When To You My Lips They Go - Poetry By Cathy Nerujen

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When to you my lips they go -
and kisses make the muse in me -
this woman - sing -
now ebb and flow -
we move here in this harmony -
your fingers send a sigh inside -
my deepest part -
my sweet desire -
a pocket full of love - you glide -
our atoms touch -
then turn to fire -

We hum our love -
and move as one -
this naked flame - so warm in you -
our bodies melt -
sweet lips and tongue -
your song it sings a love so true -
we swap the dawn -
for sun-ripe kisses -
our mingled bodies - knotted deep -
your body glows -
and warmly glistens -
your lips so red - your soul to keep -
oh take me now - sweet Cosmic Girl -
this cherry trifle Astra Dawn -
a feast for tender finger swirls -
my sweet surrendered soul is won.


Dedicated to Angels everywhere... who know they are touched by Angels. And for my darling Fehl.

Copyright (c) 2012, 2016 Cathy Nerujen. All rights reserved. This poem is published as part of a forthcoming book of romantic poetry and love poems by Cathy Nerujen, to be published in late 2016.

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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

That will be quite a book! This is as hot and loving as poetry gets!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Eugene, thank you for that. I just need about 4 more poems and I am ready to publish my book. :)

Usually anything with "Lips" in the title will be kind of hot alright. LOL. :)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you...

I am speechless...I wanna tell you how beautiful this is but my lips want to brush the words and kiss your lips instead.. :p Oh baby, I am floating and swirling right now. Mwaaaaaaaaaah! I love you so much.

Thank you for this.

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XOXOXOXOXO


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

Another great one Cathy.


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kyleesterley 4 years ago from Grand Rapids, Michigan

Really dig the title.


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Wah..i can feel the intensity and sincerity ...beautiful expression of two souls turning as one..Stay in love !


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful, Your love shines and sparkles, true love is a precious gem.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Fehl :)

Heh. I'm glad you like the new poem, honey. Mmmhhh oh I think the lips I prefer too. LOL. Be careful swirling and don't get dizzy. Heh. Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaah :P

I love you too, butterfly. ------/--(@

XOXOXOXOXOXOX

Hi Nikki :)

Aw thank you for this. I am just home from work and so happy it's the weekend. I hope your weekend is sweet. :)

Hi kyleesterley: Thank you, the title is just the first sentence there. :)

Hi angelme566: you capture this so well in your comment. Yes, and it is two souls loving as one ... so much :) Stay in love, gosh I plan to, believe me. :)

Hi Ruby :) It is always good to get your comments. That is so sweet. She is a diamond to me, and so sparkles and shines fits perfect. :) Big hugs for you and everyone here.


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Deliciously addictive, erotic teaser! =)


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epigramman 4 years ago

...I would say that as a writer you know that you've made the grade when you can invent your own language - have your own distinctive style - and you have done that here Cathy - to me that is great poetic art - when you can do what I just described - and you have done it so brilliantly here - hubbravo!! lake erie time 5:34am and you're still hot , you always will be.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you BeyondMax for this. You are certainly checking my poetry a lot today. :)

Hi Colin: Wow, these are lovely words to read and you warm the cockles of my heart. :) Um, making the grade... I just love writing romantic poems Colin. I honestly think writing out of pure love for someone is the best reason for me to write my poems. LOL. I can express those feelings in poems. And you understand that better than anyone, because you are an Epic Poet Laureate of Hub Pages and Beyond.

Heh. Thank you for saying I am hot. Fehl will be thrilled , and yes, Cassy is smiling at this too. :P

Warms hugs and smiles from Cathy today :)


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Lovely..hot... ravishing

Awesome!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you...

I wanna hold you in my arms and kiss you now..

----/----(@


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Rahul, many thanks for the news about the hot ravishment. LOL. :P

Hi Fehl. Mmmhhh wow.... oh please yes... :P


Poetic Fool 4 years ago

Cathy, so beautiful, tender and intimate. Too short though. :( I wanted it to go on and on. Simply lovely!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Poetic Fool, wow thank you for liking this so much. I am not always sure how long my poems are going top be till I write them. :)

Well, please feel free to check out my other romantic poems. Have a sweet day. :)


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Neil Sperling 4 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

Cathy - I love this piece. It catures both romance and hot desire. Well done.... "this naked flame - so warm in you -our bodies melt - sweet lips and tongue" mmmmmmmmmmmmm

Hugs my friend


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Neil, I love romantic poems. I always did. I hope I don't make it too hot. LOL. Stand by with a hose and bucket of cold water otherwise. :P

I'm glad you are enjoying my poetry today. Have a sweet weekend! Hugs for you too. :)


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Neil Sperling 4 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

LOL -- no cold shower here, I would rather sweat than shiver. Too hot is good. :-)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Heh... okay that's fine. *Puts away the bucket* LOL.


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you...

When to you my lips they go

I would never wanna know -

how heaven would take me

or hell would envy..

Dropping by to say I love you and I love your new pic. :)Mwaaaaaaaaaaaah!

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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Fehl. Gosh, I lioke the nice little poem here.

Thank you baby. I want to kiss you for that. Heh. :P

I get that heavenly feeling so much these days, with you... I love you too Fehl. Oh I wanted to update it, it needed a change. Mwaaaaaaaaaah. :)

---------/---(@


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pbwriterchick 4 years ago

Gorgeous words, Astra! Congratulations on the book! Thanks for stopping by my page today... if you hadn't, I would have never read this piece and I'm so glad I did. I haven't read a good love poem in long while. :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi pbwriterchick, thank you for the comments. I'm glad you liked my poem. Well, you are welcome to check my other love poems. They are almost all romantic poems. Even the more funnier ones. Oh, my book I hope to publish before the summer is over. :)


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

is the tree big enough for another lovebird?


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you Mhatter.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Wonderful poem that's so loving.

Voted up and beautiful.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hy writer20, thank you so much for the comments and vote. I'm glad you're enjoying my new love poem. Most of my poems are romantic. :)


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

A writer is successful, when the readers start imagine the creation and this is the beauty of this hub, good one, keep flowing


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you girishpuri. I love creating images in the reader's mind with words in my poetry. Have a sweet day.


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acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

Oh wow, this has given me butterflies - awesome!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi acaetnna, wow... butterflies haw? I love your comments always. You are a great poet. :)


IntegrityYes 4 years ago

That is very good. I definitely voted up.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

@IntegrityYes, thank you and have a sweet day... :)


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kittythedreamer 4 years ago from the Ether

That was very beautiful! Great writing. :) Voted up and beautiful.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you Kittythedreamer. :)

I'm glad you liked it. I hope you enjoy my other hubs as they are similar in their theme. Thank you for the votes. Your Hubs on Egyptology look awesome. I hope you have a sweet day. :)


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atlovesbm 3 years ago from Orange County, California

"our atoms touch -

then turn to fire "

Love this line. Been MIA from hubpages for a while but whenever I come back, I always enjoy reading your poems.


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi atlovesbm, thank you for that. That means a lot to me. Yes those atoms can be a devil. LOL. I love reading your poems too. (Just tweeted and liked one recent one for you. ) I missed your hubs and you. Please stay around longer. I hope things there are good with you. Take care and have a peaceful 2013.


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

Beautiful. I can see every wonderful moment in my minds eye. It's hard to take my gaze from. Thumbs up!


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Wow, thank you Frankie, I was just checking out some of your new hubs earlier. Gosh, is it that literal? LOL. The images are powerful and strong, and evocative... but I toned this down so it would be fit to publish here. As for the person with whom I had in mind when I wrote it, "hard to take my gaze from" is a description that fits that person so well... :P

Thank you for the thumbs, Frankie. You are an awesome writer. :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

Something brought me back here... :p

Lucky person..........


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

-- continued -- Fehl (or blaise25 here on Hub Pages)... she is very special to me. I dedicated some of my poems to her. Aw... thank you for that. You get lots of hugs for that. :) Did I mention that I saw your writing on another website and I was so impressed. You have some powerful writing there, Frankie. The world needs a voice such as yours. I hope your week is going okay.

Hey Fehl... omg I just saw this comment. :) How is my Fehl today? My cold is better.... Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :)


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

Ahh shucks Lady. I don't know what to say. Just stop already. No keep saying it. Again. He he


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

Yes! So that was you! That's such an odd website... seems very impersonal. Though Iget tons of page views for poetry and prose. Almost made $1 over a week.. never had that many views so I'm sticking with it. Also on another page for the benefit of adding ideas and cultural enrichment. Too many? Thanks again for your lovely words. In and out of hubs.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

I am better than ever :p Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Frankie, you are wonderful. I did like that collection of writing there. I left some comments. Wow, you are earning from them too. I am impressed. Please don't ever stop writing these amazing stories and prose and poetry pieces. Have a sweet weekend, Frankie. I hope you stay with the hubs too. It's good to mix the writing in different places. I am planning that with my new website.

Hi Fehl. Thank you for the lovely comments. I saw your new hub ... and I am so moved by it.... wow. I hope you read Frankie's marvelous hubs. She is very talented.

Yes, you are Better than Ever, Fehl. Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :)

Thank you for the nice comments. Writing is awesome on Hub Pages, and so are the hubbers. :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

Yeah I read Frankie's last night and some of the others... I'm catching up with the poets here. Sometimes I get so busy. :p It's sad to know the poets from before are not active anymore.


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Fehl... I noticed some poets are not active. Frankie's writing just gets me right in the gut, it is so visceral. Just heading to work now.... Thank you for chatting on the web site thing earlier. :P

That was fun. XOXOXOX

Love you so much, Fehl. Mwaaaaaaaaaaah. :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

I will be reading more from her. Her writings are raw and moving. I just saw Sannel's new account is banned again. :c

Okie TC Mwaaaaaaaaaah!


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

Oh my gosh! You two are sooo flattering. Sometimes I feel like the only thing I do right is write. blaise25.. I haven't gotten a chance to go through all your hubs yet but I intend to. Yours as well Astra. I was tweeted about twice by an online magazine two days in a row!! For two of my writings.. both posted here. I was so excited! If you have time.. tell me what you think of my newest one. I love it :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Fehl honey, yes please do read her hubs. I would love to hear what you think of them. Yes raw and moving are good descriptions.

I don't believe it. Sannel banned again? I just added her link to my website. Oh dear... I don't understand why... She is an amazing lady. Anyone with eyes to read with, and a heart can tell that.

Frankie, get used to being tweeted from now on. Never silence an honest voice. I don't think an honest voice can be silenced anyway. An honest voice always finds a way...


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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Oh Cathy Cathy Cathy... you write the most incredible awesome, most beautiful words flow like whiskey from a Genie's bottle.... LOL! Okay that's a bit OTT, but this hub... really!

Sannel joined up again? Wait, she got banned again? Just reading the above comment... Her writing is fantastic! Swedish babe with a heart of Gold! When to the door, her boots they go... Scuse my black humor...

Coffee here please....?


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

LOL... whiskey from a Genie bottle? Wow, that's a funny way of saying things. But thank you for noticing. Heh. :P

Um, that is what I heard, about Sannel. She is a lovely person and I love her passion for writing. Read her blogs, Cassy. Her writing lives on, as with any blog...

You pulled an "all-nighter", by any chance? Sound tired or sleepy.


Sannel 3 years ago

Aawww. . .Cathy, I have stayed away far too long from your absolutely beautiful poems. This is so intimate, sweet, gentle, and, whew . . . it leaves me with great images, lol!

Oh, and I read yours and Fehl's comments further up, Thank you guys, you are so sweet!

Hugs,

Sannel


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Sannel, I am so happy to see your lovely comments here. Um, yes the images you are so enjoying - are so amazing that Hub management moderated the hub. Heh. But I forgive them. LOL.

Wow, I love the words you use for describing this poem. Intimate, gentle and sweet... gee, why is that I wonder? Hehehe. :P

I love reading both of your blogs, and your winning that award is also proof to what an amazing writer you are. I always knew you were totally amazing. Sannel I will always be a loyal fan, as are many here, including Fehl and Cassy.

I love your writing and your beautiful imagination and writing style. It is so free and uninhibited. I think you were born to inspire others.

Hugs and more from me.


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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Those lips... damn! LOL!


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hehehe.... :)

You are so funny, Cassy. :)


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Astra Nomik,

Is this what I can learn to expect from you? You don't write from a pen, but your heart and your soul and I must say, this is some kind of serious hotness! Woah!!! Nice... so voting up and many other!

Cat


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Cat, thank you for checking my poetry. Um, yes... it is mostly romantic poems I write - though I am branching out, in new directions with my writing. I always write from the heart. There's no other way to express love I know ... as writing goes, at least. :P

Um, wow... some serious hotness? Really? Okaaaaayyyy.... LOL.

I have other poetry offerings that compete with the um.. hotness of this poem. Hehehe. I am so funny.

I also recently put a few new poems on my poetry blog. (Actually I do keep a notebook for penning my poems...)

Poetry is my passion. Thank you for reading. I love your hubs and I enjoyed them today. :)

Cathy.


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Cathy,

There's no need for a but... I love romantic poetry, it's nice to see that these kinds of feelings are still out there and being felt and appreciated by others. Though, I give you credit and totally support the idea of you branching out; an artist is an artist and the possibilities should be endless. Writing from the heart is the best way to read and the most pleasurable to read... it's hard to get into generic writing... you know? If you can make your reader feel anything you've felt; magic has been created.

Hotness... lol, I try to be careful of the words I use... there's always someone watching ;-)

You are funny and I'll definitely be checking out your other um hot poems... lol.

I'll have to find my way over to your blog too, promise; just might not be until the sun comes up as I'm holding my eyes open with one hand and typing with the other :D

Thank you so much... I really look forward to reading more of your um hotness... and anything else you do :D

Cat


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Cat, thank you for the comments. Yes, there is no need for "but". I hope romantic poetry or the kind of poetry I write - never goes out of fashion. :)

I am working on a big magazine-cum-writing project at the moment. It will cover a variety of writing genres. I think expanding one's reach as a writer is necessary and with no downsides attached. I always make time for poetry, both here or on my Poetry blog. Poetry is in my blood.

I agree so much about writing from the heart, Cat. Your comment about creating magic is so true. Every writer picks a spot from where they start and they build outwards slowly. As a woman who both works, and has tried her hand at editing on personal projects - and I find I love it - it gives me the confidence to branch out.

Oh, the hotness thing is never too far away from some of my hubs. I think the secret of good writing is to make it such that appeals right across the spectrum of readers... and what they like or find appealing.

Feel free to check out my blog, Cat. You are always welcome. Both Fehl and Cassy have some excellent hubs well worth reading, if ... um... hotness is your thing. LOL. Take care. :)


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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

One of my all time sexy favorites of yours, Cathy! :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Cassy. Yes, it is one of my poems that has um... additional hotness added. LOL. I loved writing this poem. Where are your poems, Cassy? When can we read them? LOL. I am putting you on the spot now. :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Please read my new one - You're My Gasoline. Thank you.


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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Reading it and gasping in amazement, Hun. Triple Holy Mother of Everything!

Music meets poetry meets... Cathy Nerujen! What a collision! You wrote this in Scotland, babe? Must be something in the water! I love it!


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hehehe. The water. You mean the water in Boracay, or a nice warm country in Asia, perhaps? It is more than what's in the water, Cassy. LOL.

Look at me telling you this. :)

I am smiling now. Hehehe. My sis says we have a fridge fetish now. Care to tell her how this is, Miss Curly Cassy? :)


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Cheeky Girl 3 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

My bad! Not in Scotland! The new ones, yes! I was browsing the Gasoline hub and this and got my comment back to front. Sorry!

The waters in sunny South Asia of course! The water over here will freeze a girl's butt off!

Oh no! Not a fridge fetish! Aaaargh! Please leave the banana cake with cream for later, okay? Nerujen sisters are cake fiends! LMAO! :P


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Um, I wondered about the Scotland statement, yes. Oh you mixed it with the gasoline. LOL. That sounds so funny the way I say it here. :) Hehehe

South East Asia and Philippines, yes please.

You cake will be there tonight. Nerujen sisters love cake.... Hehehe.

I am teasing, Miss Curly. XO


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

I know now why love the "water" especially today....

Geez I should have known....


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Fehl my honeybunny. :)

Oh wow, did you mention "water"? Oh you are driving me nuts now. You know my weakness is water so much... Hehehe. You are my sweet Mermaid and I love you for saying this. Especially after what happened yesterday.... :P

I love you Fehl. :)

When to you my lips they go -

they will stay there....

XOXOXOXOXOXOX

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