What A “Waist” (limerick)

Such dreams would this vision ignite

This source of a young man’s delight

So how did he win her

This now big fat grinner

For whom she cooks dinner each night


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b. Malin 4 years ago

Oh what a Treat to read your Fun Limerick, Mhatter. Loved it! My Vote UP and Funny to you!


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ndaffinee 4 years ago from Jumbled Brain, USA

LOL, how indeed!


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

I enjoy your limericks so much that I feel guilty that they are free of charge! Not that I want you to charge me a fee:)


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mhatter,

Excellent job! I may have giggled a bit here! :) Charge sunshine, charge sunshine! :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

how wow! LOL


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Redberry Sky 4 years ago

Another great limerick! Love your sidelong humour :)


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mandarmk9 4 years ago from Ratlam, India

Hello Mhatter,

It was funny. Absolutely funny. Can't say anything else........but funny.....

:) Mandar


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JaydenMiller 4 years ago from USA

Wonderful! Wonderful! I really liked it!


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Julie DeNeen 4 years ago from Clinton CT

Hardy Har Har...nice play on words...though a tad sexist..ehem... :)


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

They say that the way to a man's heart is through the stomach. Fun write..


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teaches12345 4 years ago

This is a good one. I can see the rewards on both sides here.


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stars439 4 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Definitely a great short poem. GBY.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Hahaha!! Bravo bravo!!!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

lol That's a great way to describe things and for this guy love really goes through the stomach.


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 4 years ago from Sunny Florida

HeHeHe, fodd always has been the way to a man's heart. I wonder what way he wigggled himself into her heart.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Giggle. Great humor!

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