Poem | What is there in your eyes?

Is it a star in the darkest sky?

Won’t I reach there, if I try?

Is it as deep as the deepest sea?

Will it be able to shelter me?

Sometimes I think it’s a pond

Of water loosely bond

Which come out now and then,

In a joy or a slightest pain.

Twinkle twinkle blinking eyes,

I can’t control heart beat rise,

When you look through cornered eye,

My heart stops I won’t lie!

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Eyes say so much, don't they? I would agree, in love ones eyes can make your heart race and melt simultaneously. nice poem


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Many thanks to you Invictus (Can't you shorten your id? ). Thanks for the encouragement you have given.


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

shorten my id? call me whatever you like so long as it's nice! :D

Have a nice day!

ps. What is the weather like in India, in January? Is it warm or cold?


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you very much. January is the coldest time for India. But as you know India is a very large country and there are varieties of places are there.Coastal areas are comparatively warmer.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

cupids arrow is spot on here.... lovely


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thanks poetlorraine for your beautiful comment.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you...

ow,eyes..the things that kill me.

lovely poem, cupid! keep writing :)


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thanks blaise for the beautiful words you have used to encourage me! I will certainly keep writing!


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aefrancisco 6 years ago from somewhere down the road

its a wonderful poem .... i won't get tired reading it (again and again and again)

more please :)

thanks in advance. . .


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thanks from the bottom of my heart for your beautifully garnished appreciation.


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2uesday 6 years ago from - on the web, I am 2uesday.

Lovely to read this, thank you for sharing.


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you uesday for visiting my hub. I am happy that you loved that one.


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blackreign2012 6 years ago

I totally like it ~hugs~ Great poem


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thanks blackreign for the lovely comment!

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