Wanders (poem)

Where does she wander my sweet memory

The soft scented mist which blesses the night

That lost lover’s tears may vanish from sight

A whisper of dreams of some fantasy

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My soul searches sorrow for signs of light

Some spark of something that used to be me

Some hidden answers which I didn’t see

Which wanders with she whom I once held tight

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Was it the day which chased her away

A misspoken word an ill-gotten rose

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What could I say to cause her to stay

Some meaningless lines she already knows

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So now I must pay for past disarray

As she now wanders a part of me goes

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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

This is so beautifully written, congratulations. Jamie


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

I just can not believe how many great poems you are able to write a day.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Back in the stone ages, when I was single, I had relationships that I often wondered what happened to make them just disappear. You express this sentiment beautifully. Voted up.


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

Sleepless nights and endless questions. To accept blame, but not know why.

Another great one, Mh!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Oh Mr. MHatter... I love it.. and so real to my heart.

sharing my friend

debbie


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

This is beautiful and a little more serious than your limericks. I love the line "A misspoken word an ill-gotten rose.." Gorgeous!


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Ah! A very beautiful poem here buddy! Loved your choice of words!

"What could I say to cause her to stay

Some meaningless lines she already knows"

Simply brilliant and profound MH! :)


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moonlake 4 years ago from America

Love it very beautiful. Great poem. Voted Up and more.


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

Beautifully expressed , loved your poem. Voted up.


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Hatter, a beautiful one, full of emotion. Keep writing!!


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

Brilliantly originated poem.

Great job.

Cheers


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Another great poem from HubPages poetry master !

Vote up and more !!!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautifully crafted..Loved it..


Janhorner 4 years ago

Such endearing words. Your poems always a wonderful read.

Jan


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. This is such a wonderful and dreamy poem. Sometimes we express ourselves too late and it's a shame that a relationship ends. Passing this on.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 3 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Very nice. good use of rhythm and rhyme!

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