A Poem About Passion And Regrets:Watching Flowers in the Rain

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Watching Flowers in the rain

She watched the flowers in the rain

Her crying eyes spill floods of pain

Weeping sky showered sympathy

In world gone cold with apathy


The rain that makes the garden grow

Keeps secrets only they two know

Her heavy heart yearns to confess

To pay the price for her transgress


Caution flew as passion flared

Lovers bed amongst peony red

Thirst for lust slake in pouring rain

Moment's insanity self disdain


In flower bed a sin took root

Concupiscence fury sowed fruit

On verge of night in rainy mist

Forbidden kiss could not resist


Sodden and wet drenched to the skin

Into the vortex two lovers spin

The flowers in the garden saw

Knew it was against the law


Floods of regret she vents her spleen

The deluge could not wash her clean

Each night at the window she'll go

She sits and watch the flowers grow


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(c) Copyright. J Alexis-Hagues 30/05/2013


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A moment in time

Pregnant bud to bloom in May

Waiting to unfurl

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Clematis creeping-

Blanket of Soft lavender

Shines in morning haze!

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Heads hang low

Coyly they sing the blues

Serenade for bees



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Vibrant star is born

Under the cherry tree grows

Much too soon ended

On a hill-

They bloom

Petal by petal


Bedfordshire

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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Au fait, just the musings of an idle mind I'm afraid....so glad you enjoyed it, I appreciate the visit and lovely comment. Have a lovely day.


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Au fait 3 years ago from North Texas

A wonderful memory to have if it is real! Beautiful photos and I enjoyed the video too. Isn't it amazing what your nose can get you up to? ;)


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Thank you Sue, I think it's just about ready.


Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi Jo,

I am looking forward to reading your first Trilinea poem.

Wishing you all the best.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Sue, so glad you liked it :). Many thanks for taking the time, actually; I'll be posting my first Trilinea poem soon, and would much appreciate your opinion on it. Take care and my best to you.


Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi Jo,

"Caution flew as passion flared

Lovers bed amongst peony red

Thirst for lust slake in pouring rain

Moment's insanity self disdain"

Thank you for sharing your garden of beauty and passion.

Voted up+++ and sharing

Take care


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Vertualit, nice to see you, thanks for taking the time to leave this lovely comment, much appreciated and my best to you.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Rajan, I'm very please to know you've enjoyed it.....thanks for the great comment and share. It is always a pleasure to see you, take care and my best to you.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Suzette, thank you very much for this lovely comment; glad I was able to reach out and touch you a little :).

My best to you, always appreciated.


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vertualit 3 years ago from Bangladesh

Excellent poem. Rain and flowers both are lovely. Its simply beautiful. Thanks for sharing....


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rajan jolly 3 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

Amazing imagery with words, Jo! The entire sequence flows so fluently rising to a crescendo and then... only to lead to another high.

Awesome! Voted beautiful and shared.


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suzettenaples 3 years ago from Taos, NM

Beautiful poem and haikus. Your photos are exquisite. So well done and I was so moved by the poem I nearly had tears in my eyes. Delightful!


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Thanks Gypsy, always appreciated.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Just wonderful. I love seeing flowers even in the rain. Beautiful pics.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hello Romeo's Quill, a real pleasure to meet you!..many thanks for this very insightful comment, much appreciated. You have quite a remarkable talent, looking forward to catching up.

My very best to you.


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Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

Hi there! Pleased to make your acquaintance. :)

I marked this poem the other day to read later on when time permitted, and I'm glad I came back.

I liked the joviality of the video, juxtaposed against the the regret of the woman in the poetic verse staring at the living memory of her forbidden experience - could have been a scene from a movie, with its bittersweet, melancholic undertones.

Yours Sincerely,

Romeo's Quill


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Ocfireflies, I just love when someone is touched by my poems, I guess that is exactly what we aim to do when we write. Thank you so much for stopping by, always a pleasure to see you, sending my best as always.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Eddy, nice to see you back!....I hope all is well with you.

Thanks for the visit and comment; I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem.

Take care and my best to you.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Devika, always a pleasure to see you....thank you for taking a look.

My best to you.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Lurana, thank you for taking the time, it's much appreciated and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Take care and have a great weekend.


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

A beautiful hub--gave me chill bumps--aka-touching me on so many levels. Thank You.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

I loved this one and thank you for sharing.

Have a great weekend

Eddy.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Watching flowers in the rain, so beautiful flowers and such a reality of life


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MrsBrownsParlour 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

So much emotion in your beautiful garden storm metaphor! I also liked the haiku. Lovely writing. :-) Lurana


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Imkarn, I can't believe we're already in June, soon it will be mid-summer and the sun still refuses to come out to play!...not very sporting...is it? :) so yes, I know how you feel.

Glad you enjoyed the poem, it's always good to see you.

Have a great weekend... may as well go out and...er..have some fun in the rain? :)

Take care and my best to you.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

travmaj, interesting!....I love to see how different people interprets my poems, you're right of course, and thank you for the visit and the great comment.

Have a wonderful weekend and my best as always.


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

lol@bill's comment!

Now, ahem - this was gorgeous, Jo! Not only the words, but the photos alongside them!

speaking of rain, we've had NOTHING BUT for about 2 weeks now...

accompanied by cold winds and low temps - NOT beautiful flora! lol

hugs, jo!

sharing


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

I sense sadness/regret in the poem - making the words even more evocative and meaningful (to me) beautiful imagery here and the documentation is superb. Thank you - am Voting -


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Kashmir, nice to see you, thanks for the visit and lovely comment, always appreciated.

Have a great weekend.


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

A very beautiful poem illustrated with these beautiful photos .

Awesome !


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Frank, bless you for loving it :); always appreciated...I'll be over to yours soon, I'm sure I must have missed a couple of gems.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Xstatic, I'm so happy to see you!.. many thanks for this wonderful comment, glad you've enjoyed it. Faith has been brilliantly supportive as are so many others on HP and we all need encouragement. thanks again and my best to you.


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

wow so filled with emotions and vivid clearity for a poem.. loved it :)


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xstatic 3 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

This is a beautiful poem, full of color and sensuality. Faith got it right, as did other commenters. UP for sure.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Good morning Martin, I'm so glad you enjoyed this!..your visit and comment means a lot. Take care and my best to you.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Deergha, lovely to see you!...thanks for the visit, share and the great comment, I very much appreciated it.

Take care and my best to you.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Rose, very much appreciated, thank you for this terrific comment, I'm touched. Have a wonderful weekend and my best to you.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Good morning Vellur, always a pleasure, thank you so much for this wonderful comment, it means a lot.

Have a great weekend.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Joelle, thank you for the visit and wonderful comment...nature is truly brimming with inspiration and beauty, if we choose to see it. Have a great weekend and my best to you.


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Beautiful, all around presentation. Very enjoyable. thank you


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

This one is exclusively beautiful....the words, the mood, the imagery....the feel, the flow..the video..all are so beautifully done here.....I almost could feel the rain in the flowers.....Votes all up way and shared already.


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rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

You are a genuinely talented individual! You have an innate ability to see beyond the obvious and put it into words that are resplendent. Take care. (Voted up) -Rose


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Vellur 3 years ago from Dubai

Beautiful poems, great write, awesome work!! Your poems are so beautifully written. Voted up beautiful and awesome.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Thank you Wetnose, for this lovely comment.... I took the camera out in to the garden after a heavy downpour, those images were the result.

The garden is coming to life in spectacular fashion, I really enjoy sharing.

Take care and my best to you.


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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Beautiful poem illustrated by fantastic pictures! Even in the rain, flowers make special pictures! Nature is beautiful and inspiring!

Thank you for sharing, Jo!


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Theresa, no contest I'm afraid....just trying to push the boundary a little, now and again, can't resist some of those old interesting words that are not used much this days. However, I'm always learning so please let me know if I'm off the mark :).

Visits and comments from you are always appreciated, take care and my best to you.


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Beautiful words with the most wonderful pictures. It is a joy to read and look upon such pretty flowers.


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phdast7 3 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Jo! Wow! I can only echo Bill and Faith. Beautiful and exquisite, the poetry and the marvelous flowers. You have been generous both in word and image. I can picture the window, I can picture the garden.

You get huge points for using the word concupiscence so amazingly. Are you trying to win a contest the rest of us don't know about? Just wonderful. :) Sharing. Theresa


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Faith, a real pleasure to see you, many thanks for your support and the great comment. You are very generous and I do appreciate it.

Take care and my best to you.


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Bill, you are such a star!...thank you so much for the support...now, that word; I sure hope it's in the right context.

Thank you so much for checking this out and especially for liking it, it means a lot.

as always

Jo


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Exquisite!!! Wow, really awesome poetry here. Enjoyed the read and all the gorgeous imagery and video.

Voted up ++++ and sharing

Hugs, Faith Reaper


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Jo, that was simply beautiful. Concupiscence???? I barely remember seeing that word, and you managed to use it in a poem where it actually flowed....remarkable work here my friend. A pleasure to read.

Have a wonderful weekend!

bill

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