Wind Whisper (poem)

The wind returns returns a whispered wish

My heart now burns it yearns a lovers’ gift

In dreams it churns and learns to sweetly drift

And no concerns or spurns can cause a swish

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Soft wind recall recall a whispered hope

My soul and all enthrall for one of these

To put a stall to squall perhaps to ease

This mindless sprawl which fall on this to cope

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The sun and stars and moon all seem to stall

For moment which a dream and whisper yearn

Event once more returning for its call

Confounding hidden longings which now burn

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Sweet wind return return to whisper this

My lips now yearn they burn for lover’s kiss

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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Ohhhh I am going to call you theone of the most Romantic Poet at the hub... that last line

My lips now yearn they burn for lover’s kiss

Oh so yearning

blessed assurance

My poet friend

hugs from tennessee

sharing

debbie


Janhorner 4 years ago

I drifted into the poem, and felt so peaceful. Beautiful.

Jan


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TToombs08 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

Indeed, I agree with Debbie, a true romantic poem. Well done!


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cam8510 4 years ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

nice, very nice.


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

Sensual and seductive, very lovely.


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Beautiful, it's so romantic. I wish I could write like you, I really love it. Voted up!


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bac2basics 4 years ago from Spain

How I live this poem. You have captured a longing so well. Beautiful words, profound sentiment. Thank you mhatter.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Beautiful flow.... You could just hear the wind whisper in your ears! Love it, and enjoyed reading it! Voting up....


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SweetiePie 4 years ago from Southern California, USA

Very alluring poem.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Bravo Mhatter!


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Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

Absolutely Beautiful!!!! Awesome Job!!!

Voted Up, Awesome, and Beautiful!!!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful, every line ...Bravo Mhatter


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Up and awesome. I adore the rhyme scheme, as well as the wonderful words. Bravo!


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

Some things just...stick with a person, eh? You're an amazing poet, my friend...my mentor..


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi

Oh, i got lost in the serenity!...romance master, you rocked again !


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Sigh romance. Voted up and beautiful. Passing this on.


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teaches12345 4 years ago

I believe this is the first romantic verse I have read of yours. Perhaps, I should say, the most passionate that stirs the heart! Absolutely lovely!


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algarveview 4 years ago from Algarve, Portugal

Hello, Mhatter99, just beautiful, like a dance... Just loved it! Voted up and beautiful and sharing! Take care!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

beautiful poem.


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

I love the thought of the wind whispering things. Great imagery! Interesting music.

Well done and voted up.

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