Whoever You Are

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photo credit: TAHANI al oSiMiY's flickr photostream

Whoever you are

Please bump into me now

Or tomorrow or next week

Coz I’m tired of waiting

Falling and breaking


Whoever you are

Can you please hurry

Don’t know anymore

If I could endure this

Every night just gets colder


Whoever you are

Please say your name

Unravel yourself now

Coz I’m tired of writing

The wrong ones, erasing


Whoever you are

Please don’t scare me

Was weak to fear

Vulnerable always been

When I push away please stay


Whoever you are

Please don’t believe me

When I say you kill me

I breathe the air

You breathe


Whoever you are

Please don't listen

When you hear my heartbeat

It isn't enough

Every part of me wants your every part


Whoever you are

Please don’t be too kind

Don’t love me much either

If I find you do

Whoever you are


A bad girl like me…

Wouldn't deserve

a good guy like you...



© 2010-Jan.  b l a i s e


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advisor4qb 6 years ago from On New Footing

Love it!


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Run Down Battery 6 years ago from UK

such torture coming through... you've just summed up exactly how I feel...


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

O blaise that was gorgeous. I'm sure you are worth more than you think you are.. Not everyone can use words to such beauty, the way you do, bless you


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@advisor4qb

glad to see you here again. Thanks for liking it! :)

@RDB

what do you feel exactly? did you write a hub bout it? gotta read yours tonight.. THANKS for reading and commenting! :)

@Dim

Hi, Dim! Your comments make me smile as always, thank you! :) I don't realize my worth sometimes unfortunately.. :c God bless..


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Oh Blaise, you rock us with your love and then "not too much". You are deserving of an intense love. Where is it? Thanks


poetlorraine 6 years ago

who is whoever you are?


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Petra Vlah 6 years ago from Los Angeles

This is a great poem and "wherever you are" (HP included)you deserve much praise for writing it. Thank you


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@Micky

hey, Mik! Thank you. Everyone deserves it but not every time.. Hope it's halfway.. :)

@Poet

glad to see you :) someone who'd be crazy in love with whoever I am. Hey, 'whoever you are' who are you? lol

@Petra Vlah

thanks for the praise! :) nice to see you


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heart4theword 6 years ago from hub

Great poem! I remember being at that same place, at times in my life. Just wish when a person is there, it wouldn't hurt so much:( Great Hub! So good to put your feelings down on paper:) Don't give up, keep looking up! The right one will come along:)


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Ghost Whisper 77 6 years ago from The U.S. Government protects Nazi War Criminals

Excellent poem! I am making my rounds on reading-between working-so glad that I did! I will be back....:)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@heart4theword

Thanks a lot, I admire your insights as always :)

@GhostWhisper

cool, reading-between-working ;) Thank you, see you around!


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA

A very good poem. Thanks for it and also for following me.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks Cupid51! :)


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

Wow... nice work.. a very strong poem!


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

Nice poem. Sounds as though it was straight from the heart. Though, I hope when 'whoever you are' arrives they are met by someone whom knows they deserve the greatest love, regard, and magical feeling. You deserve it, I deserve it... we all deserve it..But, I don't it arrives until we, know within ouselves that we deserve it..I'm ready.. :)

ps. ~ The bad girl line may actually attract 'whoever ever' .... 'who knows'? LOL


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

I liked this Hub. You are a good writer, and your feelings are there. I hope you find what you are looking for. You deserve it.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@CM

Thanks a bunch for always stopping by and commenting :)

@Invictus

Ah, just a lonely and empty moment made me scribble those words…Everyone deserves it :) The bad girl line? LOL hope it wouldn’t define ‘mean’ as it may sound. Hehe As I’ve said, I felt lonely and empty while writing it, that I ended up excruciating myself…

Thanks, Invictus! Your words speak a lot of lessons :)

@Cheeky

Thank you for the lovely comment and hope :) I’m not looking for something, I’m just missing something…


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Dark Heart 6 years ago

Completely blew me away.What an ending.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

^_^ what can I say I love putting twists :p

Thanks DH!


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Karen Russell 6 years ago

I LOVE IT, REALLY ENJOY VISITING YOUR SPACE, THANKS...


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

You sparkle in these lines...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@KR

thank you for always visiting.. :)

@cheeky

thanks for the shining comment :)


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

So deeply felt - I can relate to it...


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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

There's nothing a nice guy responds more to than a bad girl...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

hell yea sometimes LOL thanks Mentalist acer!


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Quite sublime. You write in a way that moves and transforms. I envy your talent, blaise25.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi Cath! You always flatter me girl :) Thanks so much! XO


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Alya rose 6 years ago from From beyond the reeds

You are very talented when putting down how you feel,but your under this illusion that your not worth much,everyone is worth more than they realize,i do hope you'll realize.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

That's a great compliment, thanks Alya rose :)


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Awe, Fehl, how I adore your straight forward approach! That what makes your poetry stand out and makes a difference to everyday life. You don't go beating around the bush, you just smack it right on the forehead =) Though it shows all of the pent up emotions and insecurities stuffs, but Fehl, you are awesome, you deserve the best of the best of the best! =)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Aw Max thank you so much. Yes I always smack it right on the forehead LOL My readers make my poetry stand out too :) Just like you. What are we gonna do now if our hubs Zzzz.... hehe You are awesome! You deserve more than the best :) xx


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Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

Heartfelt and genuine. Written with honesty and without fear. I hope you have found what you are looking for and know you deserve only the best :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Everyone deserves only the best but not everyone found the only thing or person they deserve. Thank you for reading. I always love your comments :)

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