What Beats In My Mind (poem)

What beats inside the forest of my mind

A drop of something that won’t let me go

A shadow hid in world I’ve come to know

This breath forgotten which was left behind

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I feel its whisper deep inside my flow

So deep within the mask I have refined

This hint beyond the life I have designed

What is the song which yearns its morning so

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Have I not lived each moment as I should

And made the most of person I became

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My changes were not often understood

I drifted off and ego was to blame

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And now my mind surrounded by dark wood

Must wonder of a song which once was me

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annart 3 years ago from SW England

Oh for a chance to do things differently! Lovely words to express something left behind or something that could have been. Up & beautiful. Ann


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suzettenaples 3 years ago from Taos, NM

Beautiful! Awesome words and thoughts.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

What Beats In My Mind excellent read with such beautiful words


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Sometimes we don't even realize how we change through the years. Some good and others not so good. When we see it, we need to change it or be forever lost.


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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

Change is the only constant in this world. It is interesting how an old friend we haven't seen in years, for example, can remind us we are no longer the person we used to be. It is often so imperceptible to the person changing.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Deep thoughts as to how we change as life goes on, and then we realize we may be someone totally different from whom we were before and may be surprised when we realize such about ourselves.

Awesome!

Blessings, Faith Reaper


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Amazing!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

But the song lingers on. A lovely poem about adapting to change all through our lives.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

At times, it seems unfair.

I remember wondering why my Mother would have such melancholy.

Only time can teach some lessons of life.

Beautiful work here, Martin.

DJ.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

If I had to change anything in my life, I don't think I would. I am a strong person for those very reasons.

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