A Love Poem: What I Love About You

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What I So Love about You

You come alive

On a summer’s day

With endless blue sky

Not a cloud in sight

Your heart delight

When you recognise

Riding high, sailing by

A parachute in flight

You beam with delight

When you get the green light

It’s your turn to skydive

Now you know you’re alive

So you saunter to the Cessna

You’re the enchanter as you banter

Till you reach for the cord

And Jump for your reward

On horseback, you’re the master

As you Gallop and you canter

You dismount with pride

Still fresh from the ride

Horses sweat, getting wet

Mucking out, you never fret

Where-ever you wander, it’s a bet

You’ll be beset

By small children and animals

Don’t need your credentials

They instinctively know your potential

In your heart, love’s essential

You still smile like a child

As the first snow pile high

you'll Step outside and play awhile

Bluebells in spring

Robins singing

Such joy they bring

I love the way you love

Puppies and penguins

Meerkats and macaws

You’re generous and adventurous

With you, love’s harmonious

Never acrimonious

In this journey of life

Unlike Lot’s wife

You learn from the past

But seldom look back

These are the things I so love about you.

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rambansal 4 years ago from India

Nice narration of your views on what attracts you.


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Ian Dabasori Hetr 4 years ago from Papua New Guinea

You welcome. Keep em coming


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Ian, thanks for the visit and comment, much appreciated.


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Ian Dabasori Hetr 4 years ago from Papua New Guinea

hahah.. I am coming to enjoy your hubs and this is one of those great hubs you have. voted up.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi epigramman, thank you so much for the comment, but is that really how I come across? righteous and proud? so... er..is that good or bad? either way, its very nice to meet you also.

PS, why were you up so late? insomnia or hubsession?


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epigramman 4 years ago

...well you are certainly 'getting down' 'to business' with your epic writing here - you are so righteous and proud and passionate when you write this I would imagine and I feel so righteous and so proud and so passionate when reading it ..... so nice to meet you from across the pond and happy new year from lake erie time ontario canada 1:27am


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

The link...oh...that dancing dog is incredible! Our dogs drool well, but we love them so. MERRY CHRISTMAS from my family to yours!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Jamie thank you for stopping by, did you check out the link? It's below the image of the horse. And that real man In the poem ? Not as adventurious anymore, Actually, He is snoring loudly beside me at the moment. I'm please to say he is very real. Take care of your self, and I wish you and your family a very MERRY CHRISTMAS!


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Even mucking stalls! Fond memories. The lines starting at horseback riding and then children stick with me, you have created an incredible man. A real man, some would say. Thank you for this excellent poem, almost spilled my coffee but went into this with a firm grip. Jamie

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