Words From A Valentine Rose (limerick)

So florid the words which she chose

When I gave my Valentine rose

Her verse had such power

That angels did cower

As bee in the flower stung nose


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

You never cease to amaze me. Great fun my friend.


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

Reading this, Martin, I did give a gasp,

So happy, my friend, it wasn't a wasp!


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

You always surprise me and bring a smile to my face. Up and funny...


Valleypoet 3 years ago

Oh dear!...think of the money you've saved though....she won't want to go out for a meal looking like that! LOL:-))


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Another awesome and amazing limerick !


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Hilarious - ouch! Now, how to make amends - probably not an option. LOL


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I guess we never know what a flower holds...


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

I love your twists, they are so clever and funny...


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Interesting twists, this was a bumpy ride, but very pleasant.


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

You always provide me with a good chuckle and this is just one more reason to give chocolate instead!


ignugent17 3 years ago

I do hope she is okay. :-)))


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Ouch...Jamie

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