Why God

It spills out into everyone and takes away all good.
It’s the sickest of it all it falls without reason
Its not fair!
ITS NOT FAIR !!!
Why couldn’t life be life without death.
Its wicked seed is sown unto many.
It carry’s its weight out onto every.
Would it matter when they die
Due to they living their life.
The hearts flower Is so pretty
Before the beyond insidious cancer swallows .
Drowning while breathing aren’t they.
This world cruel of the dark cracks in night
It spits at it and denies us day life.
It’s not fair!
ITS NOT FAIR!!!

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Jen's Solitude 6 years ago from Delaware

Death is our greatest enemy, it is good to find the answer to why it happens and when it will cease. The Bible is crucial in finding reliable answers. Your poem is very good!


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

So deeply felt, very well done...


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darrinintheden 6 years ago from Edson, Alberta

thank you for sharing


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

loved this part

ITS NOT FAIR !!!

Why couldn’t life be life without death.

Its wicked seed is sown unto many.

It carry’s its weight out onto every.

Would it matter when they die

very cool and one everyone can relate to

hard to pick

but this might be my fav

but your confusing me

now I want to bring out some of my poems

xo

Kimberly


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

One Of My Personal

Favorites As well.

Thank You For The Intrest.

David Wayne


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Sunshiney31 6 years ago

So very interesting all the answers are there you just have to look to find them..heart felt and honest I love it ....great job


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Very Glad To know

You Enjoyed.


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Sky321 6 years ago from Canada

I like your poem. I look forward to read more of them.


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

So Good To Hear!

Thank You @Sky


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Lisa Luv 4 years ago from Conneticut, USA

EXCELLENT!


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Awful Poet 4 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank YOuu`


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Lisa Luv 4 years ago from Conneticut, USA

You are most welcome...I only speak the truth... :)


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Awful Poet 4 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

I only listen to truth.


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Lisa Luv 4 years ago from Conneticut, USA

KOOL---always keep it REAL...

Have a great day!


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Awful Poet 4 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Always`

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