We Have All Felt This Lover’s Pain (limerick)

This lover his poor heart does ache

Again he had made this mistake

So in pain he sat

When will he learn that

Don’t eat all that fat on that steak


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Love the twists at the end....very funny....and I've been there done that.


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DanaTeresa 4 years ago from Ohio

Good one! What seems to be one thing becomes another! I really do love a good twist.


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

That was unique and I was not expecting him to have an indigestion.


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Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

Geee... what an ending! Right when I was getting into it! lol


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Midnight Lights 4 years ago from USA

Hahaha! that was funny. Thank you for the laugh. But, yes so true, don't partake of all that fat on that steak as it could lead to some horrible heartburn, maybe even a heart attack... and we wouldn't want that. :/


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter99,

Clever ending, impressive!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

hahahaha!! lol! this is the best mhatter!


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

LOL...this is too funny!!! Love the twist at the end!!!


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b. Malin 4 years ago

How true, how true...And we NEVER learn. Thanks for sharing this Fun, telltale Poem!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

That'll sure do it!


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Dexter Yarbrough 4 years ago from United States

Funny stuff!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Funny Mhatter...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

lol If cooked right a little fat on steak isn't all that bad.


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

short and sweet.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

LOL He'll never learn


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Another good one! Voted up.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

LOl.. so funny my friend.. You are too much..

Debbie

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