When Love Leaves

Shoes In The Way

Gone are the days when I held her hand,

And she held mine.

Gone are the laughter and smiles,

We left behind.

.

No more tugging.

On my scruffy beard.

No more telling me,

“Dad you’re weird”.

.

I wish for yesterday,

When we played together.

I assumed that all storms.

Could be weathered.

.

I could never contemplate,

A life without you.

But the sands of my hour glass,

Have sifted through.

.

Your humor, your smell,

Your touch, your grin

They’re gone with the memory,

Of how we had been.

.

You ran through my heart,

Without any cares.

Your shoes were left,

At the bottom of the stairs.

.

I picked them up,

To put them away.

I put them back,

As I feared the day,

.

You might outgrow,

The need to play.

And I may not see,

Those shoes in the way.

.

.

~Micky Dee~

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Love Is Leaving

Its 3:30 AM,

I’ve been up all day.

I tried to go to sleep,

But my head got in the way.

.

I thought I’d write a poem.

Just to have something to do.

But all my thoughts,

Kept running back to you.

.

I wondered if you were sleeping,

Or if you were awake.

What does this wondering mean,

For heavens sake?

.

What’s this I’m feeling?

Could it be a seismic shaking?

Or is it just a countdown,

For when my heart starts breaking.

.

Freedom’s just another word,

For nothing left to lose.

Is that why I feel an awful tremor,

Right down to my very shoes?

.

Please come close and hold me now,

And kiss my trembling lips.

I feel this chill and cold vibrations,

Right through my finger tips.

.

What is this coldness,

That makes teeth chatter?

What are these oscillations,

That make my thoughts scatter?

.

My very being,

Echoes the sadness of grieving.

It’s the feeling I feel,

When I feel love is leaving.

.

.

~Micky Dee~

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MY PHONE DOESN'T SAY I LOVE YOU ANYMORE!

My phone doesn't say,

"I love you" anymore.

My heart is broken,

And cuts me to the core.

.

I long to see the Love,

That I adore,

With whom to endless heights,

We'd soar.

.

"O' God where is she?",

I implore.

He quotes Poe's raven,

"Nevermore".

.

I lie here, frozen on the floor,

Hoping, I should rise no more,

All because my phone,

Doesn’t say “I love you” anymore.


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~Micky Dee~

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137 comments

poetlorraine 6 years ago

lovely thoroughly enjoyed those, nice vibes, will read more of your hubs


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

ahhh, so lovely and moving.. there is something in the air.. a high tide of vibrations


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Unchained Grace 6 years ago from Baltimore, MD

Mick, very touching. I noticed the Janis Joplin line in there. Brought back some memories. There's a lotta heart, feeling and tears behind that one, brother.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thanks Poetlorraine for coming by.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s. It's always nice to see you.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Yo UG. You know how it is. You go to war, you go to jail, lose your home, get hit by a car or two, maybe a pick-up, lose the loves you had, then things take a turn for the worse.

Sometimes insomnia writes a hub. Thanks for stopping by Unchained Grace.


prettyunicorn 6 years ago

True love never leaves. It is always in your heart. It's never too late...


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whiteorchids 6 years ago from Tropical Paradise

A poem that tears at your heartstrings how beautiful to say the least, the words were brilliant.


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Beautiful words! Thanks to share. :)


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Whiteorchids. Love is a lot of things. Thanks


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Freya Cesare for stopping by and your kind words.


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prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US

Oh MIcky, you almost made me cry, oh this is just so touching, I hope time can heal your longings,, what more can I say, You have a wonderfful feel of love and you put them well into words and I almost can feel the heart beating in your words, Maita


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Maita. I'm just walking through some rocks right now. Stay warm.


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myownworld 6 years ago from uk

beautifully captures the sadness that comes with losing someone you love... thank you for sharing this...one feels you through the words.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you myownworld. I'll be over to yourownworld soon.


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Chris Eddy111 6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Touched my heart you did with those words. Thank you.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Chris Eddy. Take care.


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2uesday 6 years ago from - on the web, I am 2uesday.

It is a pity they do not read poetry like this on the BBC radio as some of the offering lately have made me sigh and not in the nice way 'Shoes in The Way' did all the poems were good but that one echoed.

It is a pleasure to read poetry that is so well written.

I look forward to reading about the squirrels tomorrow. Thanks.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you 2uesday. I do appreciate your kind words. You be safe and warm.


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GooGooGal09 6 years ago from Waco, Texas

Very nice. Thank you for sharing.

-Tamara


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thanks for visiting Tamara. Be safe!


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prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

really nice poem. based on your experience? very good. thanks


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

I'm afraid so Prasetio. I'm afraid so. I welcome the days when the ones we love will surround us. There has to be a day.


prettyunicorn 6 years ago

Me too.


kandimarshall 6 years ago

awwww those poems are so sweet and so sad. Truly great work


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thanks PrettyUnicorn. I long for the day.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thanks Kandimarshal. You're very kind.


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Teresa Laurente 6 years ago from San Antonio, Texas, U.S.A.

Micky Dee my friend, what can I say in here? I do think things and situations like these portray a universal event, transition, and evolution of human thoughts and feelings.

This is a touching poem. Yet, no matter how difficult this phase is; we will always come out and get over it. The love feeling remains maybe forever but the attachment snaps out, leaving behind the memory which makes us of what we are.

More power to you.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you for your kind thoughts Teresa. Hearts get heavy. Thanks


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mbwalz 6 years ago from Maine

Very nice imagery. And the sentiments tugged exquisitely at the heart.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Mbwalz. Your sentiments are valued here too. Thanks


sophs 6 years ago

Really brilliant and beautiful poems, really enjoy reading your work Micky Dee


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you very much Sophs. You're very kind. I'll come check your work out very soon. Thank you


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Ghost Whisper 77 6 years ago from The U.S. Government protects Nazi War Criminals

Awwwwwwwwwww. This is touching, sad, truthful. You convey your feelings really well through poetry Mickydee. :*(


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Ghost. Sometimes it's been too real. Thank you as always. You turn that frown upside down and get that tear out of your eye.


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jaded777 6 years ago

How lovely and moving. I was truly touched and can't wait to read what else you have in store. Excellent.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Jaded. You pull that off with that hat. Thanks for stopping by.


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

OUTCH !!!Painful. Hope you get more good days than bad as time marches on..

Thanks for sharing.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thanks for stopping by and commenting Dim Flaxenwick. You know how it is- good times, hard times. Life rolls on. Thanks very much.


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Lovely, simply lovely, very well done...


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Moulik Mistry. Some of it's what I felt as love was leaving. Thank you for stopping by and commenting.


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MFB III 6 years ago from United States

To Simply Love....Again!

Love again,

comes around

like an old friend,

gently tapping me

on the shoulder,

and directing my

gaze towards you.

Breath escapes me,

and that overwhelming

urge to know you more

becomes my most

passionate goal.

All bittersweet thoughts

of the love

I 'd just lost,

vanish like a bubble

blown across the winds

of another melancholy place.

far from here,

far from your gaze

which now locks on me,

in pale blue splendor.

Your face is a question mark

of possibilities yet answered,

and that hint of a smile,

which curls up

like an invite

wrapped in the red

ribbon of your lips,

bids me say hello.

So I will strive once more,

to never say Goodbye,

for there is little

that is good

about a goodbye

when love comes again.

©-MFB III


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Great verse sir. Thank you for gracing this page.


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

Had to come back to this one for another read.

It's the 'shoes on the stairs' bit that gets me.I know the feelig when someone has gone, I wouldn't mind picking up after them all the time as long es the person was still there. Full of love xx


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Oh Dim! I wish I could pick up those shoes. Thank you Dim!


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

I agree with Dim, that same line brought all the photo's of memories and muddy play to the forefront of my imagination.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you SummerSteward. I had no idea that you had been here. I didn't get a "feed". I went to your hub though. You're very interesting. Nice hubs! Thanks for dropping by. Happy trails!


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

I think SummerSteward is far too formal. I wonder if I can change it... Anyways... Rossimobis kept quoting you on my wall and in comments.. At first I was confused because the only Micky Dee I was aware of was Motorhead Mickey Dee and I have a hard time picturing him saying "Circle in my circle"... So when I found you.. I had to follow you.... And now I find myself glad I did! Interesting eh? I'll take it. :)


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Rossimobis is prtty special. I'll come back to SummerSteward world and check out some more of your hubs. Thanks for stopping by!


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

That would be great! I love visitors! Rossi is wonderful, very inspiring writer!


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Rossi is De Bomb. Yep. Pretty cool Dude.


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

bomb chica bow woow..


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

That's a good way to get the blood flowing.


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Rossimobis 6 years ago from Biafra

This same feeling i felt when i realized that love has gone but i have to leave you cos you don't wanna stay,if you don't stop it,my phone which you have,though will never say i love you any more but will always remind you every 2nd of the month that i feel in love with you right in the bus.Was it a wrong thing to do?That i will still find out.Thanks Micky, glad summerSteward was here too.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Rossi my man- Thanks for stopping and your pleasant comment- I left some "fiction" about us back on Summer's "Take Off Your Cross" hub and her "Raw Demeaner" hub. I love you Brother!


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

Haha... It's good stuff! Check it out!


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Yo Summer! You're still hanging around!


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

Haha! What can I say? The snack table here is *pompous rich lady voice* simply devine!


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Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

touching poems. sad


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Hi SummerSteward. Your comment slipped through the carcks. I wasn't notified- dang it! Thank you Dear!

Thank you Nikkij504gurl. Yep- life gets heavy sometimes. Thank you for stopping!


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Mekenzie 6 years ago from Michigan

Life does get heavy .. the older I get the more heaviness .. at least it seems to me. But there are also breaks in the clouds when the sun pops through to gloriously soften the lines of care. I pray the sun breaks through and the little girl once again curls into her Daddy's arms.

Blessings Always! Mekenzie


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Oh- Mekenzie -it does get heavy! Sometimes you're the windshield- sometimes you're the bug! Sometimes you're maybe the rear-view mirror with collateral damage. In the meantime I hurry up and wait.

I think that right now- in my life -I think I'm close to being "where" I'm supposed to be. I think I'm close- spiritually, mentally, and physically. This is just as expected from past "injuries" in all categories.

I'm here and I'm waiting on the "Great Conductor" to hand out the sheet music. Then we'll know what to play!

Thank you Mekenzie. As always you are such a Dear! Thank you Ma'am!


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shirishkoid 6 years ago

very touchy and meaningful poems....


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Debarshi Dutta 6 years ago from Calcutta

Great poems, keen insight.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

You're making the rounds Debarshi Dutta! It's so nice to see you. Thank you Sir!


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itakins 6 years ago from Irl

Micky-

This is me at a loss for words.....so poignant.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Itakins- this leaves me the same way. These words came out of me. I know "sweet sorrow". Thanks


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trish1048 6 years ago

hi Micky,

Yep, the shoes got me.

Why are children in a hurry to grow up? Why do adults wish they were young again? and why, oh why, do some parents wish their children would hurry up and grow up?


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

It's rough. Soft thoughts! Thank you Trish!


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trish1048 6 years ago

You're quite welcome Micky. I love that you have such a soft heart :)


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Let's love one another- it's the law.


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trish1048 6 years ago

I like your law :)

I just read once again the shoes, and it doesn't fail to touch my heart and bring tears to my eyes.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

See! Now I love you and I can't help myself!

I wish I could just pick those shoes up. Maybe move them to the side just a bit. Contemplate putting them away!


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trish1048 6 years ago

LOL you're funny :)

But, sigh,,,,the longing for what once was. The good news is, is that those memories live within us forever, so we can visit those times whenever we like.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

I'm going to check those shoes out.

I read this about every time that someone leaves a comment. I cry!


Quietest Moments 6 years ago

Love never left you Micky.. you are love and radiate every day.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Quietest Moments - thank you Dear! SWAK


Vonda 6 years ago

I loved the one about shoes in the way made me feel as though this is something you truely experienced and therefore I also felt it through your words.

Thanks for sharing


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Vonda! Yes ma'am I did feel it and went through that. I remember pondering about those shoes. At first I may have thought- "That child! She won't put her shoes up! And I thought about it. I liked her shoes right there- or anywhere. I knew she was "there". I like her "There". Thank you very much!


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deedeelaw 6 years ago from Deborah's Musings

I really felt your pain with each and every word.And loving those shoes ,and missing those shoes,those are the moments that made you ,well you. As I told my children,it may seem silly, but it's true but the best part of me, is loving you.~DeeDee~


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

"but it's true but the best part of me, is loving you." - Pretty nice there! These are memories of love. Thank you Deedee!


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figment 6 years ago from Texas

Great poem


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Figment!


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blackreign2012 6 years ago

Simply divine work Micky... as always you are gifted The Creator shines through you ~hugs~


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Yo Blackreign! Thank you very much and you know the Creator shines through you!


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Pollyannalana 6 years ago from US

Only soft hearts get heavy, with hurt, Micky. Sometimes I think there are fewer soft hearts out there than we think. I am surer of it every day really. It's so hard to love so deeply and have not one once of control, I use to think dying of a broken heart was just words in a song and now I know it is possible as I am sure you know too. Being here helps and at least we can smile now and then. When I first saw you I thought you were a young kid on a bike just riding through, care free and happy, zipping along. That thought makes me smile now, I hope it can you too. We know there are no promises, kind words help but can never cure. Smiles are the best medicine we could ask for. May you have many.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

"When I first saw you I thought you were a young kid on a bike just riding through, care free and happy, zipping along."

That is so funny! Yes Ma'am!

"I'm 19 years old. I like biking, hiking, walking on the beach, driving my convertible, and older women with soft hearts!"

It is such a joy visiting you and having you over here occasionally! You are a delight! Thank you Ma'am!


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Pearldiver 6 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

Phew.... Thank god my chute worked mate... It's a loooooong way down to here.. but damn good reading along the way! Yep, Tres bon. What experience you have for a 19 year old MD.. Chopper Skid gunner at the age of three! Amazing! And this hub.. well that is too! Take care mon ami.


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kirstenblog 6 years ago from London UK

I LOVE this one! I could see just about any dad writing this for a daughter long grown up. I know my dad would have the same sentiment, there is something special about the father daughter relationship :)


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Kirsten! You are so right! God bless!


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KFlippin 6 years ago from Amazon

These are beautiful, very moving poems . . . enjoyed them very much!


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

I read them again, KFlippin, and they brought tears to me again.


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Serendipity88 6 years ago from California

Ahhh! Micky Dee... the joker! Perhaps you can "slip into a coma if hit by enough bricks..." :) It was an interesting interpretation of the quote. But a smile on my face! I read your poem not knowing it was by you and WOW! It is really beautiful. I do not know what else to say. Exceptional work! (just avoid those darn bricks...) :)


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Serendipity, you are so sweet. Thank you Ma'am!


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Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

the dark and dreary nights always brings out the best poetry, with such depth of soul attached to it, that reaches out and touches so many other hearts!

such a beautiful poem~

~aloha nui~


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Sometimes despair writes itself. Thank you Sa'ge!


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Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

yes, but is not despair drawn out of such event that bring about the dark and dreary nights?


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

aloha - despair is drawn, solicited, donated... God bless you Sa'ge!


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brightforyou 6 years ago from Florida

So very lovely Micky - you write from the heart; and its beautiful, thank you!


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Oh brightforyou! You are so bright! I do wish you a beautiful day, and sweet dreams tonight!


ghost whisper 77 6 years ago

My love never left--I love you! I love you! I love you and I miss you! oh, did I mention that I love you Micky?


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

Thank you Ghost. I love you too. Thank you for love!


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The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

Micky,

Was that first one about your daughter? I have a six year old girl and you just shot a beautiful arrow right into my heart.... thank you.... I'm glad I found this....


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

The Suburban Poet, yes sir, that was for my beautiful daughter who means more to me than anything life can offer otherwise. You know that though. God bless you SB BrotherMan!


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richtwf 6 years ago

Beautiful and sad words but as always so eloquently expressed. Losing love is painful and heart-breaking and the passage of time can help to ease the loss but can never erase the memories. Thanks for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. God bless you Brother Micky.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

God bless you Brother Rich.


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acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

Gosh Micky you so often tear at my heart strings. I hope your love is returning, to lose the love of a daughter must be intolerable. She will always remain in heart heart and will return. These words were simply beautiful Micky.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago Author

God bless you acaetnna!


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aisha1257 5 years ago

Wow amazing!! I love Shoes in the Way, reminds me of my own son who just started preschool! I knew that horrible day would come eventually. The last two poems are crazy good, you resonate my own feelings from my own dark hour. I take my hat off to you! :)


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

Oh aisha. There are too many dark hours eh?! My what a road life is. Thank you Dear!


Vincent Moore 5 years ago

Oh what a stirring emotional tearing at ones heart brilliant piece. It took me back so far away in time when loving was easy and romance sublime. Ah to be in love and stay in it, amazing. I enjoyed this beautiful artistic piece. Thank you for writing it..


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

Thank you Vincent Moore! To be in love!


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arb 5 years ago from oregon

I am reminded of the words, "Better to have loved and lost, than to have never loved at all". Try and get the heart to buy that one! "The phone doesn't say I love you anymore" Funny how a single line strikes the heart. Sometimes, to up residence. Thanks for the discomfort. I will not take it for granted anymore.


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

Your images evoke the pain of loss exquisitely. Thank you for bringing your pain to this page.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

Thank you arb! Let's not take "I love you" for granted.

God bless you sligobay.


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Blessw5 5 years ago from USA

Aw Micky Dee! What a Blessing it is to Read this Hub. When me and my husband have this conversation, his words Always melts my heart. Because a Father and Daughter relationship is Always suppose to be Breath taking. What a Blessing it is for God to have Bless Us, with such Blessed and Talented Writer. God Bless You and can't wait to Read More. Blessw5 you have a fan in me. My fav: Parts in this hub.

Your shoes were left at the bottom of the stairs.

I picked them up to put them away.

I put them back as I feared the day,

You might outgrow the need to play.

And I may not see those shoes in the way.

Smiles with Tears of Sadness and Joy!


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

Hi Blessw5. Thank you very much for your thoughts. I can't pass by here without reflecting. Thank you.


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Good Morning Micky,

Yikes...bringing a tear to my eyes this morning..missing my baby girl..she is in basic training..three more weeks to go..still can't believe she is doing it..followed in my foot steps..anyway..thank you for some great poems..that pulled on my heart this morning.

Sunnie


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

Oh Sunnie! Basic training. Oh my. Our world is always getting ready to fight. God bless you dear! God bless your soldier. My prayers are with you both.


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Thank you Micky...She is my last of four..my oldest son has been in over 12 years and has done so well. Working on his masters and stationed at Ft. Lewis but something about my baby girl..sniff sniff..I know God will hold her in his hands..Thank you for your prayers.

Sunnie


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

Children never know the costs until they have children. It's easier for our children to put themselves in harm's way than for the parent to live with it. God bless.


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N.E. Wright 5 years ago from Bronx, NY

Beautiful Micky, just beautiful.

I am always thinking with your work. LOL. This time I was very close to crying also.

Thanks for sharing ....

Take Care,

N.E.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

N.E. Wright- God bless you. Thank you for liking this. This is pretty special to me.


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N.E. Wright 5 years ago from Bronx, NY

I can feel that.

Take Care,

N.E.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

God bless you NE!


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Maggie-May 5 years ago from the Island of Cape Breton to the Eastern Shores near Halifax, NS

This is a teriifc hub Micky Dee, it has the ability to evoke so many feelings, thanks for writing this,

MM


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

You've got a good heart Maggie-May. God bless.


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drpastorcarlotta 5 years ago from BREAKOUT MINISTRIES, INC. KC

Beautiful words, beautiful meaning beautiful Hub! Voted-UBeautiful. Micky Dee your beautiful..... much love.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

Thank you sister C! God bless you.


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Micky Dee 5 years ago Author

Thank you Pan. I enjoyed the video.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Pretty and sweet words you write. But the tone is quite sad. When love leaves, our hearts tend to melt. Hope you find peace. Great poem all the way. Voted awesome


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pennyofheaven 5 years ago from New Zealand

Letting go is the hardest thing to do. A powerful and moving poetry that spoke to my heart of hearts.


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baygirl33 4 years ago from Hamilton On.

Micky,I can feel your pain!Do you have her back? I didn't get that feeling.But if you did,congrats to you!Hug her tightly!

Take it from me,do anything to get her back.Blame and pride be damned!

Those are lovely words but they come from such a lonely place.I have been there!


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shruti sheshadri 4 years ago from Bangalore, India

So beautiful micky dee... I love great poetry and yours is wonderful :)


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foemeno 2 years ago from New York

B-... its almost a compliment


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Micky Dee 2 years ago Author

There are many "takes" on missing love. I go through them all but I really bog down in the "missing of love and how love can truly be". Unfortuantely, when one tastes true love - all is lost - ?

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