War...

...Rights And Wrongs

War asks...

Wait
And
Riddle

Watching
Aftershocks
Ripping Ragnarok

Shovels High
Lessons Lied
Empty sidewinders
Empty the time lines
Pause for intermission...

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epigramman 6 years ago

.....well words are at your commnand in poetic precision

and artful manipulation ......

...and it makes your reader stop and think!


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epigramman 6 years ago

I also like your image of the

begging skeleton (or is he praying?)

....it's very effective and brings closure to your intent


bibi16 profile image

bibi16 6 years ago from Phoenix Arizona Author

Thank you, and a muchas gracias. BB16


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MFB III 6 years ago from United States

Bullet riddled

without a clue

or a solution,

waiting in a

spirited form

so that they

can depart,

as the beast

of death shops

Baghdad, Bag-son

Bag-mother

slipping spiderlike

through the aftershocks,

stirring camoflauge webbing,

all that remains

are remains,

spades turn back

their new bunks,

as young boys and

girls nap forever,

beneath the stages of war,

with no intermission.

~~~Great write.~~MFB III


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bibi16 6 years ago from Phoenix Arizona Author

Attention ticket holders. Please take your seats or you will miss naptime for the remainder of our performance. LOL! BB16

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