What an old Lover Knows..........

Starlit memories flash across the ebony skies.
just after the day ....begins an old quest
Wondering if the young have it all......
as the lonely ones lie dreaming
What is it that an
old lover knows
perhaps that there are
just no answers
He watches the young ...
amused by thier wasted energy
That which is lost
never to know again
All those emotions spent in youth
drawn and quartered by such trials
He just can't keep up the pace
nor will he save the dieing race
From themselves
or each other.....
He lives out.....
What an old lover knows
No more
no less....





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MysteriousOne 5 years ago

Simply beautiful! Truly a very heart-felt write!

Voted up/beautiful! Thank you for sharing!

~Peace to you,my friend~

M.O.


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prashant angiras 5 years ago from shimla(india)

i also wonder that how a old lover feels,well written,keep it up


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

The old lover has been there, he did those same things that the young one do now, no more, lo less. Beautifully insightful....as always.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

MysteriousOne , Its a mystery thats for sure. Thank you for coming by!.......:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Prashant Angiras Thank you so much , ...:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , say it ain't soo , were losing you to the dance of love!.......My wishes for you are for love and happiness!!!!....:-} what A lucky, Lucky man!...:-}


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

He knows enough to be amused at the antics of wasted youth and misspent passion. Great poem ahorseback. How are you these days? Hyph


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

How wonderful. I like hearing about the old in a culture so misguidedly focused on youth. Kudos.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Ahh Hyphenbird ,I am so good I can't stand myself!...LOL

I am well and you ? ...:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Poetvix , And the older of us can bore you with the details and life lessons ....Bare with us ! Thank you my dear girl for sharing!....:-}


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Fennelseed 5 years ago from Australia

The most meaningful lessons finally reach their target at the wrong end of life. I remember those "drawn and quartered" trials oh so well. Ouch!! Beautifully put, as only you can, ahorseback.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Fennelseed , You have that so right , "Ouch" , oh well , its nice though to reach a point in life where things don't tear into us the same way! I am so much more serene and comfortable with myself than then!....and I hope that you are too!......:-}Thank you


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jujubees 5 years ago from Rhode Island

Eloquent


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Jujubees , Thank you ! You humble me....:-]

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