Whispers (poem)

If you could see her on the dance floor

You couldn’t help but feel her moves

Calling you in whispers so loud so loud

Do you want more You want more You want more

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I draped my arms around this soft pearl

The music held us to explore

Take me to your world she whispers whispers

Let’s make it whirl Make it whirl Make it whirl

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Time then stopped and people disappeared

We rose to our heaven apart

Whispers echoing She wants to wants to

Still the beat of the music… or is it my heart

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For this moment, two transform to one

She feels my thoughts. I share her form

What need for whispers when her eyes her eyes

The midnight sun… time for fun. I’m undone.

She whispers…

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cam8510 6 weeks ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

Martin, the poem's effectiveness at describing emotions and physical desire are made stronger by the repeating phrases. The last one caused my mind to continue on. "She whispers....[whispers....whispers].


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Faith Reaper 6 weeks ago from southern USA

Love this, Mh! Dramatic and passionate ...I could feel the desire.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 5 weeks ago from Riga, Latvia

Wonderful poetry.


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MsDora 5 weeks ago from The Caribbean

Those whispers meant for one person are intoxicating for many who read. Good work!


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Surabhi Kaura 4 weeks ago from Toronto, Canada

Lovely... so lovely!

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