When You Feel Alone

When You Feel Alone

I wrote this poem for those that feel alone in the world. Like they are the only ones who are suffering. The only ones dealing with stress. The only ones with depression. And for those who feel as if God isn't there for them. Hope you enjoy.

Oh Sweet Child Of Mine

When you feel ensnared by stress

And weighed down, depressed

When you feel hatred intensified by anger, regret

And nothing seems worth it

Clench your fists

Do what you will

But don't cut those wrists

For I'm here still.



When voices of your peers are all you hear

And your eyes drown with tears

When you feel you'll never be good enough

And you think you've got it rough

Whisper words of prayer to me

Say what you need to say

For I will never leave

I will never go away.



When you feel like no one loves or cares

And no one listens, they just stare

Whne you feel hurt and in pain

And that nothing can keep you sane

Look past the shadows, see the light

Forget the bad, remember the good

For I promise you, my child, everything will be all right

Things will work out as they should.



When you think you are alone and on one's there

Talk to me and I will hear

I've been here all the while

Dried your tears, brightened your smile

And I will never abandon you

Sweet child of mine

Oh sweet child of mine

I'll hold you close

You will be fine,

You will be just fine.

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ii3rittles 5 years ago

That was beautiful! =) *Voted up!


lostwithinmyself 5 years ago

OMG beautiful poem!!

Voted up from me!! x


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you very much both of you.


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suzettenaples 5 years ago from Taos, NM

Beautiful! And darling child!


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MisguidedGhost16 5 years ago from Queens, New York

voted awesome! great poem, will be nice to read it to your sweet child, he'll thank you greatly for it.


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you very much, although that there is not my own child, he is my baby cousin.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Oh so completely beautiful.


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mottiandbander 5 years ago from Chd

Your cousin is so sweet...Nice poem..


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you. He looks very sweet but gets into everything lol


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epigramman 5 years ago

.....well you also have the power to move us with such simple but beautifully crafted and perfectly chosen words - this is your gift also - yes I have felt lonely at times - haven't we all? It's just part of the human condition - of which you write so well.

And yes I live literally 100 feet or so away from the lake and in the summer the winds are heavenly but with the approaching fall they are now starting to become a little more harsh, unforgiving and chilly - onto my second cup of coffee - some more light classic music with Mozart and thank you for allowing us to meet here at the Hub.

lake erie time ontario canada 8:45am love your name by the way, reminds me of perhaps a Neil Young or Tom Waits song


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you Epi for your such generous words.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Sweet poem of hope. Well written and composed. Bless you


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

thank you for your kind comment. I'm happy to see you enjoyed.


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Voted up ,awesome and beautiful ! I loved it , you had me hanging in anticipation of every heartfelt word , thank you for posting and welcome to hub pages!:)


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you and I am glad to hear that you enjoyed it so much. It boosts my confidence up in my writing each time I get a good comment.


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shivnandan 5 years ago from Ghaziabad

So beautiful and vote up.


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you for reading, glad you liked it.


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork

this is so beautiful and well said,

thank for sharing.

bless

annie


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

You're welcome and thank you for reading.


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jesusmyjoy 5 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

just amazing


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

thank you jesusmyjoy for your comment as well as for reading. Have a great day.


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kerlynb 5 years ago from Philippines, Southeast Asia, Earth ^_^

I love the idea of writing a poem to a child. Someday, when the child reads this, he would definitely feel empowered, very much loved. He would feel that he has never been alone and would never ever be. Voting this one beautiful as it is.


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

thank you kerlynb for reading and voting up. It's very much appreciated.


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cre8ivOne 5 years ago from Midwest, USA

Really nice ! There are people that forget these sentiments. Thanks : )


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

thank you cre8tiveOne and thank you for reading.


PenMePretty 5 years ago from Franklin

Your sincerity and heart show through in your writing.

Awesome and voted up, up, up!!! There's nothing as wonderful as caring for others--and letting them know.

Great hub.


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you PenMePretty. :)


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rochelj 5 years ago from USA

Wow, you write with meaningful beauty


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Rochelj, thank you very much. Glad you liked it.


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jesusmyjoy 5 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

just amazing


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

jesusmyjoy, thank you for your comment and for reading. :)


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jesusmyjoy 5 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

your very welcome


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great read and thank you.


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

thank you writer20


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RobinGrosswirth23 4 years ago from New York

Excellent piece. I actually chose to see the pictorial of the child as a metaphor for all humans as children of some god-like entity. And, that even though we may not see immediate answers when we pray and move through some of life's most challenging times, we are in fact being heard and beyond that, will come through into the light.

When you think you are alone and on one's there

Talk to me and I will hear

I've been here all the while

Dried your tears, brightened your smile

And I will never abandon you

Sweet child of mine

Oh sweet child of mine

I'll hold you close

You will be fine,

You will be just fine.

Authors write and readers connect with works of art, in this case, a poem.

I enjoyed this poem. Thanks.


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Cresentmoon2007 4 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you for your kind comment, I am glad you liked it.

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