Woman! Don't stop loving me!

Here we go again..! (enjoy the song)

.

Here.. here..


Here we go again for goodness sake!

Your warm wishes finally prevailed!!

Time has come to tell your tale

you said you wanted to reveal me a secret?

I'm waiting as I move my body to this music


Say what? come closer to me, please!!

you will never what? I cannot really see!

what you mean by that, looking strayed and sick?

sick of not being bold enough to stick with me??


Okay! take an extra deep breath

Great, there you go, no more mistakes!

you are getting used to my move, huh??

grabbing my tie, getting me on caressing mood

.

Never stop.. stop what woman?

say it again, the music is loud enough

to barely hear your claims, would you stop!?

stop looking at me that way, causing me to laugh


Now you are getting to the point

Embracing my shoulders from behind

whispering to my ears the words right on time

that you want me to make you mine?

.

so you chose this song to keep things clear?

Now I get it finally sweet baby... oh dear!

you are accomplishing so much tonight

already caressing my senses and my mind

about to blow inside big, big time!

.

Getting your message baby, please calm down!

let's dance this song, and the rest will come around

on time to hold you close to me non stop!!

like the song, never stop! And I won't stop

you made me realize that love is a gift

that we have to keep it covered by all means

.

Lucky you chose this song

so I know when love is already found

won't stop you from loving me

is already a need that was instilled in me

You see how I can't stop moving around you

full of joy and happy that love got us through...!

.

Synchronize your heart beat with mine

finally you got it, two souls of a kind

moving and dancing such fools under the rain

Jumping over the cliff of reason, over and over again

.

this was such a great experience, you conquered my love

and now is time to grow together, because this is only the beginning

not such word as ending a living without you at the very end

was exquisitely fun, the luckiest of all men, started to belong

.


say it again and again...we won't be friends from now on

got carried away by your charm added to this song

time to dance away and make this happen, hun...

lets walk away sweetheart, the purpose of this song is done...!!

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JT Walters 5 years ago from Florida

I am blushing and it is good. My oh my Lord.

JT


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PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida

Lord,

WOW! WOW! I believe my mind just went on vacation--or the music and poem blew it away.I voted up, beautiful and awesome. I might need a glass of wine after this one.

WOW!

Your Hub Friend,

Bobbi


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Are you okay JT? Now you are gonna blame for passing out? Hope not. Thanks so much for your encouragement... and hope to read you soon!

LORD


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Hello BOBBI,

You should be careful..more than 3 wows becomes spammy,,,you know? Seriously! Thanks my friend for being a loyal follower.

LORD


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Sunshine625 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

Oh Lord! Very clever and creative! :)


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Sunshine625,

Thanks dear friend. Congrats! On the 'Elite bagde' added to your profile! You are kind enough to check on us and praise our work. Thanks Sunshine!

LORD


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Sunshine625 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

Lord you're too funny!! Its just an E for excellent or extraordinary!! lol Thank you:)


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

You should write a personal letter to MR. 'E', better than writing to BSB or Ricky Martin. I wonder if there are funny people on both ends of the singing 'tale'

P.S. Is Mr 'E', not mister Ed.


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Sunshine625 5 years ago from Orlando, FL

I'll take that into consideration if Mr. E works out. At the moment the E seems more work than entertainment. Eeeek!


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shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

Hey Sir Lord! WOW, It's going RED every where. We are blushing because of your Lovely Poem.

And I Hope my big WOW is enough for describing your wonderful and sensual poem. LOL

Voted up, beautiful, awesome, interesting.

with lots of Respect

from SHANAYA:)


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JT Walters 5 years ago from Florida

Lord,

#@!!, what....? You made me swoon but I have come to realize you have do that to alot of your readers.

;-)

JT


mikeq107 5 years ago

LOL ..normaly these poems are written by women...great write Mate...thanks for a good morning laugh!!!!!

Mike :0)


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Thanks for your comment Shanaya. You always so nice to your hub friends. This Poem was written between 1 or 2 a.m. with my 'insighful friends', and there you have it.

Thanks again!!

LORD


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

There you go again JT,

Made you swoon? The problem started when you stopped by. I should warn ladies before reading..Do you think?

LORD


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Mike bro!

You are welcome my friend. We have some extra feelings for that extra mile in writing...we don't want to sound too corny either. But we like what we do.

LORD


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Ardie 5 years ago from Neverland

This is so much fun. I can echo the chorus of wow's :D I bet you had a right fun time writing this one!!


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JT Walters 5 years ago from Florida

Absolutely, Caution labels on all of your poems!! "This poem may make you swoon only read it lying down!!"

;-)

JT


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Ardie 5 years ago from Neverland

Hahah JT that about covers it right? Lord is the Lord of words and will make the ladies purr and pile in heaps.


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

Dear Lord, the beat of "You'll never stop me loving" - (the continues hits on the drum that sound like the beating of a heart) - stimulates the crocodile brain which contains our most primordial urges. So your woman was very wise to add her charm to the song :))

I enjoyed the poem and voted it up and interesting.


Lord de cross 5 years ago

MartieCoetser,

Certainly you are right!! no wonder that body language is the key--thanks!

Lord...via Iphone


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bethperry 5 years ago from Tennesee

Sweet. I like the optimism in it very much!


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Thanks Ardie and politically corrrect Bosch:), I mean

JT walters, future CEO in wall street. The poem was inspired on the song and the main chorus...yeah ! is fun how we do it. Only God Knows..how we end this poem. Great to read you both, doing a 'mano a mano'!

LORD


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Lord De Cross 5 years ago Author

Hi Bethperry,

Yeah! A very moving piece of poetry, that goes with beat. Glad you ejnoyed too dear hub friend.

LORD


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epigramman 5 years ago

...that's why you're our precious LORD - you've got the funnest hubs around - is that a word - funnest? well it is now courtesy of epi-man who is a student of dance and body language (I simply adore the ballet) and I have been listening to Jimi Hendrix and Hank Williams Sr. on my first night off in over a week - and yes this hub just wants me to get up and dance!

lake erie time 1:29am


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hello there Epi,

Funnest? Well we can invent the words, and the Queen will have to knight the new addition to the Royal Academy. We love Music and love those beats! Thanks Epi for your words! You are one of the finest man on Hubland, and the ladies agreed upon!

LORD


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btrbell 23 months ago from Mesa, AZ

Beautiful poem, Joseph! Lucky lady! Up+


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Lord De Cross 23 months ago Author

Thanks so much BtrBell! Inspiration comes after midnight!

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