Winding Unwinding We

Winding Unwinding We~

Our bright moon glows in the nights star lit sky

And then all the plain white shades are quickly lowered

Not shortly after all the plain white doors close in synch

But then the bright sun rises into the harmonically ticking blue lit sky

Then all the shades are all gently raised with morning

Not shortly after all the plain white doors swing open

Up and down all the strangers ways cross

Across all snow white neon streets.

Comments 17 comments

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Sky321 6 years ago from Canada

Nice!


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

I love the evening and morning you brought us through.

Beautifully written and I , anyways fot so many messages in such a short time.

Bravo Buddy Bravo

xo

ps you don't longer email

is it cause i am female?

Such a degree of betrayal

My choo choo has derailed

All I try is to deep inhale

visualize a whale

looking still this pail

Its over no more hail

I'm free, out of jail

yet still no mail

I will eat a falafel

and wait for my awful

ok?

ha


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thevoice 6 years ago from carthage ill

lovely poem great read thanks


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank You @ Sky

@ Kimberly

Very Good To Hear From You

And Glad To Hear You Enjoyed.

As For The Emails

Ahw Its Not You Its My Paint.

As For The Falafel

Save Me A Bite


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

@TheVoice

Glad You Stopped By


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JerseyGirl 6 years ago from Jersey Shore

Loved this... keep publishing.


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truster 6 years ago from A Bed of Roses

Intriguing! LOL


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

Pehraps our error is closing the blinds (our eyes) to the things

found in the night (darkness), more beauty can be found in the secrets and the things we keep behind doors. Very thought provoking.


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Good one.


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

hi, you don't like me anymore, just because it takes me 3 days to read an email shouldn't stop u from sending them *sniff*

your AWFUL

xo


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Dont Sniffle*

Heres A

Electric Hankerchif*


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

So Very True Summer


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lovelypaper 6 years ago from Virginia

Nice picture and nice poem. You are a good poet.


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

That photo stole

My online attention.

So I stole It.

Its Quite Pleasent

Thank You


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Debarshi Dutta 6 years ago from Calcutta

pretty imaginative.


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Deborah Demander 6 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

You have captured the essence of poetry here.

Namaste.


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Glad You Stopped By

@ Deborah

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