Wild Geese Fly As A Team..... Shouldn't We?

In Formation


Wild Geese

Wild Geese fly

Fly so high

Always in formation

With great determination

They work for each other

Taking the lead

In turns

Slowly swapping over

Helping, helping each other

This is what we should do

Humans like no other

Why do we not learn

Like Geese on the wing

If we did

Where would we be now.

They help the weaker ones

Not walk all over them

And trample on them

Killing their spirit

Spirit is within us

Why not nurture it for the good

For the better good of our fellow men

Let us make a promise here and now

To be like Geese on the wing

Flying in formation

Let us fly higher than before

To reach the goals we aspire to

It is the only way

You know I am not wrong

It all takes time to serve our fellow man

Geese do it

That's good enough for me.

I look forward to seeing you in the sky


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mikeq107 5 years ago

Love it..great Hub and great timing...I truly believe the world is begining to wake up and take back what has been rightfully theirs from the few that have robbed them for so long...how much does a person really need to meet their needs..not much which leaves plenty for thier neighbours....great poem!!!!


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poshcoffeeco 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire Author

mikeq107 thanks for you very quick response.It is great to get such positive feedback. Good on you.

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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

I love your style of writing it's very easy to read and I don't have to go back over to understand.

This one is great. Voted up and away.

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poshcoffeeco 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire Author

Thanks w20. I appreciate you following my work. It gives me great pleasure to know you like what I do.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Great way of putting things! It would be great if people could do that. I'm always willing to pitch in there and help others unfortunately a lot of people just want to be left alone. Love those pictures. Every fall I watch their formations flying over my house.

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Dave Mathews 5 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

One thing I've noticed about a flock of geese. When they land and feed, the leaders the males always stand guard as the rest of the flock eats. Then once the flock is full and resting the males take turns feeding. There is always two standing guard all the time.

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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Aha, this is so beautiful, if only we would do the same for mankind. Thank you.....

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poshcoffeeco 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire Author

Thanks always ex for stopping by my hub to place a comment.It is so nice to get positive feedback.

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apurva joshi 5 years ago from INDIA

nice one. quite creative . voted up:)

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poshcoffeeco 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire Author

Thanks AJ for the comments. Much appreciated.

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Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

Awesome. It's truly a very Wonderful poem, written so nicely. You have a very beautiful writing style and I like it. Keep it up.

Trust you are all well.

Best Wishes,


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