Wobble (a Haiku)

Though times may seem askew...
Though times may seem askew...
In every thing we do...
In every thing we do...
We must not be afraid...
We must not be afraid...
About the choice we've made...
About the choice we've made...



Earth...our blue planet,

Shall wobble...always to spin.

Axis moves again.


Never shall falter,

Provides life, until the end.

We'll start over then.


Not to be alarmed,

Or In any way dismayed...

Never be afraid.


Life's challenges change,

Now simply to rearrange...

Of our choices made.


God's own handiwork...

Though worry may always lurk...

Is life's grand parade.







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More dawnings to come...more majestic in their sum...a grand parade.
More dawnings to come...more majestic in their sum...a grand parade.

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whonunuwho 14 months ago from United States Author

I do not wish to put your teacher down in any way, however, Haiku is rooted in many centuries of Japanese writing forms and covers every subject imaginable, especially nature. Even in the West, there are about one million followers in this poetry form and quite a large number of clubs about Haiku and its writing. Your Comment...


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annart 14 months ago from SW England

It's fun to play with haiku and there are various 'rules' depending on which type you are taught. I love them and I love these that you've shared here.

Ann


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whonunuwho 14 months ago from United States Author

Thanks ann. I feel a challenge each time I approach a subject and am limited to few words possible. Lots of fun. whonu


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swalia 14 months ago

'Life's challenges change'- loved this line!

Challenges change yet we become unnerved when faced with challenges.


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BlossomSB 14 months ago from Victoria, Australia

Interesting linked haikus with some lovely, memorable lines.


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manatita44 14 months ago from london

Excellent work!


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James-wolve 14 months ago from Morocco

Beautiful.It's much fun to write Haikus. I like this Japanese writing forms.


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whonunuwho 14 months ago from United States Author

Ditto, my friend and blessings. whonu


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whonunuwho 14 months ago from United States Author

Ditto.Thank you much my friend. whonu


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Vellur 14 months ago from Dubai

Great haiku! Nicely done, enjoyed reading!


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whonunuwho 14 months ago from United States Author

Thank you much my friend. whonu


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bravewarrior 14 months ago from Central Florida

I'm not afraid, whonu! This haiku is beautiful and your photos are the epitome of the splendor to be found in this life.


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whonunuwho 14 months ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend and we have nothing to be afraid of in this life, because our Lord God is watching over us all. whonu


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aviannovice 14 months ago from Stillwater, OK

Indeed, it does wobble, but one day, I hope that she will be pure again.

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