Whisper In The Wind (poem)

A whisper in the wind so gently fell

Upon a sleeping garden rich with dew

The tears of dreams still waiting to come true

Amid the blossom of dawn’s morning spell

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This whisper in the wind its secret flew

Across the hearts of flowers which there dwell

Who felt the wonder there among them swell

Their light and reason soon would be in view

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A moment of silence took all around

A chorus of beauty waits to astound

What whisper of the wind was so profound

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Come see the glory and meaning to this

Amid such perfection how could we dismiss

Now whole world waits to feel true lovers kiss

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

I love the anticipation in this poem. I can almost hear the lovers taking each other's breath away yearning for their lips to touch.


Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi Martin,

"The tears of dreams still waiting to come true"

Filled with beauty and intensity.

Voted up and away


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Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

you really know how to tame words.. voted awesome mhatter!


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

Beautiful write!!


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

Very romantic Martin. Thank you.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Spring always seems to sentimentally attract new found love, eh?


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

This is another beautiful poem...You are so gifted..Thank you for writing each day....


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

Amazingly beautiful, Martin.

The music was magnificent and like the fragrant bouquet of wine,

the music paired nicely with the poem.

DJ.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very passionate and intense, Mh!

Voted up +++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Lovely poem.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

The photo is most beautiful and the words of expression has great strength of love.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

A moment of silence took all around

A chorus of beauty waits to astound

What whisper of the wind was so profound

A great poem and particularly loved the above words.

Voted up and enjoy your day Martin.

Eddy.


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

That is beautiful. Real poetry. Loved it.


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teaches12345 3 years ago

Loved this passionate poem. Keep writing and expressing your wisdom.

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