of these. I went for a bike-ride today. Immediately I reminded myself of how wonderful it would be to have a automatic recorder. Right off the bat on these rides I get this flood of info or ideas. It's the energy? The different environment? Alas, when I return home I've forgotten most!

I get ideas and words sometimes that I write down right away. I have a document titled "Incomplete Works". These are things I've managed to type in and haven't used yet.

I can get all I need to solve the world's problems while riding. I lose it after an hour or so. Dang it!

I needed to take this walk! Thank you Ma'am!


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Hummingbird5356 6 years ago Author

Thanks for looking in here again. I can't always find inspiration for a poem. They usually come from strong feelings and when I get the words popping into my mind I must write them down immediately or they are lost.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

I'm with you. Yesterday before riding my bike a little, thoughts came. I wrote them down before leaving fear they would not return soon. On the bike - more thoughts and I can't remember them. Phooey! Oh well easy, come easy go! God bless the Hummingbird!


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Hummingbird5356 5 years ago Author

Thank you and you are right. Thoughts must be written down immediately or they disappear. Or if you think about them later they seem foolish.


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Sun-Girl 5 years ago from Nigeria

Really enjoyed the words you used in writing these particular one,thanks dear for writing.


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Hummingbird5356 5 years ago Author

Thank you for reading.


Lahoreee 5 years ago

What a surprize! immense joy and serene moments. Calm and quiet but full of meaning. You are a wizard my dear. Great poem........


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Hummingbird5356 5 years ago Author

Thank you Lahoreee. I am glad you liked it.


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Micky Dee 4 years ago

I needed a little refreshment dear.


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Hummingbird5356 4 years ago Author

Thank you. I like to see you coming back to read my poems.

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