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Wolfer Diggs


“We didn’t find nothin’, Hiram.”

Joe Grissom had been sheriff since territorial days, because he kept the peace and always brought in his man, but now he stood shamefaced in front of Hiram and Nellie Folsom. Joe turned to a tearful Nellie.

“There’s a good two foot of snow on, Ma’am and there ain’t a track to be seen.”

That morning, Hiram Folsom had risen before dawn to tend to the milking, and four year old Millie Folsom had gone to the barn with her father, in the midst of a light snow. One of the barn cats was nursing a new litter in the hay, and Millie was enthralled with the kittens. But soon enough, the cold was nipping at her small toes, so her father walked her to the barn door and watched as she headed for the pre-dawn lantern lights showing in the kitchen window. Satisfied, he returned to his milking.

Two hours later, he trudged across the frozen barnyard in the early morning sun to the warmth of the house, shaking off the dusting of snow in the mud room. Nellie placed a hot cup of coffee on the table for him and glanced behind her husband.

“Where’s Millie?”

The light dusting of snow on the hard ground revealed no tracks, and a quick search of the outbuildings revealed no trace of the missing child. Hiram had to force a now frantic Nellie to don her winter clothing before she ran to the fields in search of her missing daughter. He saddled a horse and rode quickly to town to organize a search party.

Sheriff Grissom reckoned that a child Millie’s age and size could not have walked more than a couple miles an hour at best, which placed her within ten miles of the farm at most. Marvin Hardy’s tracking hounds picked up her scent in the barnyard easily enough, but lost it after that, giving no indication of which direction to take.

“This snow will help us, if she’s moving, so watch for tracks. Space yourselves out far enough to cover ground, but not so far that you might miss her. We’ll circle the farm and then move out farther and circle again.”

The big sheriff paused and watched Hiram bringing Nellie in from the fields. He looked at the sky and shook his head.

“We have to find her today, men. Tomorrow will be too late”

The men in the search party nodded. They all remembered the day Jacob Fry got lost in a blizzard, walking from the barn to the house. They found him during an early thaw, under a drift, and not a hundred feet from the house.

The gray sky thickened, and the light snow became heavier. The temperature quickly dropped ten degrees, and the searchers put their collars up against the quickening wind. No one said anything, but they all knew that a norther was blowing in, and what that meant to a small child, lost and alone on the prairie.

By late afternoon, the search had widened to nearly eight miles from the farm, and the snow was falling in earnest. Hundreds of tracks were examined, but none were those of a small child. In the dwindling light of late afternoon, the sheriff gathered up his search party and sent them home. Then he rode back to the Folsom farm to admit defeat.

Now he stood uncomfortably before the parents, hat in hand. Emily Grissom, the Sheriff’s wife, stood with an anguished Nellie, her large arm around her shoulders. She had driven a wagon from town, with food and supplies for the search party, but the mounting blizzard now had them all trapped at the farm.

While the men tended to the evening chores, the women busied themselves with supper, welcoming the diversion of work. Nellie was now dry-eyed, but her face was haunted. Millie had been warmly dressed, but she had not eaten all day, and food was essential to keeping warm in the winter. Outside, the blowing snow increased, and the wail of the wind took on a sinister note.

Supper was subdued, with Nellie picking listlessly at her food. Joe Grissom and Emily glanced at each other but said nothing. Hiram was deep in thought, eating his food mechanically. At last he spoke.

“It don’t make no sense. Millie was well on her way to the house, and she done it many times before, so why would she go off somewhere else? It just don’t make no sense.”

Sheriff Joe sat back in his chair and regarded Hiram Folsom.

“Maybe your dog took off after a rabbit. Maybe she followed. Or maybe she followed that cat somewhere.”

Hiram shook his head.

“No. The cat was nursing her litter, and old Prince was sleeping where he always does. It just don’t make no sense, Joe.”

“We’ll start looking for her again, come morning, Hiram.”

Sheriff Joe glanced at Nellie, who was looking down at her hands, saying nothing.

“I’ll have the whole search party back out at first light, Nellie. We ain’t give up. Not by any measure. “

Nellie raised her head and gazed steadily at Sheriff Joe Grissom.

“Tomorrow is Thanksgiving Day, Joe. It would be fitting to find my Millie.”

Hiram banked the fire, while Joe and Emily climbed up into the loft for the night. Nellie was still silent, but her haunted eyes spoke of her motherly despair and anguish. Somewhere, out there in the South Dakota badlands, was her baby, alone and frightened.

If she was still alive.

Hiram Folsom was a craftsman, so the cabin he had built was snug and warm, a realization that brought little comfort to the four adults. Outside, the wind picked up again, and moaned under the eaves. The driven snow pelted the walls, and Hiram put his arm around his wife to comfort her. She did not respond.

2

Big Joe Grissom was dreaming of a dog sled, being pulled along by a yapping team, when he felt Emily pulling on his arm.

“Something’s out there, Joe! Hiram is already up and getting dressed.”

Over the shriek of the wind, he could hear old Prince, barking frantically at something, and the agitated horses were also making a racket in the stables. He grabbed his pants and coat and started to dress.

Hiram was already dressed, and lighting lanterns when Joe came down from the loft. The two men looked at each other and checked the loads in their rifles.

“Could be wolves, or maybe a bear. Sam Johnson saw one down by Spider Creek, just last month.”

The Sheriff shook his head. “Could be, but most critters have better sense than to be out in weather like this. They’ll be holed up, most likely.” At the pained look on Hiram’s face, Joe instantly regretted his remark. Millie was out there, somewhere.

Hiram tried to lift the bar, but the door was jammed. Joe pushed the door back against the wind while Hiram worked the bar back and forth, until it suddenly came free. They eased the door open, and were rewarded by a blast of frigid air and blowing snow. Hiram had cleared a path earlier, but there was now an additional foot of snow, and they could see a growing drift by the well house.

“Shut and bar the door behind us, Nellie, and check my spare rifle for loaded. Maybe you should put on some coffee.” He patted his wife’s shoulder and the two men stepped out the door.

They could see the well house through the snow, but not the barn. Prince had probably heard them opening the door to the house, because he had calmed down some, but the horses were still making plenty of noise. Hiram shouted in Joe’s ear over the shriek of the wind.

“We’ll walk to the well house, and from there, we can probably see the barn.”

Both men knew the danger of losing their direction in such a blizzard. More than one man had lost his life that way, and they were both remembering Jacob Fry.

They reached the well house, and from there, they could just make out the shape of the barn. Hiram had started to move forward when he felt Joe grab his arm, and point to his right. For a moment, he saw nothing, but then, in the pale yellow light of the lanterns, the shape of a large gray wolf materialized out of the gloom. He pulled off his mitten with his teeth, and raised his rifle.

“Hold up, there, dammit! Just you hold up.”

The voice was deep and guttural, and the speaker was at first unseen. Both men peered intently into the white curtain of blowing snow, and then saw a huge shape loom out of the murk, made even larger by the heavy buffalo coat he wore.

He was a monster of a man. Sheriff Grissom was an easy two inches over six feet, and he found himself looking up at the figure standing before him. The man’s face was covered by a long, ebony beard, which flowed halfway down his coat, and his uncut hair covered his shoulders. He was wearing a heavy fur headpiece that Joe guessed was the skin of a wolverine. His massive buffalo coat came almost to his knees, and his feet were covered with handmade, fur lined boots, laced up to his knees.

Sheriff Grissom nodded at the man. “Hello Wolfer.” He turned to Hiram. “This here is Wolfer Diggs, Hiram.”

Wolfer Diggs was a local legend. He made his living as a trapper, and from the bounty paid on wolves. He also made out on an occasion beef or horse that the owner wasn’t watching very closely.

Seldom seen, he had a reputation as a man to be left strictly alone. No one knew where he lived, and the rumor was that he had a cave somewhere in the foothills. He was also rumored to have killed several men, although that was mostly just talk, in Sheriff Grissom’s opinion.

The one man he was known to have killed was Grub Baker, the man who had bothered and murdered Wolfer’s squaw. When Wolfer caught up with him in Deadwood, a frantic Baker was seen shooting into Wolfer twice, and at point blank range, but Wolfer just kept coming. He grabbed Baker and crushed him in a massive bear hug, breaking his back. He then dumped his lifeless body on the street and walked away without a word.

Sheriff Grissom jerked his head toward the cabin.

“We had best get inside. It must be near zero out here.”

Hiram eyed the wolf. “I reckon you can put him up in the well house.”

Wolfer grunted. “He’ll make out by his ownself. He always does.”

Hiram pounded on the door. “Open up Nellie.”

The women gasped and took an involuntary step backwards as Wolfer Diggs ducked through the door and stood in front of them. Then Nellie regained her composure and offered the men some coffee. She was aware of the huge man’s eyes following her. Still standing, he began to unlace the rawhide holding his coat closed.

“Reckon this is yours, ma’am.” He opened his coat to reveal a feed sack resting on his massive stomach, supported by a leather strap around his neck. He lifted it off and placed it on the table, where he gently opened the sack to reveal little Millie Folsom, wrapped in a blanket, warm and sound asleep.

Later, Wolfer awkwardly drank coffee from his cup, obviously not used to anything so small. He was a man who missed little, and had seen the search party. At his question, another trapper had told him about the missing child.

“So when I seen that party of Sioux holed up, about ten mile yonder, I watched for a spell, and sure enough, I heard her cryin’, scared-like, so I rode on down there. Seems one of them young bucks spotted that girl while he was looking for something to steal, and the damn fool brought her back to camp. They was only too pleased to be shed of her, fearful of the Army coming after her, so I traded for her.”

“You traded for her?” Nellie had assured herself that Millie was unharmed, and placed her in her small bed. She dried her tears, and then gave Wolfer Diggs a long hug, much to his embarrassment. Now they were all seated at the table, listening to him.

“Yes, ma’am. I traded my two horses for her. And then I set out to bring her home.”

Joe and Hiram stared at him. Then Joe spoke. “You walked ten miles in a blizzard?”

Wolfer Diggs studied the rafters in thought for a moment. “I reckon. I make it to be nigh on ten, maybe eleven mile. Thereabout.”

“How did find your way in this blinding snow? Men have lost their way in less than fifty feet.”

“I ain’t never lost. I just set out and here I am.”

Hiram spoke up. “I have two good horses in the barn you can have. The bay and the dun. They’re yours, and I thank you sir.”

Emily Grissom broke her silence. “Well, it has been a hard day for all, so we should get some rest. Where do you want Mister Diggs to bed down, Nellie?”

“I’ll make out in the barn, ma’am. I ain’t used to sleeping in no bed.” Wolfer eyed the sheriff. “You got any papers on me lawman?”

Joe chuckled. “No, but I have a few irritated ranchers and farmers who think I should have!”

Nellie stood. “Then let’s go to bed. Tomorrow is Thanksgiving Day, and I‘ll have to get an early start if I’m to cook a dinner.” She turned to Wolfer. “May I ask your given name, Mister Diggs?“

Wolfer blushed. “It’s James, ma’m.”

“Well, may God bless you Mister James Diggs for bringing my daughter home, safe and unharmed. Thank you, sir.”

...

Nellie and Emily were hard at work over the cook stove when Joe and Hiram returned from doing chores. Nellie looked past them at the closed door, a question on her face.

“Where’s Mister Diggs?”

Hiram looked at Joe before replying. “Looks like he rode off in the middle of the night, Nellie. He was gone when we went to milk.”

Emily looked at Joe, and placed her hands on her hips. “Well, you just go after him and bring him back, Joe Grissom! He’s the guest of honor, and I won’t hear of him going hungry today,”

The sheriff grinned, ruefully. “Reckon I can’t go after him, Em.”

“Well, why on earth not?”

“Because when he left with the horses Hiram gave him, he stole mine for good measure!”




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AmaTainted 5 years ago from Texas

Happy Thanksgiving Dear! hope yours is as wonderful as this familys is... oh, and they should put "new horse" on their christmas list!

voted UP, funny, awesome and interesting.


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

This is an awesome Thanksgiving story. And I absolutely love the ending. You write the best endings ever. I felt just like I was there with all of those people and in the situation. Thanks WillStarr for this jewel.


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

I loved this story ! and i voted it up ,and all the way up across the board ! Im not big on westerns but this had me locked in every sentance and paragraph! absolutely wonderful ! thanks for sharing!:)


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dahoglund 5 years ago from Wisconsin Rapids

Wonderful thanksgiving story Will.There are things to be thankful for even if you lose your horses.


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Beautiful WillStarr, I am glad little Millie was fine! That Diggs is a frightening feller ain't he!


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Old Poolman 5 years ago from Rural Arizona

WillStarr - I read this with much pleasure, but was getting close to the end and was starting to fear there would be no twist in this one. Boy, was I wrong. Great job as usual.


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Becky Katz 5 years ago from Hereford, AZ

This was a wonderful story. I am so glad that Diggs found her and brought her back.


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Nice work. I really enjoy the Wolfer character; sounds like a colorful fellow who you don't want to get on the wrong side of.


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

I had to go put a coat on half way through. Great story Will. The endings are always a surprise. This one a nice surprise.


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SubRon7 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Will, I was sure worried about that little girl. I knew you would bring her through OK, but still, I was worried.

Excellent job, as usual.

Thank you, sir, for a great Thanksgiving story.


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Great story, I loved it. You're a great writer. Voted up and awesome.


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Happy Thanksgiving Will,

Such a wonderful story from start to finish..I can always count on you for a wonderful ending..Big smile here..

Great story!

Sunnie


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Dexter Yarbrough 5 years ago from United States

WillStarr! Very suspenseful story! That Wolfer Diggs is something else. Great Thanksgiving tale!

Voted up, up and away!


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thelyricwriter 5 years ago from West Virginia

You get all my votes and up there Will. Your stories are great from beginning to end Will. I have enjoyed every one I have read, but this one takes the cake. Wonderful job. Love the ending my friend. And just in case, Happy Thanksgiving my friend.


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Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

This is your best Will, I loved your wording for your characters, making them so real. Great job. Voted up.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

Ha. Nice. Good story once again. Good characterization and great character names to boot!


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

I loved this story, I knew you would have Millie returned safe and sound somehow.

Great job voted up


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Dear Bill,

Thanksgiving would honestly not be the same without a story from my favorite Southern gentleman scribe.

I was thoroughly riveted about Millie's safe return, prepared to push all buttons, except...oh wait, you did it again, a very FUNNY ending! {I think Millie's return was worth more than James got!}

Happy Thanksgiving to you and that WONDERFUL RN wife of yours, Maria.


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bethperry 5 years ago from Tennesee

Cool story, Will, and I especially enjoyed the ending, lol!

Oh, and Happy Thanksgiving!


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drbj 5 years ago from south Florida

A perfect Thanksgiving story, Will, with a perfect ending. Thank you. That Wolfer character was sumpin else. Reminded me of a blind date I once had centuries ago. :)


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana

A great Thanksgiving tale...a great ending!

I hope you have a GREAT Thanksgiving Will and thanks again for an entertaining story.

Chris


Nan Mynatt 5 years ago

Great story on battling the elements. What our forefathers went through out west and up north. You brought out that people lived by another code, facing danger. I voted you up!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, AmaTainted, and thank you for the nice comment.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Brenda, and what a great new avatar you have!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, jami l. pereira,

The settling of the western frontier (and it was all frontier in the beginning) is one of history's greatest stories. Thank you for reading.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Don, and how right you are!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Cardisa,

There were several real characters in the old west like Wolfer Diggs.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hey Mike!

I do write stories without a twist, so I hope you like those too!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Doug, and great to see you back!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Becky Katz,

There were several real rescues by known criminals that were even more heroic. We all have our good side.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, mckbirdbks,

It ain't no Emerald Wells Cafe, but it'll have to do!

^_^


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, SubRon7,

Usually, things have a way of working out.

Usually.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, writer20, and thank you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Sunnie, and a Happy Thanksgiving to you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Dex!

Looking forward to another Obama conversation!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, thelyricwriter!

I hope to hear one of your songs take number one someday!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Jackie Lynnley, and thank you for reading!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, PDXKaraokeGuy!

I try to use period names. Many of the old trappers were known as 'wolfers', because there was a bounty on them.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Rosemay50!

Life on the early prairie was dangerous, and many children never saw adulthood.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, and a happy Thanksgiving to you too, Beth!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, drbj!

I too once had a date like that. Then I had to move to Arizona!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Chris! Good to see you.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Nan,

You make a great point. There were no federal agencies, so people pulled together. It actually worked better, back then.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Maria! I saved yours for last:

{I think Millie's return was worth more than James got!}

Apparently, so did he!

^_^


Diane 5 years ago

FUNNY HOW WE ALL LOOK FORWARD THIS TIME OF THE YEAR TO HAVE A HEARTWARMING STORY FROM YOU. IT'S LIKE ONE OF THE THINGS WE CAN COUNT ON LIKE KNOWING GOD IT ALWAYS WITH US THROUGH THICK AND THROUGH THIN AND ALL THE MANY BLESSINGS WE HAVE TO BE THANKFUL FOR. HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY. BY THE WAY I ALWAYS LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS!


september girl 5 years ago

Brr! I felt the biting cold of the wind, and the pain in the mother's heart for her lost child. Great story, Will! I loved it. I liked the surprise ending too! : ) Thank you for sharing such a delightful Thanksgiving tale.


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Amy Becherer 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Who needs turkey and dressing and pumpkin pie with a Thanksgiving story that rivals the Hallmark card ads. And, yes, they make me cry. No one writes a story like you, Will. This one made me freezing cold and, at the end, all warmed up. Without being "sappy", you got to the heart of what Thanksgiving is really about. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours, Will.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Diane! I hope all is well. Stay warm!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, september girl! Have a great Thanksgiving.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Amy,

I try to envision real people and how real people would respond to emergencies. Most people go about such things with a sense of urgency, efficiency, and purpose, but very little outward emotion or theatrics. That comes later.

I do avoid 'sappy', and thank you for picking that up. You are very astute.


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Amy Becherer 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

I think, from what I read in your stories, that you operate from a very logical place (I'd swear you were an engineer). You are able to separate reality from emotional response, which is a really positive trait. You would be great in a crisis. I think many people let their emotions drive them helter skelter, in a crisis, and think about how they could have handled things better, later. I am working at being more logical and thinking about an issue emotionally after I have time to think about it. I know this is not about "me", but your story and particularly your explanation affects me personally. Thank you, Will, for an entertaining, meaningful story with a life lesson.


PenMePretty 5 years ago from Franklin

Voted up and exceptional!!! Love it!


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Angela Blair 5 years ago from Central Texas

Wow -- my kind of story, Will and so very well written. I plan to share your story with our little Thanksgiving dinner group -- it's what the day is all about! You have a very definite talent for this kind of writing -- congrats to you! Best, Sis


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi Amy,

Other animals experience emotion, but not like humans. However, in trying times, we often set emotion aside until the crisis is over.

Thank you!


ThomasRydder 5 years ago

HAH...the old varmint made off with all of them...too good!! Great story, old friend (doesn't seem like only a month, does it?) But then again, what one of yours isn't. Kickin' it a point and rightfully earned!! :)TR


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Lora K.!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Angela Blair!

That's high praise, coming from a great writer like you. Please do share this, and do me the honor of reading my Christmas Trilogy, if you would.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, ThomasRydder, and thanks for the vote up!


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Angela Blair 5 years ago from Central Texas

I'll definitely read your Christmas Trilogy and thanks for the compliment -- Happy Thanksgiving to you and the family - Best, Sis


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

And a Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours, Angela.


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resspenser 5 years ago from South Carolina

I'm with everyone else here: Excellent story! I always marvel at the way you develop characters in these short pieces. Voted up across the board. Thanks for sharing this!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

"I always marvel at the way you develop characters in these short pieces."

Like your "Hardin and Strickland"? You're no slouch at this yourself!


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

You never cease to amaze me Bill. You have always got the story line down to the last perfect word and always with a great ending. Is it any wonder so many of us pay you a visit. I have a long way to go to catch up with you hunnie. Thanksgiving sounds beautiful, so I am sending you lots of happy smiles and well wishes. x


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi Annette!

Thanksgiving is a uniquely American holiday, dating all the way back to the 1600's, and it demonstrates our long standing Christian heritage. Thanks for reading!


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thougtforce 5 years ago from Sweden

This is one of your best stories! Even though I think that every time I read something from you:) It is great to read about so warm and friendly people in a biting cold environment. You write in a way that makes me see these people and the place in front of me. Voted up! Thanks giving must be something very special. Happy Thanksgiving

Tina


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, thougtforce,

"Thanks giving must be something very special."

It is. It's based on our long-standing Christian roots.


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thougtforce 5 years ago from Sweden

I guess my sentence must look a bit odd in the eyes of an American:) what I meant was that I recognize the special feeling that comes from traditional celebrating. Although we are Christian here in Sweden too, we do not celebrate Thanksgiving. There isn’t even a trace of it or something similar at this time of year. I wish we did though, so my sentence was written more from envy than disrespect!

Tina


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi Tina,

Don't worry! I took your meaning in the very sweet way it was intended.

What I meant was that Thanksgiving is part of our very early Christian heritage. It was a celebration feast attended by early pioneers and American Indians to give thanks to God for a bountiful harvest. That's the past that makes it uniquely American.

I would love to visit your own, beautiful country someday.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

HaHa..The ending was so funny. I loved the story. This story reminds me that you can't really tell about a person by looking on the outside. He had a good heart but he was a rascal. HaHa..Thank you Will..


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Ruby and thank you!

(My beautiful great-aunt from Maine was also named Ruby)


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

I bet she got the same remarks as i did, many times when i left a patient's room they would always say, " Ruby don't take your love to town " HaHa Cheers


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

I never thought of that!

No, my Aunt Ruby died many years before that song came out.


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suziecat7 5 years ago from Asheville, NC

I had to read a good Thanksgiving story and I just did. Thank you.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Suzie!

And what a great story you wrote! Wow!:

http://hubpages.com/literature/For-Her-Own-Good


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feenix 5 years ago

Hey, Will,

Very good Thanksgiving story. And I was really worried about little Millie. You really had me going there.


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Genna East 5 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

“Because when he left with the horses Hiram gave him, he stole mine for good measure!”

Just the right touch of dry humor to end this great story, Will. Your characters are sooo human; they are full of texture and character; we believe them and like them almost immediately. Up and awesome!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, feenix!

Happy to lead you astray, my friend!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Genna,

Looking forward to another one from you!


Sueswan 5 years ago

Hi Will

A great Thanksgiving story.

Who cares if Wolfer Diggs stole the sherrif's horse. lol He brought back Millie.

Hope you and your family had a Happy Thanksgiving.

Voted up and awesome.

Enjoy your day.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Sueswan!

We are all flawed, including a man who walked ten miles in a blizzard to return a child to her mother, only to steal some horses.


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Storytellersrus 5 years ago from Stepping past clutter

Hey Will, another very real, touching tale.

I realized as I read the first bit, that I was astonished and angry at the father for allowing his daughter to walk back to the house, knowing that folk froze too often, in similar situations. I could not believe that he would do this. I suppose his wife felt the same way. It made me understand why couples divorce when such things happen in real life. Forgiveness for such a devastating slip, would require overwhelming love. (Did I ever tell you how my grandmother lost a baby while birthing my mom and her twin during a North Dakota December?)

I was relieved (and somewhat amused) to discover she was safe, and loved your signature surprise ending.


SilverGenes 5 years ago

Will, everything about this story is so good! The characters are full of life - the cold and snow are all so real and the ending is just beautiful for Thanksgiving on any day. I want to move into that cabin! :-)


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Barb,

I tried to convey her father's watchful concern until he felt assured that she was safe. We all make such mistakes, and most of us get away with it. Sometimes, we do not, and have to pay the price.

Happily, a known scoundrel saved the day.

I would very much like to hear the story of your grandmother's tragic loss. You should write it up as a Hub.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, SilverGenes,

The lack of sawmills resulted in the thousands of log cabins in the early west. They could be quickly erected with a minimum of tools, and, when the cracks between the logs were well chinked with a mixture of mud and straw, they were fairly cozy, if the fire was kept up.

Most had hard packed, earthen floors, and the wise husband put in a stone or wooden floor as soon as possible.

I too, long for the nostalgia and comfort of a log cabin...with a floor of course!


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Storytellersrus 5 years ago from Stepping past clutter

I was thinking I might, after reading your hub.

I got that you were trying to convey his concern. But I am a mother. Nothing but either walking her back himself or seeing her enter and close the door would have worked for me, and that would have shut down the entire story, haha. I used to watch my best friend walk home when I was five years old. She wasn't really there until I saw her wave and disappear inside her front door. While I watched her, my mother was watching me from our picture window... it's a mother instinct thing, I guess.

If I do write the story, I will let you know. Thanks for your interest and for a hub real enough to complain about.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

"... it's a mother instinct thing, I guess."

It is, but even mothers make horrible mistakes.

A friend's daughter here in the Phoenix area had a change in daily routine that caused her to forget that her baby daughter was not at day care, as usual, but was sleeping in the car seat. By the time it dawned on her, her only child was dead in the Arizona heat.

The media heaped scorn on her, and called for her head, but we knew that she was actually a very devoted mom who made a fatal error.

A family member checked on her toddler son, who was taking a nap. She answered a phone call, and then checked again, to find him missing. He was discovered in their above the ground pool, drowned.

It happens.


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Storytellersrus 5 years ago from Stepping past clutter

Yep.


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Alastar Packer 5 years ago from North Carolina

Simply awesome WillStarr. One of the best I've read.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Alastar Packer, and thank you for the kind words!


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RedElf 5 years ago from Canada

Wow - excellent story! I certainly enjoyed your "scribblings."


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snakeslane 5 years ago from Canada

Congratulations on your prize winning story WillStar, well done! Regards, snakeslane


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Austinstar 5 years ago from Somewhere in the universe

Congratulations, Will. This was one of the best stories of the bunch! Write on!


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Frannie Dee 5 years ago from Chicago Northwest Suburb

So glad to hear this story won! Well deserved Will.


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PhoenixV 5 years ago from USA

Congratulations Mr.Starr!


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JT Walters 5 years ago from Florida

Congratulations on your win.

JT


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Happyboomernurse 5 years ago from South Carolina

Congratulations on your well deserved win. This was an awesome story and I loved the ending!


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dahoglund 5 years ago from Wisconsin Rapids

Congratulations on winning, Will.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, RedElf, snakeslane, Lela, Frannie, Phoenix, JT Walters, Gail, and Don!

At the risk of sounding like a total buffoon, what did I win? Does anyone have a link to the announcement?


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thanks, Don!


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Dear Bill,

I love when 'a winner wins...'! Congratulations on an awesome story! I'm proud of you, Maria


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Maria!


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suziecat7 5 years ago from Asheville, NC

Congratulations on your win, Bill. You certainly deserve it!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, suziecat7!

Of course, I would not have been here at all if not for you!


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Congratulations WillStarr, wonderful write, you so deserved this win. Bravo.


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mary615 5 years ago from Florida

Congratulations! You deserved to win with this entry! Goodnight.


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akirchner 5 years ago from Central Oregon

Much deserved on your win and many congratulations~ Wonderfully done!


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resspenser 5 years ago from South Carolina

I was pulling for you to win, Willstar! Great job!


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Genna East 5 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

Oh Will, I am soooo pleased you won! This wonderful story certainly deserved the prize. Kudos!


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Congratulations Will. This story certainly deserved it. Well done


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Congrats Will!...So happy for you!

Hugs,

Sunnie


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phoenixarizona 5 years ago from Australia

congrats on your win Willstarr you deserve it!


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Marlin 55 5 years ago from USA

WillStarr, I can see why you have so many followers. You are a very talented and gifted writer. I can easily see you work in print. Congratulations on your win. I know that I will be hearing more good things about you in the near future.


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Drax 5 years ago from NYC....

Congratulations Will.. I could find myself on the edge of the seat through this story. I really really enjoyed it.

Thanks very much !!


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rebekahELLE 5 years ago from Tampa Bay

It's such fun reading these winning entries for creative writing. I love your characters and your attention to details. I was on the edge of my seat while reading and loved that Wolfer had the child wrapped in a blanket inside the feed sack. Love the ending. Congrats on you win!


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htodd 5 years ago from United States

Wolfer Diggs..That is really a great story


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, saddlerider1, mary615, akirchner, Ronnie, Genna, Rosemay, Sunnie, phoenixarizona, Marlin 55, Drax, rebekahELLE, and htodd for taking the time to comment!

Much appreciated.


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Becky Katz 5 years ago from Hereford, AZ

Congratulations Will, on the award. It was well deserved.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Becky!

^_^


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

I had missed this one, sorry Will it's a great story and congratulations - really pleased for you.


writeronline 5 years ago

Hi Will, for some reason I missed this beautiful story earlier. I'm not surprised you won a prize for it. My congratulations, it's very well deserved.

My only surprise is that it didn't win first prize. Maybe the judges were only kidding about how "the emotional power of the writing" was a fundamental aspect of the judging process. NOT to disparage anyone else's work for an instant, but there's a genuine humanity in this story that makes it 'reach out and touch' the reader in the heart. To me, that's where real emotion lives.


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

Congratulations! This is really a superb, very well-written story. I am proud to be your follower.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Movie Master, and thank you!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, writeronline,

Thank you, but have you read Marlin 55's 'The Agency'? It is a superb story.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Martie, and thank you. Praise from you is always sweet to hear.


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Took me awhile to get over here to read your Winning Story. I am so glad I did. I really liked the ending. It did bring me shivers with all the cold. So glad that Millie was found and is safely home. Awesome and congratulations.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Susan,

I'm happy you took the time! Thank you.


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PegCole17 5 years ago from Dallas, Texas

This story was captivating from the get go. Love your stories and your writing style. Huge congratulations on your contest win! And I loved the ending!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Peg, and thank you.


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ThoughtSandwiches 5 years ago from Reno, Nevada

Will...

This is a great story...congrats on your win! Excellent ending!

Thomas


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Thomas! I was honored by this.


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wordscribe43 4 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

I've been meaning to come by and congratulate you on your win. You most certainly deserve recognition for this outstanding story, Will. You have a great gift for character development. Congrats!


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, wordscribe43!


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homesteadbound 4 years ago from Texas

Better late than never. So glad I was able to read this one, Will. It was a wonderful story. Congratulations on your win. It was a winner in my book!


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Cindy!


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miss_jkim 4 years ago

This is an outstanding story and very well written. Have you ever submitted any of your work to Glimmer Train or Readers Digest? If not, you should give it a try. I feel you would be well received.

Voted up and awesome


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, miss_jkim!

Most don't accept unsolicited work, but I'm hopeful!


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miss_jkim 4 years ago

Will, take a look at the following links.

http://www.glimmertrain.com/

(Check on the submissions link)

http://www.writersdigest.com/competitions/writing-...

(There are two competetions still open)

http://www.pw.org/grants

(Poets and Writers lists grants, competetions, and open solicitations)

Good luck!


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, miss_jkim!


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

My gosh Will I thought that these comments were never ending for a moment.

Easy to see why there are so many though.

You are the kings of storytellers and I vote this one a huge up up and away.

Here's to so many more to share on here in this New Year.

Take care my friend and enjoy the rest of your day.

Eddy.


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Eiddwen,

Thank you for the kind comment!


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ahorseback 4 years ago

WillStarr , You realise this could be a novel , right ? I'm serious man ! I pushed all the button s and wished there were more !


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, ahorseback, and thank you!

It is about to become part of volume two of Will Starr short stories. Volume one has already been published! :

http://hubpages.com/literature/A-Public-Thank-You-...


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HoneyBB 4 years ago from Illinois

What an awesome Thanksgiving story. I'm so glad Little Millie was alive and well. You're a great writer. This was entertaining, well written, and the descriptions planted pictures in my mind. Thanks for sharing. Voted Up +++


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, HoneyBB!


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D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

I just love this story! Fantastic characterization and atmosphere...Voted Awesome, beautiful, interesting voted Up...so glad I found it...I'd already read your 'America' hub and was impressed...went on to discover this one, and how appropriate it, being so near Thanksgiving. Thanks for sharing your talents! Oh, and Sharing too, Absolutely!


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HoneyBB 4 years ago from Illinois

Shared Your link on my facebook page!


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, D.Juris Stetser, and thank you!

I have two collections of short stories just like this published on Barnes and Noble. You can find them here:

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-hangman-will-s...

and here:

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/s/will-starr-hired-o...


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you HoneyBB!

I have two collections of short stories just like this published on Barnes and Noble. You can find them here:

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-hangman-will-s

and here:

http://www.barnesandnoble.com/s/will-starr-hired-o


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HoneyBB 4 years ago from Illinois

Thanks WillStarr, I look forward to reading them! Thank you for sharing!


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WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Oh, by all means. thank you!

Here is a Christmas Trilogy you might like. The Bonnet is my favorite! :

http://hubpages.com/literature/A-Christmas-Short-S...


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D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

Thanks very much for the info. love your writing! will definitely have to read your collections. Thanks again!


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D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

I just finished your Christmas story, still wiping the tears away...and just shared on my facebook. You are an amazing and talented writer. I can't wait to read more and more! BTW are you on Facebook? Thnks again for sharing you wonderful talents. Dotti


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SubRon7 2 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Will, your stories are so good that I didn't remember reading this one, and was just as enthralled as the first time. I have a four-year-old girl in my life "somewhere" so I really felt for the Folsums.

Thanks, Will!


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Old Poolman 2 years ago from Rural Arizona

WillStarr - This is one of my favorite stories and I appreciate you sharing it with us. The only problem is now I thirst for more of these WillStarr classics. Hope all is well at your house.


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WillStarr 2 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, James, and I hope you find your little girl!


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WillStarr 2 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you Mike, and we're doing well. I'm working on a new Thanksgiving story (still in my head).

Say hello to Sue for me and Carolyn! Hope to see you soon.


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Old Poolman 2 years ago from Rural Arizona

Bill, let's get that story out of your head and down on paper where we can all see it. I miss the heck out of your frequent stories. We do need to get together soon. My new hobby is homebrew beer. In 4 weeks I will let you know if it is drinkable.


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Ginn Navarre 2 years ago

Hey you, your timing was perfect. I had just tossed some wood in the ole wood stove (32 degrees) here and me an Wolfer Diggs enjoyed your excellent story.


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WillStarr 2 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Will do, Mike! ^-*


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WillStarr 2 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Hi, Ginn!

BTW, people enjoyed your narrations of the stories!


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Sunshine625 2 years ago from Orlando, FL

Love this story! You are an amazing storyteller.


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WillStarr 2 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you, Linda!


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PegCole17 2 years ago from Dallas, Texas

A great read the second time around, too. I love your Western stories, Will. The dialogue really makes it real.


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WillStarr 2 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thanks, Peg!


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RoadMonkey 19 months ago

Great story and I bet the sheriff won't be taking out any warrant for his horse either!


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WillStarr 19 months ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you RM! Probably not!


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norlawrence 4 months ago from California

Great article. Thanks for sharing it.


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WillStarr 4 months ago from Phoenix, Arizona Author

Thank you.

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