Woman's Monologue

Description of the Poem

A Story inside a poem, the one I invented because of two beautiful people that inspire me, and have awaken the sleeping affection or love deep inside of me...

Sometimes it helps to keep the magic lingers....

A Story inside a poem


People love it when we are together

Wishing us a true to life love story

Similar to what they watched in theatres

They thought we can be like those

with our movements that showed we are close

They even have their own interpretations

feeding their own fantasies thru our life story,

Creatively they digged on things related to us

and swore to God it was indeed our destined path

It's good to know their honest wishes

How Heartwarming their words of praise for us

How I wish not to disappoint them'

But You see it's not in my own hands

If in case I feel this affection for him

No one can tell if it will be the same in his case?


And the story ended, with them praying for us together

We took our separate ways

and take on the new challenges lining up for us to take

Then one day while I was relaxing taking my time

He came so surprised to see me, alone reading some lines

He can't believe I 've got no one with me

I told him I'm taking my time so I try to at least enjoy my solitude

He immediately asked "would it mean I should leave you alone?"

I said no "You Stay", it's been a while since the last time we talked

He said "I've been trying to set appointments with you"

I said "and we both don't have the luxury of time, that our scheduled never matched.

I said I am still too preoccupied, my freedom today is just coincidental"

He said he was just thinking about me, how time became rude to us,

and how bad it made him feel, not to see me for a while

So he swore to himself, Once God sends him his luck,

and showed the way for him to see me in His chosen time,

He will not let go of me easily, coz he misses me terribly..


Heart fluttering isn't it?

The feeling I am trying to deny to save my pride,

the one I kept to myself to remain at the safe side

that during those times I was with him

The fondness I expressed then, are indeed for real


Since the night, That Man made sure we always get in touch

He said he can't leave without telling me what he feels for me,

for he can't find his heart's contentment,

If he can't confess to me his love...


For now I will end this Story,

For I am still awaiting if he is really my destiny

So thanks to those people who wish us be together.

It's like you people helping me in my prayers...



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Thelma Alberts 5 years ago from Germany

Good story in a poem. I wish I could write something like that. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.


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Maria Cecilia 5 years ago from Philippines Author

Thanks Thelma... I'm inspired...


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Umna Safdar 5 years ago

NO words! Words came like a spark, and yes, heart didi flutter at the very moment. Thank you :) keep writing


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DjBryle 5 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

Hey, hey, hey! Am I missing something miss Macel? Anyway, I am so happy and praying that this story in a poem will end into something that will truly make "the writer" feel more blessed and happy always... and I mean ALWAYS! I love the poem... Rated it awesome and beautiful too! Hugs! =)


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Maria Cecilia 5 years ago from Philippines Author

Umna Sadar thanks, it really came from the heart

Jen... you see the old man writer in us came out once in a while, I wrote it for someone or for couple that I wish to end up together,you'll laugh if I will tell you who were they, but that part is not from the old writer ha,,only that part that I wrote it as if it is an actual experience, that part of liking the two, more of the little girl or teen ager part of me.. thanks for visiting


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

Sounds like destiny to me! Hope that experience comes to be a reality!


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Maria Cecilia 5 years ago from Philippines Author

Truckstop Sally, I am beginning to feel like I want to experience that destiny to... I am still hoping something good will happen for the two of them still


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Maria Cecilia,

This is such a happy and hopeful read and I wish you the very same! Voted UP & AB-- have a wonderful night, mar.


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Maria Cecilia 5 years ago from Philippines Author

Thanks Marcoujor I feel so in love because of them..


cocorao 5 years ago

wow, it's beautiful !


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Maria Cecilia 5 years ago from Philippines Author

Thanks Cocorao.... hope it's not too one sided


cocorao 5 years ago

oh I don't think it's too one sided, it's really interesting to see what could be "that woman" thoughts, thks for sharing :)


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Maria Cecilia 5 years ago from Philippines Author

Thanks Cocorao, which I can make one in "That Man's" point of view


cocorao 5 years ago

can't wait to see "that man's" version ^^ maybe it'll come for his bday ;)


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Maria Cecilia 5 years ago from Philippines Author

Cocorao I will try, I want to make it better that this.


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katyzzz 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

So very touching Maria. A hub well done.


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Maria Cecilia 5 years ago from Philippines Author

Thanks Katyzzz wishing for that to be in reality


Pao 4 years ago

Its so good MarĂ­a Cecilia!!!

I like that point of view


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Maria Cecilia 4 years ago from Philippines Author

Hi Pao thanks for visiting again..


duday 4 years ago

they just said all compliments for you Cecilia. i myself amazed this poem, me also hope for this lovely person to end together. keep up and continue inspiring,,


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Maria Cecilia 4 years ago from Philippines Author

duday thanks for your comments, and yes let's keep on praying for them.

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