Wisp You Away (poem)

Come with me darling I‘ll wisp you away

A moment to dream

And open a door


Come with me darling I‘ll wisp you away

The stars which you touch

Where made long ago


Remember those heartbeats shared with pillows

And tomorrows were waiting for moments of you

Each chance was a fresh breath of excitement

Your mirror offered a glance at the truth


Soft embers of your safely hid treasures

Calling for the light which once gave them birth

Listen to the long and lasting murmurs

Singing praise of a wonder which once was


Dismember yourself from chains of limits

Those shadows unreal which won’t let you out

You know you deserve promise forgotten

Let me be chorus of splendor of you


Come with me darling I‘ll wisp you away

A moment in time

Forever once knew

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Oh, what a lovely thought . . . to be have one wisp you away, especially to that beautiful place in the video with that music playing.

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper

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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

And this, I will take with me when I sleep. Wisp shall now be my favorite word! Beautiful Martin... as always!

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kidscrafts 3 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Beautiful! I love the music with the waves background.... I can see myself near those turquoise water!

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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

"Dismember yourself from chains of limits". This is such a profound line. I love it!

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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Oh, a beauty here, my kind of poetry! ^

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old albion 3 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Hi Martin. A delight to read and listen to. Well done.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Perfectly and romantically wonderful.

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Great words of romance

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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

An amazing, romantic poem!

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Very beautiful, Martin. Thanks so much for sharing and thinking about us, as you always do.

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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Beautifully romantic poem and - as always - you write so well.

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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Brilliant once again Martin.


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phdast7 3 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Very interesting and melodic. I think my new favorite word is wisp as well. Reminds me of the "will o-the wisp." Theresa

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shanmarie 9 months ago from Texas

An older one, but a beautiful one. Who wouldn't want to let someone whisk them away? Especially back to a better time or place.

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