Will You?


Constricted in my own skin,

I cry for my release

Trapped in a world I made my own

Will you think of yesterday to mourn?


My flaws are open,

Displayed for your perception

Will you see what has been offered?


Shadowed by regretful words

My proclamation has been presented

Will you hear the words I've spoken?


Lost in a sea without a vessel

Drowning, here I tread

Will you grant me my salvation?

Or will you be my own demise?

┬ęBethany Vine

4.20.12


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rajan jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

Bethany, breathtaking poem. You know how to play with words! Voted up, awesome.


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BethanyLynn211 4 years ago from Bangor, Pa Author

Thank you Rajan :)


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Thanks for sharing, Bethany. I shared this!


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BethanyLynn211 4 years ago from Bangor, Pa Author

Awesome! Thank you KaraokeGuy! =]

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