Wind Upon His Face (tanka)

One more day he greets

With a wind upon his face

Causing him to sigh

To be blessed by such a touch

Removing yesterday’s tears


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Very beautiful. Love it!

Up and more and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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Nellieanna 3 years ago from TEXAS

Beautiful imagery, captured in so few words. I love it, Martin. Must vote it up and across!


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Awesome and so beautiful.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful, Martin!


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Very beautiful my friend !


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Beautifully said so briefly. Love it.


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

I can only echo the other comments - beautiful. (sigh)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Lovely sentiments.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

You, sir, are a great poet.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Awesome words thanks


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Now that was a great thought. Well done!

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