Write me something kind......

Yet how could I ever ask you for that .....
you to write me something kind
And would you write me a kiss full of passion
or pencil a self portrait so fine

Would you write me a simple smile or bring
a storm of tears to my dawn
Where are you when you write...... sitting in bed
in a shaded path.....or .lying by the lawn

Do you write bearing down hard of the pen
bitter anger or sullen cry's
Could you sketch me an orgasm or
paint us into little white lies

Write to me so that I may really
know that I've touched your very soul
Pen my needs in black or blue
or colors bright and bold

That length of this night long and lonely
please write me something kind
I look up in time to see the mail man passing
forgetting me again this time

Amazing isn't it how we search the written words for some inner meaning , some pleasures or even a simple tease . And don't we ever read between the lines ,us writers , if that's truely what we are . Just how much of our lifes meaning does come from the black and white scribbles . From rhyme or song , from a letter or a perfumed note . Who are we really but just blind scribblers searching for pleasured purpose . ............What the hell have I just written ! Make any sense to you ? lol........:-}




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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

It makes perfect sense to me.

Here's something kind for you:

May your days be filled with sunshine

and fine wine filling your glass

as you read the words I've written

while sitting on your ....

May you understand my writing

apologies are at hand

I helped my self to some of your wine

an now I'm unable to stand

May you always know a friend

without a second glance

enjoy this poem I've written

for this is it's only happenstance.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Beckise OH man ! Girl I'm saing this one for keeps !lol....Thank you !.....:-}


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

ha,ha,ha, two great poems in one hub. I love the interplay of hubbers who can relate although we may be thousands of miles apart or right around the corner.

Your poem is great and the musings at the end are just as good. You inspire me me my friend. and I'm sure many others.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Did it ease your mind

writing something kind

and some comments find


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Know that we are near,

Your sweet words we find

This poem to us dear,

Deserving more than kind.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Cleaner my man , My inspiration is here among the others and yourself who put meaning to written lines .I get mine from writers like yourself ! I do like to play with the endings though !Thank you sir!


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Mhattter , My friend thank you for the addition !....:-}


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Ahh Midget ! Thats so nice ! Thank you !


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Ah, what can i say to brighten your day

Hoping your black and white scribbles are here to stay

Sometimes you bring a tear to 'me eye

Other times i laugh until i cry

Your love of the land is so devine

May i say for certain, " You're one-of-a-kind?"


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

It makes perfect sense to me. Whatever comes from the heart and emotions fits perfectly on paper and the message always comes through. Besides it can never be repeated because you are one of a kind an original and that's what makes you special.


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Ahh Always , so to are U!........Heres a Hug !!!


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ahorseback 4 years ago Author

Gypsy and you are the KIndest gypsy I know ! My Hug to you too !


Beth37 3 years ago

I can't really write what Im thinking. I don't think HP would allow it.


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Beth , I believe you could write about anything you like here ! Whats up my new friend ?...:-}


Beth37 3 years ago

It's not appropriate. lets just say this one got my motor going. lol


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

No No No Beth , we want to read your thoughts ! lol.........:-]


Beth37 3 years ago

I believe it went something like this: "mmmm"


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

Now was that so bad Beth.....Hmmmm?


Beth37 3 years ago

I tried to make a winky face, but HP said it was too short.

;)

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