Wild Horses


I hear something

Calling out to me

Out into the wild

Setting me free

The rapture

Held within

Stirring feet

I am shaped by

It's very heat

So when the sun

Sets west

I will be gone

I need to go

Finding my home

In the dawn

When the sun rises

In the east

My heart stampedes

Wild horses

Had set me free

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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Great Caroline, your pics didnt all show, but the poem is what counts.

Love

Michael


Ghaelach 4 years ago

Hi Caroline.

By me all three pic's came through.

Beautiful poem.

The horse is a wonderful creature.

Take care LOL Ghaelach


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Senoritaa 4 years ago

Wonderful flow, and the pictures of those horses are stunning!


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

There you go running like flowing water only this time compared to the beautiful wild horses running free.

A great representation for your your presence.

Great work Caroline , till we write again , stay well.

Bless.


KatrineDalMonte 4 years ago

Very nice Caroline, accompanied by beautiful images :-)


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PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

So beautiful--I love horses---and your poem was great.

I would love to live where in the vast unknown with horses running wild and free.

I voted up and beautiful.

Bobbi


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

The rapture held within stirring feet, beautiful...


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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Beautiful work, Caroline, and I love horses. Horses, both wild and tame, play a major part in my novel, "The Bellwether."


stessily 4 years ago

Caroline, The beautiful freedom of wild horses is captured wonderfully in your poem. The images of wild horses have captivated me since childhood, and when I think of freedom, of the wind flowing through my hair and running with the wind, I think of wild horses. Your poem brought those images and wishes back to me.


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mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Nice imagery. Your spirit was set free with this one.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Awesome! I love how wild mustang run across the plains. Your poem made me think of galloping horses.


Sueswan 4 years ago

Hi Caroline

Beautiful, just like the wild horses.

Voted up and away

Have a good day.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Michael thank you for your comment and words. I hope the pix show now.

@ Thank you Ghaelach. :)

@ Senoritaa thank you!

@ Sky thank you for the great compliment!

@ Hi Katrine thank you!

@ PurvisBobbi thank you! I would like to live there too.

@ Always Thank you!

@ SubRon thank you! I would like to check out your novel.

@ Stessily thank you for the kind words. I'm glad it brought back memories for you.

@ Mckbirdbks thank you. Always good to see you!

@ Gypsy thank you for all your support!

@ Sueswan thank you very much!


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Neil Sperling 4 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

this poem made me think of the Rolling Stones Song "Wild Horses"

Nice


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Neil Sperling 4 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada


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learner365 4 years ago

Real nice Caroline,a nice reading it is. The pictures are so cool as well. Nice work you have done again :)

Voted up up and away !!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Neil thank you. I love that song. I'm going to add it to the hub. It makes it better. :)

@ Learner thank you very much!


The Fastionista 4 years ago

Love this, Caroline! It's so uplifting to imagine the spirit so free, and the wild horses capture that feeling beautifully. Voted up and beautiful!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you so much The Fashionista!


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savanahl 4 years ago

Very nice flow to this one and great ending!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thanks Savanahi great to meet you.


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Cre8tor 4 years ago from Ohio

Love the poem...love the song...looking forward to reading more.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Cre8tor for the kind words. Glad you liked it.


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Angela Brummer 4 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

Absolutely beautiful!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thanks Angela

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