Poem | When I was lost

Once in my childhood

I was lost in the dark,

I tried and then cried,

And my Mom saved me.


Once when I was a teen

And lost in the woods,

I tried and then cried,

And my Father saved me.


Once when I was young

And I lost in the Web,

I didn’t try or cry,

But my teacher saved me.


Now when I am grown up

And lost in your eyes,

I won’t try or cry,

Who will save me?

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Yeah, that's question in this poem. Made my heart jump. Nice flowing poem, Cupid. sounds romantic.


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you very much Invictus, I was just looking at my rating and getting a little bit worried seeing that it is decreasing, then your encouraging words came to me. Thanks a lot.


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Hmm..It is always a mystery with ratings fluctuating. Some things to keep in mind...

1) That your content is original and not duplicate

2) It just happens here in Hp difficult to explain.

3)Consistantly writing (which you have done helps)

4) Note that some 'followers' live up to the term in a stalkerish means. Hope that does not scare you.. It is fun to hub with friends and such.. Though, I have experienced some in shadows, too. (my tip would be to ignore them, and carry on, hopefully in time they get help for themselves) :)

Good luck with your hubbing.


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Many thanks for valuable and encouraging guidance. I will follow that.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you...

Loved the flow..simple yet striking.. Thumbs up! :)


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you very much Blaise for your encouraging comment.


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Very well written poetry, loved it...


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thanks Moulik for visiting my hub. And thanks for the appreciation also.


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bojanglesk8 6 years ago

Great poem.


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you bojanglesk8, for the inspiring comment and visiting my hub.


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GadDragon 6 years ago from Ahwahnee, CA

Impressive, my friend. I love this poem.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

aw maybe you will just have to look after yourself, nice poem


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thanks you GadDragon, for visiting my Hub and for the beautiful comment.


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you poetlorraine for the admiration. I have really been encouraged by the comments you people are making on my hubs. Thanks again.


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Very simply expressed - I loved the quiet flow of words...


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you Moulik for visiting my hub again! You are also a fantastic poet! I have read a few of them and will continue to read more. Thanks for the comment.


sophs 6 years ago

So simple but so meaningful, love it! :)


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thank you sophs,for the encouraging comment. You are also a nice poet!


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chakranir 6 years ago from KOLKATA, INDIA

You have really surprised me. Thankfully it is a pleasant surprise. Finally you have come down from the pages of books and tried yourself. a superb beginning. all my good wishes to you.Though I received your mail some days ago, I did not find time to explore your achievement.

Today, I have registered and created a page. Please go through and comment.


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Thanks for your encouraging comment!


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deepanjana 6 years ago

This is such a nice read.. You are a romantic indeed


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

Hi deepanjana, thank you for your comment!


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ladyjane1 6 years ago from Texas

great poem. Cheers.


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA Author

thanks ladyjane fir your appreciation!

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