We Were Only Two (Poem)


My steps do not stop
if the road of life
leads to the future.

My memories do not betray

steps lived in the past.

An image, a few words,

a little laughter and joy,
so much joy.

They were minutes lived and experienced in a timeless reality,

they were words, small words,

far away from the world.

They were born from the heart to live in the soul.

We were only two people
Sharing a moment,
simply, yet intensely living.

The steps will not cease,

the embers do not burn out,
and the heart still holds each spark
and still lights the fire of memories.

We were only
two...


Life brings us many visitors, touching our lives in numerous ways. Some remain with us for a lifetime while others stay but a brief moment in time. But it's the impressions left by those who momentarily enter our life that are most remembered and seldom ever matched. The ones we never chose and the ones we never meant to meet. But in some odd twist of fate these are the ones that touched our life. And in that brief moment, they are the ones we cherished the most. And the memory stays with us forever.


Jangaplanet ©


io ti amerò sempre

Ti vedo scritta su tutti i muri, ogni canzone mi parla di te.

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missolive 5 years ago from Texas

beautiful


Savannah 5 years ago

This poem is so great! Wonderful words and meanings. It almost moved me to tears!

Beautiful Thank you.


Anastasia 5 years ago

Im behond words to describe the beauty of what you just wrote here. This poem magically captures emotions shared between two souls. Just wonderful!


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buythebook 5 years ago

Sometimes things can't be explained in simple words about certain relationships.Poetry may be the only way to express those feelings, and you my beautiful friend have done exactly that. You have lots of depth and insight!

This is beautiful and heart-rendering.


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Fortaleza 5 years ago from Fortaleza, Brasil

When I read this poem I felt a strong sense of emotion from you. This is the most beautiful poem I have ever heard. I read it and the harmony between the words, the context and the way it is expressed is just absolutely fantastic, perfect.

Very truthful


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

Dear missolive, Savannah and Anastasia thank you, appreciate.

Eluisa that was very kind of you to say, thanks.

Fortaleza, thanks. I hope you start publishing some of your poems soon for I am looking forward to reading!


Arika 5 years ago

Flavia sent me here. Sweet sentiment and so true.

Beautiful poem!


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

Aww really?! That means so much! Thanks a bunch Arika:) I really appreciate it!


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Taniatravels 5 years ago

Lovely work! sincerely heartfelt. Well written and presented. Gave it a "beautiful" vote. As with your other postings. All well deserved. Enjoyed reading them all.

Love it Jang:)


Sydneygirl 5 years ago

I loved what you said at the end of this poem. It was so nice. I loved it!:)


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Wow .. so beautiful and tender , i voted up ,awesome and beautiful , because it is ! thanks for the read ! :)


SouthAmerica 5 years ago

The poem was really great. I have faced a similar situation.

It really touched me. Good work


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ArgentinaDanila 5 years ago

Oh wow I love what you did here! It's a beautiful poem!


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

Thank you jami l.pereira for that warm comment. Appreciate it and thanks for stopping in.

God bless.

Danila from Argentina thanks again.


Michelle 5 years ago

I write poem's to,but this one made me sit back and think. It had true heart put into it which I admire because I'm a poet as well and I write from the heart which I find to be a true requirement in poetry.

Nice job =)


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

Ty so very much indeed Michelle,Your kindness is truly overwhelming.

Thank you for taking the time to read and commenting.


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Dyhannah 5 years ago from Texas

I feel a beautiful sense of timeless and connection in your poem.


blog8withJ 5 years ago

Wow..beautiful words!


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

TY so much Dyhannah, so glad to hear it. Appreciate it!


Julietta 5 years ago

Straight from the heart,clearly. I am definitely a big fan.

I honestly love all of your work, not only the poems!:)


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Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

So simple and so good.


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duffsmom 5 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

Again, spoken from the heart. Love your work janaplanet. Will enjoy seeing more poetry from you.


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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

Wow, Wonderful poem, truly Wonderful. Written Excellently,

Beautiful presentation, Great words and their meaning.Keep up your good work my Friend.

Voted UP & Awesome! I am so glad that I have read the poem.

Thanks for sharing

Best Wishes,

Kamalesh


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

Well TY Jackie Lynnley. Appreciate you stopping by.:)

Hi Duffsmom, it has been awhile indeed since we last spoke. Thanks so much for the encouragement.:)

Kamalesh050. I appreciate your interest and support. Thanks! Bless you.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

A beauty in meaning and writing. A great piece. Awesome!


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

@ Ubani, thank you so much for this kind comment!

Hi lyns, I appreciate you stopping by . Thank you! very kind of you.


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lyns 5 years ago from USA

Jangaplanet, I love this poem "We were only two", it touch my heart while reading it and the ending so profound, this poem brought a close memory of one of my best friends who passed several 2 years ago whom I miss dearly but the most precious thing about it is although, she's no longer here to talk to the memories are so precious, thanks for sharing and touching parts in my soul. Voted up, Awesome and all the rest I appreciate you sharing this poem.


DonnaToscana 5 years ago

Beautiful and emotional at same time. I can relate to your poem. Liked it so much dear Sir.

Read your bio, I'm from Italy also. Happy to have found you on hubpages. Ciao:)


Katia 5 years ago

Simply beautiful!


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

I am real Sorry about your loss Lyns. I am humbled that this poem touched your soul in some way. I appreciate your gentle words. Memories are always precious and remain within us forever, comfort us as well. :)


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rls8994 5 years ago from Mississippi

You have such a beautiful way of expressing your words. I loved it! Just beautiful :)


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

Well thank you very much rls, you are far to kind. Thanks for stopping by, I really appreaciate it.:)

God Bless.


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Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

The simplicity betrays its depth/. I have come away from reading it feeling tearful, or is it just melancholia?

Regardless, I loved it.


SamathaPerth 5 years ago

Good poem and can very much relate to it.


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Jangaplanet 5 years ago Author

Thanks Twilight! A little bit of melancholia and a little bit of everything!


New Zealand Lori 5 years ago

This one was amazing too! I guess we all have those types of people who come in and out of our lives!


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Claudia Tello 4 years ago from Mexico

This is a great poem, simple ideas beautifully put into words. Congratulations!


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old albion 4 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Hello Jangaplanet. An absolute delight. The text at the end of your poem brought many people to mind, as well as a tear. voted up/ awesome/ SHARED.

Graham.


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Jangaplanet 4 years ago Author

Hi old albion, thank you so much my friend. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Getting positive feedback as you have just provided is encouraging.

Thanks again for stopping by and sharing!

Peace!


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nancynurse 4 years ago from Southeast USA

You are a gifted writer. I hope you continue to write on other websites as well. Very impressive


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Jangaplanet 4 years ago Author

Hi nancynurse, Thank you very much indeed, that's very kind of you! :-)


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Bella Nina 4 years ago from USA

Warm, loving, simply beautiful. I loved every word, and the way you expressed these loving thoughts. Count me as a new fan!! Voted up and beautiful!!


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Jangaplanet 4 years ago Author

Thank you Bella Nina, that was very kind of you. I appreciate you stopping by and commenting. I am Glad to hear you enjoyed this poem! :)


MartaRocha 4 years ago

Beautiful!!!!

It touch my heart cause I can see it was spoken from the heart!!!

Thanks for sharing dear!

Great job!!! Bjs


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Jangaplanet 4 years ago Author

You are most welcome MartaRocha , thank you, I appreciate it. :)


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Aisha Jilani 4 years ago from Lahore

amazing and touching


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Jangaplanet 4 years ago Author

Thank you Aisha Jilani :)


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JM Poetry 2 years ago

Really good poem!

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