Poem | What Makes Me Happy?

What makes me happy? I ask myself,

I am too confused, need your help.

A cute baby, like a wingless angel?

Or the beautiful mother? Who can tell?


The smiling rose with loving smell?

Or A little shy bud? Who can tell?

What makes me happy? I ask myself,

I am too confused, need your help.


Glittering stars of a lonely night

Or the charming moon with faded light?

What makes me happy? I ask myself,

I am too confused, need your help.


Rising sun on a large calm sea,

Or a blossomed flower with a dancing bee?

What makes me happy? I ask myself,

I am too confused, need your help.


Idle leave, on a rainy day,

Or cracking music? Who can say?

What makes me happy? I ask myself,

I am too confused, need your help.

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Well, it all sounds lovely.. I think there are many elements to happiness, yet it begins within.. The happier we are within, the more beautiful everything is around us.. and the stronger love we feel..

Lovely poem, Cupid.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

invictus will help you i have not got a clue. what makes me happy ah that is a different story


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you invictus, for visiting my hub so early. I appreciate your view regarding happiness, although I am so confused and worried that I could not express my feelings correctly in the poem. Thanks again for the comment.

Thank you poetlorraine also for visiting my hub and encouraging me with your beautiful words.


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Good poem - happiness is a confused state of mind I think...


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Good poem - happiness is a confused state of mind I think...


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you very much Moulik for your comment.


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2uesday 6 years ago from - on the web, I am 2uesday.

Here in this poem are many happy thoughts and ideas , thank you for sharing them with us.


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you very much for visiting my hub. And thank you also for the beautiful and analytical comment!


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epigramman 6 years ago

what makes me happy - well isn't it obvious - visiting your hub space1


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

epigramman, Thanks a lot for your lovely comment!

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