The Writer's Block - A Poem

Writers Block

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An empty earthen vessel

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There's a drought up in my brain and I don't know how it got there
It seems that now my head is only filled with air.

Like an empty earthen vessel with nothing left inside
My thoughts and all my dreams have gone away and died.

There's nothing in my head my brain is all alone
I look and think and wonder, but it seems no one is home.

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Where thoughts once wandered freely I see emptiness
Just like an old time pauper, my brain is penniless.

Did monsters chase my thoughts away, or waves come from an ocean
To steal the thoughts I used to have and just leave blank emotion?

I sit and think and try to write but nothing comes anew
It's like I'm cooking without food, there's nothing for the stew.

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What strange and scary happening has caused this writer's block
Perhaps if I just sit here and stop looking at the clock

Some new and glorious thoughts will spring from somewhere deep inside
And words will fly like sparrows becoming now my guide.

The emptiness will fill itself like it never has before
The writer's block will leave me and I'll feel that old time lure.


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To write words with new meaning, the ones satisfying all my druthers
Words with feeling and appealing to all sisters, brothers, mothers.

To send away this writer's block as quickly as it came and
Start anew with glorious words that help to fan the flame

Of writing what I'm feeling when the urgings come to me
So I can see the finished work before the thoughts all flee.

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There's nursery rhymes and songs to write as each day begins
A finished work, no matter what, is how the writer wins.

So waiting for this block to end and go away for good
Is all this writer needs today don't be misunderstood

To see the words all flowing as you start to write them down
Is worth the world to writers, its better than a crown!

When you get writer's block;

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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Very imaginative creation this is! Loved your poem all the way! The subject of the poem itself describes the imaginative powers you have!

Beautifully flowing vocab and a wonderful poem!


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Thank you Rahul! I am flattered by your comments and happy you liked my poem.


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

For someone with writer's block this poem is superb!! Way to go Mary!! Keep on hubbin'!!


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Thanks SS. Just can't figure out what to write about next!


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diogenes 4 years ago from UK and Mexico

Ha! Tilly, I saw you gathering enthusiasm and creativity as the poem progressed. It started to have better cadence and rhyme.

I guess you beat the block...for now?

Bob


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fpherj48 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

Tillie.....REALLY??? Sooooooo, what do you write when you DON'T have writer's block??!! You're kidding, of course my inspired scribe!!!!

Love this. UP +++


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Bob is exactly right! If you feel you still have a block.. just go through this majestic piece of yours once again!


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

I wish I could write this well, with or without writer's block!!

Superb and voted up!


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joanveronica 4 years ago from Concepcion, Chile

Writer's block doesn't seem to stop you all that much! I have not experienced it yet, but I hope I will be able to produce something at this level if it does happen. Be happy and write away!


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

Ugh...writer's block...I swear it's a disease! :) If this is you on writer's block, I'd hate to see you when you are on top of your game! :) Voting up and awesome and then some.


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

I'm working on that cadence Bob...block not beat yet.

No my GF, I'm not kidding. There's a block in my head but I'm working on it.

Thanks Rahul, I just might do that.

MovieMaster, you never have to worry about writing well...you always do.

Joan I hope you never experience it! Thanks for the encouragement.

TTombs, how right you are. Thanks for the confidence, now if I could just find an antibiotic to clear this up ;)


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Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

Tillsontitan, I enjoyed this and am bang in the middle of a block at the moment - I can rattle off comments like there's no tomorrow but haven't had an 'idea' for a week now. Your poem rang lots of bells and I'm hoping this dry spell will pass soon. Voted up!


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I just went through this the other day for the first time since I joined HugPages; thankfully it lasted one day and it did just go away on its own once I had taken a break and a walk. Great poem.


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mary615 4 years ago from Florida

I think we all know this feeling very well. I take a break for a day or two, and all of a sudden I get inspired to write something. You expressed your feeling very well.


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jonmcclusk 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

What does a writer do when he has writers block? Well, he writes about writers block of course! Great poem by a great writer!


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Jools, sounds like we're in the same place! Hope yours passes soon, still working on mine.

Billy, glad yours was a short spell.

Mary, just telling it like it is ;)

Thanks Jon, couldn't think of anything else :)


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Thanks for sharing this gem;take care and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Great poem and a good subject for a hub that is interesting for all writers.


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Thanks Blossom, guess we've all been there.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

I usually write about it just as you have so eloquently done--


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Thank you Audrey.


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prairieprincess 4 years ago from Canada

Love this! You literally wrote yourself out of your writer's block. I am happy to make your acquaintance and loved this poem. I look forward to reading more. Also, I'm your latest follower!


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Nice to meet you prairieprincess and happy to have you as a follower! I almost wrote myself out of my block, I did write the poem but now I have to come up with something else (smile)


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Au fait 4 years ago from North Texas

Took a class in English Lit a couple of years ago. Instructor turned out to be a poetry aficionado. Got an A in the class, but promised myself I would never read poetry again. Enjoyed poetry now and then before that class, but having to read and analyze poetry of every sort every day for weeks was not a favorite activity.

Have since read a couple of poems here on hubpages, this one of yours being one of them. The other one was excellent as is yours here. Not as painful as I thought it would be (reading poetry in general, not yours specifically), so perhaps the passing of time is improving my outlook. ;) I hope you will see the humor in my situation -- I'm beginning to, so hope is alive. I like your poem. Well written and very astute.

Voted you UP and awesome!


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

It would appear Aufait that you need to find more humorous poems to help drag you into poetry appreciation ;) Reading and analyzing day after day can make you tired of any type of writing!

Glad I could give you hope!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

I can so much relate your feelings and pent up emotions.

I just loved your poem.


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Thanks Vinaya, I guess it happens to all of us at one time or another.


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Well you sure came up with a good one to say you have writers block. Lol. Loved this well written and made me smile. Something will come along and inspire you when you least expect it.

I have the ideas, with me its just finding the time and getting my butt (or rather my fingers) into gear.

Loved it and voting up


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Thanks Rosemay. Sometimes I think there's nothing in the world left to write about and out of the blue and idea pops into my head.


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lindacee 4 years ago from Southern Arizona

I'm currently in stuck mode. While I realize this too shall pass, it still gets me down. However, it is comforting to know it happens to all of us. Thanks for sharing your inspirational poem. Makes me feel much better! Voted UP, useful and awesome!


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Thanks Linda. When I think I can write, I can't and when I think I can't I can...maybe I should start writing Dr.Seus! Hang in there, something'll come to you.


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moiponetsoka 4 years ago from South Africa

i cant write at the moment i am out of ideas i have been struck by drought of the brain lol great hub


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Ignore it and it will come moiponetsoka. Sometimes the harder we try the move evasive the thoughts become. Hope a little rain falls your way.


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Made 4 years ago from Finland

This is such a great poem that I think all writers can relate to. I'm not sure all writers would be able to write a poem like this because of their writer's block. You did it tillsontitan! Voted up and awesome! I envy your talent. :)


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Super coming from you Made! I'm sure you could do the same given the situation ;)


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carter06 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

When I saw this I laughed and had to comment as like yourself I wrote a funny similar poem last year when stuck with the block...enjoyed this and so identify with 'the harder we try the more evasive thoughts become'

Great hub, voted up ++...cheers


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Thanks Carter...now I'll have to go check yours out too.


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Another great poem that obviously surface at the right time. I love it.


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York Author

Glad the timing was right for you Irc!


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Captial B 2 years ago from Miami/Fort Lauderdale Area

I find it interesting how the one thing I love about writing (poetry) and the thing I hate the most about writing (writer's block) are put together so wonderfully accurate. Thank you for sharing. I really need this.


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tillsontitan 2 years ago from New York Author

Thank you so much Capital B! I am flattered by your comment, and glad I made my point ;)


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AudreyHowitt 2 years ago from California

Such a clever write! I had forgotten about this one I think! Made me chuckle today!


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Phyllis Doyle 2 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

Very clever, indeed, Mary. I enjoyed reading this poem.

"Where thoughts once wandered freely I see emptiness

Just like an old time pauper, my brain is penniless."

I often feel like that. When I am chock full of writing ideas, I start a file on each new thought for times when I am "penniless" -- it sometimes helps. hahaha


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

very well written til.. I thought I read this before.. hmm maybe i didnt leave a comment due to writer's block.. I really enjoyed the poem..clever indeed..Bless you


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tillsontitan 2 years ago from New York Author

Thanks Audrey, a chuckle is always a good thing :)

Phyllis I think I may have to steal your idea and start a file, then I won't be penniless!

Bless you Frank, always so good to see you here.

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