Winter Time Haiku

I thought that for my next magical hub that I would simply write a little haiku from deep inside of myself. After all if some other people here at the Hub Pages can write an enormous amount of hubs by just simply putting a few words together and calling it a haiku, then I can certainly write one good haiku to get a Hub Page accolade too. Here's a refreshing look at snow as it quietly covers a winter mountaintop through the flowing words of a haiku. Seventeen syllables carefully put together to form one beautiful story. It's all here for you to enjoy. So here it is from my tender side, and try reading it to yourself or other people in a very DEEP voice.........................

Have a nice day.
Have a nice day.

Snow falls quietly

Covering the mountaintop

It is beautiful

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TheHoleStory 19 months ago from Parsons, West Virginia

I tried reading your Haiku just as you recommended, and it was awesome! I recommend this quick read to everyone out there!


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Say Yes To Life 19 months ago from Big Island of Hawaii

Winter is my favorite season, because I LOVE skiing and snowboarding!


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grand old lady 19 months ago from Philippines

Now that's something lovely to meditate on.


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manatita44 19 months ago from london

Masterfully done. Now I can appreciate your name more. I believe that if you read some of mines, then you will appreciate my name The Lantern Carrier.

This is my second visit. Bro you are so good, that I do not understand why you follow so many and have so few Hubs. Write more poems, write prose and write to me if you need someone to talk to. Much peace.


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sheilamarie78 19 months ago

Winter has many haiku moments. I enjoyed reading yours.


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CorneliaMladenova 19 months ago from Cork, Ireland

Really beautiful haiku, thanks for sharing :)


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Supuni Fernando 19 months ago from Colombo, Sri Lanka

I love haiku's and this is so inspiring and beautiful


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torrilynn 19 months ago

beautiful and elegant. i absolutely love reading Haiku's. best of wishes.


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Bidd Waxx 19 months ago from Wisconsin

Very well done. Luv it!


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R. Anderson 19 months ago from Sunny California USA

Great Haiku my friend! And thanks for the fan mail you sent me. That was very nice of you. Cheers!


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AudreyHowitt 19 months ago from California

Ah--so nicely done!


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aviannovice 18 months ago from Stillwater, OK

Nothing like the scenery of refreshing snow. Well done.


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gerimcclym 11 months ago from Colorado

Loved it!I live in Colorado and your poem reminded me of how the snow falls here.

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